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 Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:18 am
here's a place to put any poetry you've written, or write new ones, even to just fool around. Enjoy!
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:41 pm
Quietly i fall to my knees the rain slowly engulfing my body flowing over me as the darkened skys rumble over head a dark cloud slowly rests its form apon the horizon lightning flashing high over head as the great wind blows and whips me about mercilessly weakened and weary i fall to the ground and begin to cry out to the lord the weight of my burden too much to bear my foolish mind causing tempation to rise up and sin struggles within this life almost to much to contain my thoughts swarm my mind unendingly tormenting me and tearing at my heart and soul desperatly i try to climb up from the crushing waves that devour me and engulf me in wave after wave of darkness hopelessness and lonliness slowly the world revolves on yet my body lays broken in the mud layed there to rest forever more........
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:44 pm
heh i hate my writings by the way but if you like it thats great
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 7:00 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 7:05 am
Here is one I wrote a little while ago off the top of my head. Its not that good, considering I thought of everything like right when I wrote it except for the ending.
Nails
by David McFarland
They all mocked him
But he loved them
They all scorned him
But he cried for them
They all laughed at him
But he cared for them
They all disbelieved him
But he died for them
And three nails and his love held him to a tree
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 7:07 am
The Quill
The page
The swift rampage
uhh. . . Word Up
-Strong Sad
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 9:01 am
I enjoyed all of those peoms good job all of you!
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 9:38 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 9:52 am
Really? I find my writing style clunky and non descriptive. I really like your poem though.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:03 am
well yours is a bit more neat and organized than mine it flows better in that sense im a very unorganized person i never have been probably never will be
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 9:03 am
Gentle breezes blow over the hollow ground shadows slowly creep and sway in the dark they slither along in the darkness looking for a victim to devour their eyes dark and lifeless hoplessly dark and evil slowly they wander over the baren wastes of this land killing all life nothing left to stand as they slaughter endlessly and mercilessly this black plauge to horrendous to speak of torturing all mortal lives to the bitter end slaughter has come to the land where life once was now only death hangs apon nights wings life all but a faint memory in this once happy land now torn by the darkest of forces
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 9:14 am
Arrtos Tarne Gentle breezes blow over the hollow ground shadows slowly creep and sway in the dark they slither along in the darkness looking for a victim to devour their eyes dark and lifeless hoplessly dark and evil slowly they wander over the baren wastes of this land killing all life nothing left to stand as they slaughter endlessly and mercilessly this black plauge to horrendous to speak of torturing all mortal lives to the bitter end slaughter has come to the land where life once was now only death hangs apon nights wings life all but a faint memory in this once happy land now torn by the darkest of forces I like this alot.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 10:02 pm
Ventrisida Arrtos Tarne Gentle breezes blow over the hollow ground shadows slowly creep and sway in the dark they slither along in the darkness looking for a victim to devour their eyes dark and lifeless hoplessly dark and evil slowly they wander over the baren wastes of this land killing all life nothing left to stand as they slaughter endlessly and mercilessly this black plauge to horrendous to speak of torturing all mortal lives to the bitter end slaughter has come to the land where life once was now only death hangs apon nights wings life all but a faint memory in this once happy land now torn by the darkest of forces I like this alot. thnx =)
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 10:05 pm
Quietly dark clouds roll across the eve sky darkness rolling in thunder clashes with the lightning brightening the night sky for the briefest of moments down come the heavy rains washing all sorrows away weeping i fall to my knees in pain my soul feeling weak and heavy bearing soo much weigh laiden and frustrated by the toils and pains of this earth and the struggles i must put myself through feeling beaten and alone laying on the ground body being drenched by the hardest of piercing rains covering me not leaving apart of me dry my soul feels washed out of me slowly drifting in the wading waters as they crash around me
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 9:39 am
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