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PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 1:06 pm


Why, hello, everyone!

I'm an up-and-coming writer with TONS of ideas and no real drawing skills. sweatdrop


Well, anyway, I like to be called Miracle, but my real name is Jack Joe Johnson. My cool name is Captain Ninja Dood McAwesome the IIIrd Senior, but Jack is fine. razz

Now, I try all kinds of stories. Lately, I've been writing Yuri/Shoujo-Ai, but I don't do all the dirty stuff. I mean, I only write what's Gaia appropriate. razz

Anyway, I should post a sample, right? This is a sample from my Shoujo-Ai story, The Forest Of Witches, which is 100% original, and written by ME.


Two forests, two women, one destiny. I mean, granted, there HAVE to be two women, seeing as this is a Yuri story, but the two forests are for two different groups: The witches, and the warlocks. Obviously, we’re going to be focusing on the witches, but the warlock forest may make another appearance. Maybe. Well, anyway, that’s not the important thing; the important thing is the two that fell in love.

Every morning, the sun would quietly dawn over the horizon, and the birds would fly onto the perches of people’s windows, singing happy tunes to those who listened. One person, however, never listened, because she never seemed to care. Not about the songs the birds would sing, not the bed covered in warmth, and not the starry night sky that witches thrive on. She came to this village for a sole reason; to create her love potion.

She pulled off the blanket and jumped out of her bed, wearing a long sleeve red shirt and long white pants. She shook her head, waking up from the morning, wiping her eyes and staring at the birds at her window. She walked over, and the birds stared intently at her as she put her hands on the glass. She slowly opened the window, the birds quickly scattering to multiple branches as they stared from a distance. Once again, the birds did not come flying back, and she sighed bitterly. She closed the window, and they quickly jumped back to their previous perch, singing their sugary sweet songs.

She went over to her drawer, pulling out what she would wear today. Today wasn’t any particular day, so she did not think to wear any particular clothing. She wore odd clothing for this part of the world, particularly because it’s a forest, which is both partially dangerous and partially humid. As she started to undress, she looked at her arms and her legs, remembering what had happened to them. Scars, covering her entire body, defined her silence, her hatred, and her beliefs.

She went back into motion, pulling her long pants up, pulling her long sleeved shirt down. Her pants were forest camouflage, which in a forest may possibly be a good idea, but with her shirt and vest, provided an odd amount of clashing colors. Her shirt, covered in arctic camouflage, and her vest, covered in desert camouflage, were both long sleeved, along with her pants, to hide the scars she despised enough to come here. Considering how all the witches in the forest usually only wear either a dress or, depending on the day, in the typical jeans and shirt, she stuck out like a sore thumb… on a hand without any fingers.

She stared at the birds for one last moment, and they stared back at her, and they flew away to gather food for their chicks. She ignored them, and opened the door, walked over to the handrail, and looked downward. The café was open, and all the witches and the warlocks visiting from the other forest came by, eating their muffins and bagels, drinking their soda and their coffee. She walked down the stairs, deciding to avoid the rush of breakfast hounds by going to someone else’s home. The person in question was that of the witch who would help her create her potion.

As she stepped out of the tree that housed the hotel, the grass gave her a comfortable feeling against her feet, the energy from the sun and the mood from the forest gave her an escape from her goal. She sat down, and put on her steel-toed boots, making sure no squirrels left any acorns in there like last time. It always seemed to her that all the animals in the forest were against her. She stood straight up, dusted herself off, and started walking towards the tallest tree in this forest.

She passed by the witches carrying books and the warlocks hitting on the witches who wore less than a dress, passed by the trees with fruit growing out of them and the trees that were too skinny to be a house. One tree, however, she always stopped at when she walked by, and forced herself to look at it. It was the biggest tree in the forest, with fruits of all kinds, cherry blossoms that would make a blind person see life again, and names of lovers written all over it. This tree is sacred, as it was where everyone who married would have a wedding, and their names would be carved into the tree, and they would give gifts to the tree for good fortune. She stared at the tree for a moment, a cherry blossom falling onto her one eye, and she rubbed it off with a sigh. She moved on, paying no mind to the tree as she walked forward.

She finally reached the home of the witch who would help her, the gates outside barring her from entry, and the witch guards staring the girl down. Her dark, dark skin, her bald head and her eyepatch, embedded with a crystal shard, made it impossible to ignore her. As she approached the gate, the guards crossed their spears, denying her entrance. She looked at the one on her right, for that was the only eye she had. The guards did not move, and they gave her a look of discontent.

“Halt!” The one on the right called, lifting her weapon and standing in front of her. “You are close to trespassing on the property of Her Highness and the Princess of this forest! Unless you have official business, we will be forced to make you leave!” As she was talking, the girl they were questioning pulled out a piece of paper that she hid in one of the many pockets in her vest. She handed it to the guard, and she read it.

