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Which looks best?
  #1
  #2
  #3
  None of the above
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pot kettle black

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:13 pm


#1
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#2
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#3
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Originally in paint pens and then messed with a bit in photoshop
I wanted a few opinions on which looks best and what I could do in the future to improve

Thanks smile
PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:03 am


you need to organize your linework so it conveys form.. not just on the squashes, and reconsider your color extension throughout all the pieces. color extension is how much of every color you have in a piece like on a pie chart. also, it looks like you drew one picture in photoshop and then applied just a single filter over it... nothing else. Its kinda trite. I'd avoid doing this in the future. photoshop is cool for somethings.. but more often than not you want to avoid filters like the plague.

kierkegaard01001


pot kettle black

PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 6:27 pm


yeah filters generally uglify a piece but I figured they had their place. apparently this is not it
the second one has no filter
thanks for your input
PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:14 am


yeah #2 is best and i also agree about filters....

i think if you want to give it a different look to make it look like a completely diff piece with the same image you could still change it in PS but just not with filters..... or if you do use filters change it mostly with some of the other tools first/as well
that way its more hand altered and it will just look better if you twiddle around yourself smile

inktvis

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