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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:10 pm
Alright, if I didn't say it before in my introduction, I'm a dark poet as well as a writer and artist. This will be where I post any thing I'd written recently, and everything here is indeed written by me...usually during my History class. Lol, anyway, yeah, I do write poems on request if paid some amount...but that doesn't happen very often.
~Aliya aka Angel...or Freya here on Gaia.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:14 pm
Delete
Delete the misery in my heart, The pain in my mind, The demise in my soul, And the Death in my Life.
Destroy my evil thoughts, My dieing lies, My selfish acts, My destined failure.
Change my ways, My thoughts, My troubled life, Until I am no more.
I will stay the same, OR die in your willingness to change my life.
My life is forfeit, For that of the greater good. If the world will be a better place, I will gladly accept my fate of my full plague, Leaving the world eternally.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:21 pm
Confusion
As the darkness consumes my mind, As the light conceives my eyes, As the deception controls my heart, I begin to understand my corruption as a whole. The blind find happiness, The deaf find truth, The life find their lies in a hole of defeat. Someone found a foe, For once I am worried, For at the same time, The person loses their will to live. Love comes, Love goes, And at the same time it kills your heart. Wherever you decide to go, Be aware of the consequences that direction may cause you. Who was it that showed me the path to darkness? For now my life falls, Without a way out, While children play and wait, You are the one that is destroyed. For now life tries to find a way out of the darkness, But suffers pain and torture instead.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:23 pm
Forget Your Trust Life continues until it doesn't, Death gives greater demands, Hope continues to fall, Lies continue to corrupt. Fear keeps you from acceptance, Bravery falls to darkness, Love finds failure, Hatred finds discrepancies. Health falls to sickness, Sickness falls to death. Mind finds darkness, Memory finds nothing. Victory means less, Defeat means more. Finding brings tears, Loss brings sorrow. Happiness is often lost, As confusion takes over. Image means sight to peers, Shunning becomes more common. Darkness is a mood, Enlightenment is a feeling. Sorrow is a death sentence, Suicide is not an option. Trust is over seen, Betrayal is defeat. A friend or a foe, You decide over time, While you see what I have said is true.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:32 pm
Rose Thorn As I lay screaming, The blood flows quicker. The dread darkness begins to take its toll.
The roses are in bloom, Yet their thorns are no longer in their possesion. They lye in the corpse in the back of the graveyard.
The death of a loved one, One held so dear to you. Only one could have been so bold.
So utterly cruel, Yet they remain silent. Silent as the grave.
One tries to run away from the truth, That is given. Though I and I alone can not tell you.
That is given to the faint at heart, The weak beneath thy wing. The crimson blood staining the rose garden.
That of the thorn, The thorn that takes life away. The hand with the knife.
The one that has no shame in their acts, Acts of violence, Murder, Deceit, Lust. All are ill given.
Ill given to the ones that allow it to happen, The ultimate price for ones sins. The price of death.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:42 pm
Just a side note...heh
Alright, I do enjoy feed back for my work, or critiques. I may not always like the way it is critiqued, but how else will I get better? You may post them here with {} around it or [], (), <>, = =. Any of those forms will work. Anyway, thanks,
~Angel
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:59 am
{Delete~~ I always like looking at things in an odd fashion, and the first thing I thought when I read the word Delete, was a typo. What is the number one thing that we delete? It is generally a typo, which is why the backspace was invented haha. So as I read your poem, I did not take to it heart as if it was I, but as if I was a typo on a great master piece. The second and third stanza really hit home with that thought, and here’s how I pictured it in my head ‘Here I am but a typo, destroy my error, my act to be different but being different is always a failure. Delete me, until I am no longer a typo, if you leave me I will remain me. I know I should be the same, and if my difference to be something else is a burden, then allow me to leave forever.’ After reading it like that I was a bit..wow I never want to write a ytpo and delete it again...and then I started to put it in the context I think it was probably meant to be put in, a human being who is different. As I thought about it in this sense, it brought a greater woe to my heart, and I must say your words are ever printed upon it, trouble be us who are different. So good job on it, an A+ in my book. I’ll probably review your next one...oh probably later today. Being the holiday, I am busy as a lumberjack in the middle of a forest with a deadline (I have no clue...but it sounded good in my head)}
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:22 pm
Love
Love burns in a heart of fire, Blazing with but one desire. She sees him on psalm days, His intent to be by her always. She was always uptight, And to that he thought it wasn’t right.