“This is an official notice: This girl, whom only wishes to be known as Crystal, is to help me in my studies of witchery. Furthermore, if she has successfully performed her duty, she is to be given a love potion created by her student, The Princess Of Witches, Maria S. C. B. Chulip.” The guard gasped, dropping her spear as she finished reading the notice. Crystal took back the writing, pointing to the bottom; an official seal was placed near the princess’ signature, depicting a single Sakura petal. The guard regained herself, quickly going back to her post. “Open the gates!” She called out, as a cling and a clang was heard. The gates slowly opened, and the path appeared before Crystal, blossoms forming in the grass, leading to the doorstep.

“I am extremely sorry, and I apologize for holding you up, Ms. Crystal.” The guard stated, standing upright as she previously was. “The princess is inside! She is usually in the top of the tower, so she may have seen you by now.” Crystal walked by as the guard finished her sentence, acting as if nothing happened. The petals below her feet flew up with every step, and they spread a gentle smell throughout the gate area. As she reached the door the flowers receded, and the gate closed itself. Crystal opened the door, and as she closed it, she felt a force push against her, and the door was flung back open as she rolled out the door, landing on her back.

“HELLO!” The girl on top of Crystal stated in a loud voice, practically causing the guards to jump over the gate. “I’m Princess Chulip! You’re who I’m helping, ain’tcha?” Maria asked, her face practically an inch in front of Crystals. Her hair was never cut, so it was tied up in one long, red-hued wrap, which could be seen through to her dark blue hair. Her hair was so long, in fact, that it almost reached the ground, stopping barely at her ankles. Her outfit was quite an expensive dress, covered in jewelry and multiple types of flowers, mostly roses and cherry blossoms. She hovered over Crystal, waiting for a response.

“… Yes.” Crystal replied, practically forcing herself to speak. “My name is Crystal. I have come to the Forest of Witches specifically to create a love potion. I had no idea, however, that I would get the honor of the Princess of Witches to be the creator of said potion.” Crystal closed her eye, and looked downward, as if she were bowing. “I am extremely grateful, Princess.” With that, Crystal looked back up, staring at the Princess in the face. “I will do whatever it takes to create that potion.”

Maria blinked for a moment, her green eyes full of surprise at the response.“… Eesh, you’re too wound up.” Maria sighed, standing back up, backing away from Crystal so she could stand back up. “I mean, I friggin’ TACKLED you, and you didn’t even flinch!” As Crystal dusted herself off, Maria sounded like she was actually complaining about how Crystal was acting when she was plowed over. “Anyway, uh… We should talk inside. The little pervert warlocks hang out and watch me from a distance.” Maria pointed outside the gate, a few warlocks staring at the Princess intently.

Well, before we go on, as The Author, I’d like to say a few things to break up the Shoujo-Ai. First, I’m pretty sure I’d be in that crowd of warlocks, seeing as Yuri/Shoujo-Ai is a passion of mine. Thank GOD the Internet provides. Second, I hate Borders not carrying any Yuri, and always have Yaoi up for grabs. NOT Shounen-Ai. YAOI. It hurts to look at, sometimes. Third, ---

“SHUT UP!” Maria proclaimed, stepping on The Author as he hid behind a couch inside her home. “You’re ruining the seriousness and my awesomeness! I mean, I let you slip with the first paragraph because I wasn’t in yet, but this is ridiculous! WAIT UNTIL YOU’RE POPULAR BEFORE YOU COMPLAIN!” Maria grabbed The Author, and threw him out an open window.

“I REGRET NOTHIIIIIIIIIIIiiiiiiii…” The Author screamed before a loud thud was heard. Crystal looked out the window, wondering exactly what just happened. She didn’t like asking questions, or talking when she doesn’t have to, but this was one of those times that she regrets life. A Yuri-obsessed, Shounen loving anime otaku just invaded Maria’s home, and she didn’t do anything except throw him out of a window?

“Best not to ask too much.” Maria sighed, closing the window. “That guy? He’s writing my life story. He’s an awesome writer, but good GOD does he break the fourth wall too much.” She shook her head, shrugging as she walked towards her throne in her room. “He makes it seem like we’re some lame Monty Python rip-off. Come to think of it, I haven’t watched Flying Circus in awhile…” Maria sat down, now wondering off on her own accord.

Crystal walked up to the throne, and kneeled before Maria, her head hanging low as she spoke. “Princess Of The Witch Forest, Maria S. C. B. Chulip, I am eternally grateful for granting me the honor of your help.” Crystal looked up, still in her kneeling position. Her eyepatch glistened in the light from the window, and Crystal covered her left eye, the patched one. “However, I do not wish to be a burden, with my missing eye and my crushed spirit. If I cause any problems, no matter how slight, let me know immediately.”

Maria stared at Crystal, remembering what she had read up on her. Her history, her love, her falter, and her reason for her love potion. She chuckled, signaling for Crystal to stand up. “I can tell you right now, most of my problems stem from The Author. You’re helping me create the most difficult of potions, so I owe you a far greater deal of debt than you me.” As Crystal stood, Maria stood up and walked over to Crystal.

