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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:10 pm
Into The Darkness Once More -NaruXSasu this fan fic is sad and kinda short . funny story ! i let ma friend read this in 3rd periond and she started bawling, and didnt stop till the end of fourth period.(she read it a few times....) well lets begin ! NaruXSasu- Light-very sad
Into The Darkness Once More
Naruto flung himself on to the ground and gripped the floor beneath him.
"No!" He cried out"You cant! Not after all we've been through!" Tears welled in his eyes and began to fall down his cheeks.
Sasuke alked past Naruto not even giving him so much as a passing glance."I can't do this anymore, I'm done." he stated coldly.
Naruto pounded his fists on the ground and despratley atempted to restrain his tears."I don't want to be alone sasuke !" his sobs grew louder as his emotions began to take hold." I thought....I thought you...." Naruto held his face in his hands, emotionaly disenagrating.
Sasuke turned slightly as naruto reached out and grabbed his leg " i did , but the feeling grew trite, and our relationship became worthless."
Naruto stifled a cry as his heart sank into the depths of his body. He rolled into a ball on the cold floor beneath Sasuke.
"when we first met i thought of you as just another shinobi,but eventualy we became friends, then lovers...I never thought i'd feel so strongly for you ...."
Sasuke frowned."Your point?"he asked as he ripped his foot from Naruto's desprate grasp.
Naruto looked up" I lived in utter darkness before we met. I was alone , afraid, rejected,and lived only for myslef." naruto paused to wipe the tears from his face."you , sasuke, taught me to live, to love. You sasuke brought me out of that darkness, that hate of the world and every thing on it. You ,Sasuke, saved me."
Sasuke looked away." that still dosen't change the fact that this relationship was over before it began.
Sasuke turned around and headed towards the door.
Naruto jumped up and wrapped his arms around Sasuke's warm body."sasuke, please,I need you " Naruto whispered in to his ear.
Sasuke pulled Naruto close and held him.'I'll never forget the times we've had together , but we need to face the fact that it's over between us. I'll miss you , and i'll never forget you, Naruto.
Slowly Sasuke lifted naruto's chin and kissed him gentley.His warm lips glided over naruto's.Naruto smiled he knew this was the end.
"Farewell." Sasuke whispered as naruto fell from his arms and into the darkness once more.
~Owari~
so how was it ? sweatdrop tell me plz..... heart you know you wanna!
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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:54 pm
i think itz really good. itz kind of sad, but still good. you should write another one.
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 4:15 pm
crying crying crying WAAHHH!!!!!!!!!! I-It's so sad! *Sniff* But it's reaaaally good! crying crying crying Please write more. (I'm not normally THIS emotional, but I'm listening to "Without You" from RENT at the same time. crying ) Can you read my fan-fic and tell me how it is??? You're really good, btw! biggrin
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:45 pm
It's very good but so sad!
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Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 10:56 am
thanks! *bows* i'll try to update another soon and hopefully it'll be one of my more colorful (cough cough) ones. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:15 am
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:40 am
crying I HATE IT WHEN NARUTO CRYS!!! crying crying sasukes soo evil, seriously i got 1/4 of the way through and stopped, I couldnt read any more sweatdrop your amazing, keep it up
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:19 pm
its really sad. and it was writen very well. ninja
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 12:46 pm
Asuka_Mesheko crying I HATE IT WHEN NARUTO CRYS!!! crying crying [ quote] ahh me too! crying great one shot though.
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Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 11:49 pm
thank you all so much ! i appreciate your comments !
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 11:01 pm
phhhshha ... some one atacked my account im the poster of this thread ^-^ ... fun ness , but im glad you guys like it !
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