Sighing as she walks away, He wanted to say please stay. She couldn’t understand why, All she wanted to do was cry. Her life asunder, Her heart torn and plundered.
Her tears streamed steadily, He was by her side readily. Why do things like this appear? Because we want them to disappear. Her sigh of defeat Was his treat.
She quivered in his eyes, Nothing left but her lies. He didn’t care, He wanted to share. His love for her would never faze, As she was eternally in his gaze.
Till death do them part, They knew that from the start.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:24 pm
Defeat
Somewhere a child cries, A dog howls at the moon. A glimpse of hope dies down, While a lie corrupts the living. Souls converge with their fate, And life accepts its downfall. Someone once told me a life was worth saving, But now I no longer understand. What does human existence mean? Everyone has a different answer, But no one has the same one. Life exists until it doesn't, But there is always one who doesn't believe. Chivalry dies out, Death becomes more common, And someone starts fighting back. As the sun rises in the east, And sets in the west, The process starts over. The knight comes to rescue you, Before you fall to corruption.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:26 pm
Lost
Journeying in the darkness of despair, Finding the souls of intent, Here be your life on a string of death. Somewhere your string of lies catch up to you, Once they kill your consciousness, Whomever started this I fear, Shall once again pick a victim. Then you shall find you hatred, In your own mind's eye. In this drained twilight, There maybe the answer to many problems, Even if they are the opposite of your desires. Negativity gets you no where, While enlightenment wipes away your darkness. But do you want that? Your choice, Whether you walk the path of darkness, Or the path of light.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:27 pm
One For You
No one is coming back, No one is there. Life goes on, In a heart as cold as ice. Love continues in the weak, Deceit in the strong. Hope is destroyed by dashed ideas, Failure is the strong card. You think you know someone, Then you find out they were all a lie. Cheating is the one thing I can't stand, While singles do it on purpose. The world we live in is corrupted, So do a favor and don't add on You live to die, And die to live. No one understands you, As you are the one we all want. Your name? Twilight.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:28 pm
For You Always
Love always the one that cares for you, As they may be the one you need most. Many try to understand this, But few make it.
Tell me true, Are you the one for me? I'll be there for you always, Love has yet to part me from my wishes.
To be the one, One must be sure of them self.
You know me well, One would say, Understood.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:29 pm
Knife Of Lost
Lonely in a lover’s embrace, A kiss that leaves one dead. His tears echo in her mind, As she realizes that she was wrong.
She sees him before her, His eyes glazed over. The blood trickles from a wound, The knife beside him.
He had taken his own life, To save hers he had said. She had tried to take it from him, But only made the wound worse.
Now it was her turn to cry, The knife in her hand. She ran it through, And stayed by her love forever more.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:35 pm
Lose Yourself Completely
You hear the wind against the window, The bug crawling across the floor. You see yourself in a dark abyss, Trying to escape in vain. Life takes time to understand, While death comes unexpectantly. Find out what it is like to walk the line between life and death, While your friend cries in fear of you. You don't know why they cry for you, Just that they do forever more. You see me hiding in a corner, Yet linger hence away from me. I see you, And think only of things that could have been.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:47 pm
Never Lie
You said you'd love me forever, But you left me.
You said we'd always stay together, But you broke away.
You said I'd forget you after awhile, But I still love you.
You said I hate you, But you didn't really mean it.
You said come back to me, But I ignored you.
You said forgive me, But I will never forgive you.
Never.
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