Crystal pulled out a recipe list and a map of where the ingredients were located. “I have researched the general area of the forest for an idea of where the ingredients are. However, in order to be able to use those ingredients successfully, only one person may be able to pick the recipe, and no one else may touch it.” Maria had raised her eyebrows at the list. She was actually quite surprised at how much Crystal had researched. Even Maria didn’t know everything Crystal managed to find out.

“Wicked… This is Boss.” Maria smirked, looking back at Crystal. “Alright, than! Tomorrow, we’ll head out into the forest to begin our expedition!” Maria filed the paper away in her white dress, stuffing it in a hidden pocket. “Today, we’ll prepare for whatever may come up! And, if by some amazing chance we actually FIND everything, you will get one love potion, provided by the badass Princess Of The Witches, Maria something-or-other ME!” It was obvious, at this point, Maria did not have the best grasp of speeches.

Maria raised her fist at Crystal. Her arm stretched out, and it was about three feet away from Crystal. Crystal curiously looked at her, Crystal's eye completely covered in black. Crystal raised her fist as well, holding it in front of Maria’s. Crystal and Maria fist-tapped each other, the Princesses equivalent to a handshake. This, unknowingly to the both of them, would be the beginning of their relationship. The beginning, so to speak, of their revelations.



Well, anyway, the reason I like same-gender love is because the lovers can overcome the obstacles associated with it. When divorce is what is usually the answer to broken love, when two people, no matter what gender, who love each other to the point of giving up everything for one another, it should be encouraged, until the day they die.


Meh, whatever. I ain't forcing opinions down anyways throats, I hope.


So, any requests?

I usually do adventure/humor stories, but I'm willing to try new styles. I've been trying to write a story with no plot, as in a story where it follows the adventures of some everyday, normal people with no over-arching, fifty chapter narrative about saving the world. Those annoy me.

I'll post the next chapter if people really want it. xp
PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:55 pm


PROFILES:


Name: Crystal
Age: Appears to be 21. Real age? No real info.
Gender: Female
Height: 7’00
Weight: 200 Pounds
Appearance: An ebony (brown skin color, or African American if you need a location) skinned women that stands at an astounding seven feet. She is bald, and has no hair anywhere on her body, public or otherwise. She has an eyepatch over her right eye that has a diamond-shaped crystal embedded into it. Her one good eye, her left eye, changes colors depending on the shade. If she’s in the sunlight, it’s a completely dark black. If she’s in the shade or it’s night, her eye is a milky white. She has no pupil or iris, so her eye is one plain color. Her eye is actually a guard for a small machine inside, a small camera that displays an image to her right eye. It has multiple options, some of which she herself has not discovered yet. The eye moves into her upper skin above her left eye, so it is unnoticeable except for the fact that the camera is out. Her regular eye is a bright blue color.
Clothing: She regularly wears a pair of Forest-Camo long cargo-jean pants, an Ice (or snow, or blizzard)-Camo long sleeve shirt and a Desert-Camo vest. The pants and the vest have many, many pockets located on almost every surface, each one slightly different from another. Some have buttons, others have zippers, some have both, some have neither, and some even have pockets WITHIN the pockets. Her shoes are plain steel-toe boots, with the metal on the outside, always buffered to an extremely high shine.
Personality: Usually silent, rarely making so much as a cough or a sneeze. She does not like talking except when she points out the flaws of the people she faces, or if she muses about life and death. She smokes, although she doesn’t do it if other people don’t want her to. She is capable of laughing, smiling and being friendly, although she is usually caught off-guard when that happens. She is also gay, which relates quite well to her back-story…
History: Will go into detail later…
Notes: She cannot die. She has tried many times, over the uncounted amount of time she’s existed, but she has never succeeded. She seeks for a way to die, usually via whatever means necessary.
Pictures of her: User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. (NOTE: I used to want pink lips on her. Now, not so much. This was AFTER Goggles did this, though, so it's fine. Also, she has no iris or pupil, so that little white shouldn't be there. Of course, I'm nitpicking at free artwork, so I'm a little bit of a b*****d.)
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. (NOTE: The diamond-shaped crystal should be in the center, and should be about two times larger. Also, I'm still a b*****d!)

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Name: Miracle
Age: None known
Height: 6’0
Appearance: A skeleton, covered in bloody bandages from head to toe, multiple layers. He is constantly bleeding, unable to stop, and he must change these bandages constantly. The bandages cover everything except his eye sockets, the area between the fingers and toes, the mouth and the nose. Imagine it more as a second layer of the skeleton instead of a wrapping.
Weight: Maybe around 250 pounds?
Clothing: A plain white hoodie and black jeans. The hoodie has long sleeves and a large hood to cover his face, while he keeps his arms and hands inside his sleeves due to their length. It also has no zipper. His jeans are long and black, and they contain no pockets. The pants are long enough to hide his legs, and slightly drag along the ground. He sometimes trips on them. He wears no shoes or socks.
Personality: Completely silent and unable to speak, he follows Crystal as she travels the world. He has many different tasks to perform, but he is currently only tailing Crystal. She has learned to ignore him, but he refuses to stop following, no matter where she goes or what she does. He fights with a loose, breakdance-ish style.
History: Miracle is what some people may consider God. He is relentless, unkillable and can do things most people would never ever dare to guess. It is highly likely that he was a being of significant importance before he began following Crystal, but he has followed her for so long, no one is certain anymore.
Notes: He helps some and hurts others. Those who are observant may call him a ‘balancer:’ one who keeps everything in check and makes sure things don’t become unfair or out of hand. He also keeps his clothing on almost every waking moment except absolutely necessary.

