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 Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 11:14 pm
-so uhm, i was looking through some old stuff on my computer and found this song that i wrote for my worship class like 2 years ago.
i was wondering if i could have people tell me their opinions on it, because i really want to show this to my friends, but i'm afraid how they'll take it.
Stay With Me
Words by
Music by
V1
You laid your life down for us
That we may have the chance
To realize our mistakes
We come to your gates
That we may lay our life down
At your feet
PC
Even though I’m a child of God
I’m so distant from your love
The sins of the world
Their roots still firm in my heart
C
Don’t let me fall from Your grace Lord
I don’t want to waver but my knees give way
My heart swells with fear as temptation sways me in
Stay with me, let me not give in
V2
Satan fights for control over my timid soul
The night is closing in and I have no control
Protect me Lord
For I am falling from Your grace
[PC]
Don’t let me fall from Your grace Lord
I don’t want to waver but my knees give way
My heart swells with fear as temptation sways me in
Stay with me, stay with me
Protect me Lord, let me not give in
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 12:23 pm
COOL!
That's a really great song! i think that you should show it to your friends. But, of they don't like it, just don't care! you should be proid of it because you wrote it. Tell me how they react to it!
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