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Name: Norino
Age: 21
Height: 5’6
Appearance: An anthromorphic white furred cat. She has a pink nose and gray eyes. She has no tail, and black prints on her paws.
Clothing: She changes them constantly, but she usually just wears simplistic clothing with odd phrases, such as “Meow ReMix” and “Godless Wonder.”
Personality: Easily scared or frightened, she tends to stay near Crystal. Miracle follows them both closely, but Norino sticks to Crystal far more than Miracle does. Norino loves her, and trying to convince Crystal to be more open, but other than that, she tries to keep Crystal happy and herself from being a ‘scaredy-cat.’
History: Norino was saved by Crystal when some humans burned down her village in the forest to drive out the Neko’s for more space. From there on, Norino has followed Crystal extremely closely.
Notes: When Crystal is not around, she becomes incredibly frenzied. Miracle stays to keep her in check, but that doesn’t stop her from being scared.

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Name: Shanty Miran Onsir
Age: 25
Height: 5’9
Appearance: A Caucasian skinned girl who always comes prepared. She has two katana at her hips at all times, and multiple guns and holsters all over her. She has slightly longer nails than most, and she wears sneakers with triple-tied knots. Her face is almost always either scowling or slyly smirking, with constantly moving red eyes and long brown hair that reaches to her rump.
Clothing: She wears pants that reach to her kneecaps and a shirt that reaches to her elbow. She wears a belt with two holsters on each side and one holster in front of her, each containing a type of handgun. She has a machine gun and a shotgun on her back, and both her pants and shirt are always color coded.
Personality: Vulgar, straight forward, blunt and usually offensive, Shanty says what she feels like and does what she wants, especially if money is involved. She would literally kill her mother for money, which she did. She spends the money almost immediately, so she is always seeking the next payday.
History: A bounty hunter who seeks riches, she found a bounty for Crystal worth one trillion bling (the currency of the place this takes place in). As soon as she heard this, she went after Crystal, and has never let up, even to this day.
Notes: She is always trying to pet Norino, and Miracle ignores her completely. Crystal never attacks her unless provoked, but no matter how many times Shanty attacks her, she has never won. Not once.

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Name: Shavoy Yenowal (Yee-know-all)
Age: 117
Height: 5'10
Weight: 400 pounds
Appearance: A turtle anthropomorphic male, Shavoy is a man with simple tastes. He has tan green skin, a light brown shell and two black pupils in his eyes. He always wears a Hawaiian print shirt and short pants (jeans or otherwise), and he has dreadlocks that reach slightly past the bottom of his head and a stubby goatee that is a quarter of an inch long. He has multiple rainbow-colored Jamaican hats, but he doesn't have a specific favorite. He usually has a pair of sunglasses on, but he always has a cigar in his mouth. It's to keep him warm, due to the fact that he's cold-blooded. He's actually a young adult within his species, so he's not old in the slightest.
Personality: Completely laid back and never having even a hint of anger or sadness in his voice, Shavoy takes life in small steps. He smokes all the time, only stopping when he is absolutely forced to, such as when in water or sleeping, or when it's against the law. He speaks in a Jamaican accent and he is Rastafarian. He avoids any sort of violence, and he loves dancing. He can get along with almost everyone.
History: (Haven't thought of one, yet...)
Notes: In one of my stories, he's the owner of a Jamaican shop with trinkets and items pertaining to his religion and his homeland. He's VERY interested in the past or in things such as necklaces or bracelets, even though he usually does not wear any.

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Name: Eas Ceano
Age: 27
Height: 5'8
Weight: 150 Pounds
Appeareance: Eas is a female anthropomorphic platypus. She usually wears a white dojo outfit. This is to represent her extremely strict training as a blackbelt. She sometimes wears a headband, but not often. She has spurs on the back of her arms and legs which contain deadly amounts of poison, which is why she keeps them wrapped. One thing to note, however, is that only male platypus's (platypi?) have poisonous spurs. She actually got a sex change when she turned 21.
Personality: She only believes in protecting everyone. She refuses to back down from any challenge, and when there is danger, she does her best to protect everyone. Often ridiculed for her body, she ignores them and continues on.
History: She left home as soon as she turned 21 and graduated from college. She obtained a degree in sociology and psychiatry, both of which she uses to calm people down and talk people out of performing evil acts. Her mother disowned her, but her father loves her as much as he did when he first laid eyes on her as a baby.
Notes: While the poison is deadly, she can control the flow of it, thus giving only enough to make someone collapse. It takes around an hour for her to regenerate it.

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Name: Plano von Gujenteim (guh-jen-time)
Age: 33
Height: 5'11
Weight: 500 pounds (looks about 150)
Appearance: Plano usually wears an opened button-down shirt or vest that reaches down past his legs, dragging behind his jeans. He always leaves the front open to reveal his torso, specifically for the scars. He always wears blood red colored clothing, and if it isn't wearing red, he'll make it red shortly. He has a blood red pompadour, which reaches a foot in front of him. He has red eyes that are usually covered by rose-tinted sunglasses, and he smiles as if he's planning something. He hides knives in his pockets. He has scars all across his body, particularly one that's on the middle of his neck that's a quarter inch tall, going from left to right. He has an Asian skin tone, but his eyes are Caucasian.
Personality: Manipulative, energetic, and insane, Plano is the kind of person who thinks after the obstacle is out of the way. He is near suicidal in terms of fighting tactics. He loves to incite anger, cause violence, and generally be a b*****d. He's bisexual, preferring women except for Miracle. He has the ability to manipulate his own blood, which is why he's after Miracle; Miracle can't stop bleeding, so his blood must be at least somewhat interesting. He likes torture, bondage, and killing. He wants Miracle as a plaything, as well.
History: After failing to die after committing suicide by slicing his own neck open, Plano went insane with guilt, anger, sorrow, and worthlessness. If no one accepted him alive, and no one accepted him dead, then he decided to bend life to his will. The blood from his neck seeped back in, crawling up his body, and it caused him to smile. He now only smiles when killing, making as much of a bloody mess as possible.
Notes: He's interested in both Miracle and Crystal, but Miracle makes him nearly swoon.

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Name: Ariana Uron Kiran
Age: 24
Height: 2'8
Weight: 70 pounds
Appearance: Bound to a wheelchair, Ariana usually wears a skirt and a tank top or a button down short sleeve shirt. She has no arms or legs, so she sees no point in wearing long clothing. The wheelchair is usually nothing fancy, although she usually likes a pillow to sit on. She has short, spiky, dark purple hair and bright pink eyes. She usually seems to have a nice smile, but the moment someone opens their mouth to her and she doesn't like it, she'll curse so bad that her servant, Maxwell, might push her away in the wheelchair. She is Caucasian, with an extremely slight tan.
Personality: Irritated, agitated, and angry, Ariana will more than likely irritate anyone she comes across. The only reason she gets away with it most of the time is because she's stuck in a wheelchair. However, she can easily fight back, due to her psychic abilities. She has the power to manipulate objects, control someone if they have a weak will or resolve, and the ability to create illusions to distract the enemy. She loves to taunt, often making someone attack her before she even begins to use her abilities. She doesn't particularly enjoy fighting, but when someone attacks her, she enjoys the feeling of victory, proclaiming it loudly.
History: Ariana was born without appendages, so she was put into an orphanage fairly quickly. Since she was technically disabled, she got a service dog in the form of Maxwell, a Great Dane, who protected her and served her. She began using her abilities relatively early, but Maxwell kept it secret, his loyalty far outweighing everything else. Only Ariana and Maxwell have ever seen her use these abilities. After leaving the orphanage, she began living off her welfare and Maxwell's job as a dance club bouncer to not need to work.
Notes: She spends all day looking up child pornography on the Internet. Maxwell's always running virus checks and deleting the data, but Ariana is addicted to it.
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Name: Maxwell
Age: 60 (in Dog years. However, his specific anthropomorphic genetics give him a much longer lifespan than the average canine.)
Height: 6'4
Weight: 250, mostly muscle.
Appearance: Always clad in a black business suit and tie, Maxwell, always tries to look like a businessperson. He is a Great Dane with pointed ears, gray fur and black paws. He wears black sunglasses and the inside of both of his ears have the word 'MAX' tattooed on them in plain sight. His eyes are black, although he rarely takes his sunglasses off.
Personality: He tries to remain calm, but the moment he thinks something is going wrong, he bares his teeth and lets his claws out. He protects Mariana as much as he can, even though he knows he doesn't have to. He acts like he is always conducting business, and he never takes time off. He has no hobbies to speak of, which irritates Mariana, because whenever Maxwell isn't around, she gets to look up porn.
History: Born in a litter that was kept in a kennel, Maxwell was quickly removed within a month of his birth. He never met his family, and doesn't care to. He was trained as a service dog for an extremely disabled girl, known as Mariana. The company behind it trained him in hopes of being able to prove to investors that the company is worth being invested in, but the plan quickly went downhill when Maxwell stated "I was trained to protect a girl, not to talk to you all. You are keeping me from my job. Good day." and left the meeting. The businessmen, irritated, left in a hurry, and the company was closed down. Maxwell is still listed as an assistance dog, but without the company, the title is meaningless. He went to the orphanage and met Mariana when she was 5. He has always taken care of her, even though she curses at him as much as anyone else. When they left, he quickly got an apartment with the money he had been saving, and found a job as a bouncer at a nightclub shortly afterwords. He has been known to be violent when patrons do not listen to him (especially in relation to Mariana when he is not working), but nothing he's done has ever resulted in permanent damage.
Notes: He spends his free time cleaning the apartment he lives in with Mariana and making himself look good. He isn't narcissistic, but he will make sure his nails are smoothed, his teeth are clean, his breath smells nice, and such things like that. He never scolds Mariana, but he will always scan the computer and delete whatever he finds whenever she is asleep.

Blood_Miracle


Orielle
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 3:24 pm


Welcome to the guild! It's great to have a writer here as well, mostly this place is filled by painters. I really like the beginning of your story, all though your promise of no plot scares me. I hope you have a some brilliant personal emotional developments planned. xp

I'd like to request something, I like shounen-ai stories. But I'll have to think for a moment about what I'd want.. whee
PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 3:30 pm


Oh, no, this has a plot, no worries!

I mean, like, uh... Azumanga Daioh. Just a bunch of normal girls with no real plans except to hang out, go to school, have some fun and be friends. Something like that.

Well, anyway, I have a couple ideas for shonen-ai, but when you have an idea, let me know, 'kay? 3nodding

Blood_Miracle


Orielle
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 3:34 pm


Never heard of it, but I guess I understand what you mean. smile

An I will, thanks! Don't worry, I'll give you plenty of artistic freedom, it would just be fun to request a story with certain chararcters.. We could even do a trade if you want, I prefer drawing original characters to avatars.. wink
PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 3:41 pm


OHOHOH!

I didn’t know that! Oh boy oh boy!

Well, I have two characters I may want you to draw for a story idea I have. They’re definitely slightly odd, but there’s a reason for it.

Although, I’m not telling you what they look like unless I, uh, get a story to write. sweatdrop

Blood_Miracle


Orielle
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:45 am


Ok, there is this story I've been wanting to write myself, except I enjoying drawing the characters much more. It's based on Nordic folklore and the Huldrefolk. (More about them can be found here, look for the Norwegian hulder). And I made up a character when I was younger called Ylva (who looks like this - warning: some nudity). I don't know if you like projects that involve some research, but if you don't I would really like to request involving Ylva and the world of the Huldrefolk. And I wouldn't mind if it involved a bit shoujo-ai. wink In return I can draw/paint one of your characters, I have loads of examples in my thread in this guild if you want to see them first.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:35 am


Oy, research isn't a problem. The problem may be deciding what to use from the research. sweatdrop

No worries, though. This seems good. I like folklore and old stories and creatures people may have forgotten about.

I'll get right on it, ma'am! scream

I'm reading the article you posted. It doesn't look too hard.

Now, anything specific you want? Like, multiple chapters, or a one-shot? Any other characters besides that?

Oh, yeah, what's the year, or maybe the season? That may be important for the setting. sweatdrop

Blood_Miracle


Orielle
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:52 pm


I think I'd prefer spring/summer, as the Huldrefolk mostly stay in the underworld during the winter I think.. Other than that, no preferences, it's all up to you. I just love reading new takes on ancient characters. smile

What would you like?
PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 5:03 pm


Ah, spring, that’s always a great time for love. blaugh

Well, I have no objections. I’ll probably try and make it modern day, but she’ll have a classical feel about her while the person interested is more of a modern, fairy-tales-are-child-things kinda person.

Since you’re the only one who’s asked, I’ll make it multiple chapters. Five sound good, ma’am?

Well, I ain’t asking ‘cause I’m starting anyway. heart

Don’t give me any sort of art until I finish! I refuse to accept anything unless I deserve it! scream

Blood_Miracle


Orielle
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:13 am


Five sounds excellent! eek heart

And okay, if you say so.. xp
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 1:22 pm


Well, yeah, your the first one to reply to this three-week old thread, so this is thanks. blaugh

Besides, your artwork is worth a book, in and of itself. sweatdrop

Anyway, here's a three-paragrapgh opening. Tell me if this looks good for you so far, as I have only introduced the main character and not Ylva. sweatdrop


(Author’s Note: This entire story is based in Norway. Therefore, since I am from the United States, I am not entirely sure how much I have written is actually true. I only checked Wikipedia if I wasn’t sure, and Wikipedia is not a one-hundred percent true source for almost anything. If I have, in any way, offended or stated something wrong in this story that is incorrect subject matter for the area, I apologize. However, I am willing to try and change parts of the story, but I am not willing to change anything that isn’t directly related to Norway, or myths surrounding Norway. As a final note, the characters are supposed to speaking Norwegian, even though they are speaking in English. It’s easier for me to write in my own language, so it is obviously going to not be the correct language. Any complaint’s, send me a PM, please.)


The forest was teeming with life on this sun-drenched day of spring. The tree’s swayed their branches with the breeze that flowed throughout the land, rustling their leaves and occasionally allowing the sun to greet their overgrown roots. The animals were widespread, with birds chirping above and squirrels rummaging below. The only noise which was unfamiliar, however, was the noise of feet crumpling leaves and mumblings of a woman who had no idea where she was going.

“Geez, this forest is too big…” She sighed, staring upwards at the sunlight grazing her face. She was wearing a bright blue skull cap with a few buttons attached to it and a dark green hoodie, with long dark blue jeans with dozens of pockets located all over. The spring may have come, but it has only just begun, and it was still cold enough to warrant wearing long sleeved clothing. She exhaled a sigh, a small bit of fog coming from her breath, and kept moving forward, rustling more leaves as the birds looked down on her.

“I have to see what could have hurt him, though. This forest is too large to NOT have some possible way of causing someone permanent pain…” She thought to herself, remembering why she was out here in the first place. She paced on, the beauty of the forest mostly ignored by her travelling eyes, colored in with two grey pupils. She tugged on her backpack, straightening it out so it wouldn’t accidently open, and cleared the bushes and branches out of her way.


The warning is because I've never written about anything outside of American culture, so I'm not entirely sure if I'll get everything about it correct. Let me know If I mess up, 'kay? Thank you! sweatdrop heart

Blood_Miracle


Orielle
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 7:30 am


It looks good so far! I'm looking forward to see what happens next.. smile

For the sake of inspiration, here are some photographs of typical mid-Norway landscapes, the kind of environment they would probably live in. (No, I'm not advertising Norway, but at least for me it helps with some kind of image about the area where it's taking place...) whee

http://rooze.deviantart.com/art/road-to-norway-67691285
http://art-geeks.deviantart.com/art/norway-68469614
http://norwegianfolktales.deviantart.com/art/Norway-6-70383862
http://saakaldt-foto.deviantart.com/art/Autumn-66345878
http://palodelincak.deviantart.com/art/norway-2007-1-67391106
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:14 pm


Whoa...

It looks amazing. Truly.

I am now inspired to try my hardest with your approval! scream

Blood_Miracle


Blood_Miracle

PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:14 pm


(Author’s Note: This entire story is based in Norway. Therefore, since I am from the United States, I am not entirely sure how much I have written is actually true. I only checked Wikipedia if I wasn’t sure, and Wikipedia is not a one-hundred percent true source for almost anything. If I have, in any way, offended or stated something wrong in this story that is incorrect subject matter for the area, I apologize. However, I am willing to try and change parts of the story, but I am not willing to change anything that isn’t directly related to Norway, or myths surrounding Norway. As a final note, the characters are supposed to speaking Norwegian, even though they are speaking in English. It’s easier for me to write in my own language, so it is obviously going to not be the correct language. Any complaint’s, send me a PM, please.)


The forest was teeming with life on this sun-drenched day of spring. The tree’s swayed their branches with the breeze that flowed throughout the land, rustling their leaves and occasionally allowing the sun to greet their overgrown roots. The animals were widespread, with birds chirping above and squirrels rummaging below. The only noise which was unfamiliar, however, was the noise of feet crumpling leaves and mumblings of a woman who had no idea where she was going.

“Geez, this forest is too big…” She sighed, staring upwards at the sunlight grazing her face. She was wearing a bright blue skull cap with a few buttons attached to it and a dark green hoodie, with long dark blue jeans with dozens of pockets located all over. The spring may have come, but it has only just begun, and it was still cold enough to warrant wearing long sleeved clothing. She exhaled a sigh, a small bit of fog coming from her breath, and kept moving forward, rustling more leaves as the birds looked down on her.

“I have to see what could have hurt him, though. This forest is too large to NOT have some possible way of causing someone permanent pain…” She thought to herself, remembering why she was out here in the first place. She paced on, the beauty of the forest mostly ignored by her travelling eyes, colored in with two grey pupils. She tugged on her backpack, straightening it out so it wouldn’t accidently open, and cleared the bushes and branches out of her way.

She slowed herself, realizing she was suddenly starting to tire out. She raised her right arm up to her face, looking at the watch on her wrist. “Man, it’s already been about six hours…” She was breathless as she said that, wondering how she did not become hungry already. She slowly leaned against a tree, sliding downward into a slump of sorts, with her legs bent and her head slightly tucked into her legs. She pulled off her backpack, putting it in between her now separated legs. She unzipped it, and began scrounging inside for something to eat.

She pulled out her hand from the backpack, a box of Pocky in her grip. This was a food that would force her to become happy, as it was imported, directly from Japan, and in the flavor of strawberry. Carefully dipped biscuit sticks were covered in frosting, and it was so sugary sweet that it could cause the most sour of men to giggle uncontrollably. Wait, did I just use two sentences to describe what could be the greatest candy in the universe? Whatever, let’s continue.

She slowly ripped off the tab that held the opening and the box itself together, and disposed of it by putting it back in her backpack, as she did not want the body of an animal on her hands. She pulled on the wrapping, slowly tearing it open, praying she would not damage the delicate candy like she did last time. As the wrapper crinkled and squeaked as she started to finally open the top of it, she heard the crunching of leaves and the sounds of humming.

She halted her progress on the wrapper and glanced upward at where the noise was coming from. She almost lost her grip on her Pocky, staring in awe at the woman in the distance. The first thing she noticed was the woman’s body: It was flawless, with the curves of her hips and her soft legs defining her walk with an aura of both peace and power surrounding her. Her orange hair went down to her thighs, flowing behind her as if it were an entity all its own. She quickly stood up, hoping to not upset or disturb the girl walking towards her, for fear that she may steal her supplies.

As the girl in the distance became more and more apparent, she realized something. She gasped, dropping her Pocky next to her backpack by mistake. This girl walking towards her was completely naked. Although this was a shock to her, there was something even more surprising than that. This girl had the tail of a cow, with the tip of it dipped in brown fur. Her mind raced with thoughts, wondering exactly who this girl could possibly be.

“Excuse me, but I have never seen you within this forest before.” She quickly snapped back to reality, with the girl she wondered so much about within a few feet from her. She got a quick look at her face before she pulled back, noticing freckles on the girls cheeks. The girl quickly stepped backward, as if she knew this would happen if she got too close. Her tail waved vigorously, almost whacking herself in the face.

“Wait, wait!” She called out, holding out her hands to the cow-tailed mistress. “I come in peace! I didn’t mean to react like that!” Her back was to the tree, staring back at the girls green eyes. The girl stared back for a few moments before straightening herself, calming down and no longer swinging her tail. She tried to keep staring upward, hoping not to lower her line of sight and get kicked in the face.

“My name is Ida. I come from a village not too far from here, and I am searching for someone, or something, within this forest.” She turned away quickly as she searched within her backpack, taking out a newspaper article she had kept with her. “My brother, Joachim, went blind after coming back from this forest, bleeding from the eyes, a year ago. I’m trying to find out why.” Ida opened up the article, pointing to the picture near the side with her brother in a hospital bed, his face, along with the pillows, covered in blood.

The girl scanned over the picture, her eyes giving a slight glint of anger as she examined it closer. She glanced back up at Ida, crossing her arms in front of her chest. “I cannot believe someone could be hurt so badly here. The animals are peaceful, and the forestry is not so outgrown as to cause someone to fall.” She sighed heavily, as if she were sad for the forest, or for the hospitalized brother.

Ida gloomed slightly, forcing the newspaper back into her backpack. She sat down against the tree, now even more worn out from the shock this girl provided. “Um…” She stammered, wondering what to ask. “Who exactly… Who exactly are you?” Ida looked up, then quickly looked down, trying to avoid embarrassment. She had a feeling, in the pit of her gut, that she needed to be VERY careful with what she said.

The girl looked downward at Ida, who was blushing completely red from trying to not look up. “My name Is Ylva.” She stated with a hint of frustration in her voice from looking at the article. “I live in this forest. People occasionally see me, and I believe a few of them say I am from…” She paused, trying to remember the correct word. “… Folklore.”

Ida thought deeply for a moment, trying to remember if there were any stories she would remember involving a creature such as this, with a cow tail and a human’s body. She snapped, suddenly recalling an old story her grandmother told her. “Wait!” She stood straight up, looking straight at Ylva. “You’re a Huldre!?” She practically demanded an answer with the tone she was speaking in, causing the girl to take a step backward. Ida quickly regained herself, her arms upward against her face, hoping she did not hurt the girl.

After a pause, the girl responded. “Yes, I believe I am called a Huldre. I think I may be the only one around here though, as most, if not all, of the others have either died or leaved the Forest long ago.” She sighed, shaking her head as she realized, as she has before, that she may be the only one of her kind. Ida looked down once again, hoping she did not upset the Huldre. “However, I seem to get along with this forest quite well, so I do not seem to require another Huldrefolk to accompany me as of yet.” She smiled, recovering from the slight gloom the previous situation had.

Ida thought for a moment, looking back at the watch on her arm. “Whoa, it’s almost four. I gotta start heading back or my parents may get mad at me.” Ida lifted up her backpack, picking up the Pocky at her feet while doing so. “Uh, thank you for talking to me, but I have to head back to my home before the sun sets…” Ida handed the girl the Pocky, holding it out with her hand. “If I may inquire, what is your name?”

The girl looked down at the opened wrapping, with the small bit of pink frosting showing. She slowly lifted it out of Ida’s hands, examining it with precaution. “Thank you for this offering.” She bowed on one knee, truly thankful that she received a gift. She stood back up, Ida giving a slight hint of confusion. Ylva tilted her head, not sure what was wrong.

“A, uh, simple thank you is fine. Really, I don’t want to seem like an important person or anything…” Ida gave a slight laugh, turning around and heading back towards where she was coming from. “I’ll come back to visit you, don’t worry! I’ll bring more of that delightful food I just gave you, trust me!” Ida slowly made it out of view, the sun beginning to darken in the distance. Ylva simply stared at the wrapping, not sure what it would taste like.



HOLY FREAKING CRAP. I finally completed the first chapter.

Sorry it took so long. I got sick halfway through, so it was hard to work on it. sweatdrop

ANYWAY, I'll start chapter two soon. Tell me what you think of this, please. sweatdrop
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