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 Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:15 pm
I dont know if this is allowed, but if it isnt, then feel free to delete.
Welcome to my collection of my own short stories. Yes I wrote them. And yes, they will include DBSK. You'll just have to wait. ><
Dont hurt me. D;
Well, hope you enjoy them. =]
Not really good, but eh... I guess feedback would be nice. =]
You can pretty much guess what happened at the end if I didnt write down what happened.
Note: I love to write about fantasy/drama/sad stories/nice sad endings/nice happy endings/horror.
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:17 pm
 [1] Falling with Sakura [Bleach]
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:19 pm
.::Falling with Sakura::.
"Shiro-chan! Shiro-chan! Look! I climbed all the way up here!"
Light breeze.
Park view.
So high up.
Sitting on a branch.
Surrounding with something milk pink.
They're falling.
Endlessly.
The scent of a flower calms so much.
"Nice view! You look great up there!"
"Thanks."
"Come down already. Before you actually fall asleep and fall."
"Okay."
Fast paced wind blew from the bottom.
Landed back on ground in a matter of seconds.
"Shiro-chan. Before I go, want a hug?"
"Sure."
Warm embrace.
Even more calming.
So warm and calming that you might actually melt.
"Bye Shiro-chan. I'll see you tomorrow."
Evening.
Night.
Moon.
Stars.
And the dark.
Sun rise.
Morning.
And the brightness.
"Shiro-chan?"
"Cant. I'll talk later."
"Ok...."
Ignored.
Sad.
With a heavy chest.
"Hey Shiro- .... Shiro cha...n...?"
"Shiro, who is this? A friend of yours?"
"Yea."
Shiro chan...?
"Shiro chan, who is... is this your....--"
"Girl friend? Meet Meiji."
"Hi. Shiro told me all about you."
Sad.
Confused.
Broken.
Teared up.
Too late.
Run.
Away.
Far away.
At least away from here.
"No wait! Hina! Where are you going?"
Go away.
"I'll leave you two alone Shiro."
"At least help me find her now."
"Ok."
~+~
"I shall now call you Shiro Chan. Teehee."
"Hey! Look at this! Isnt this cute?"
"Here Shiro-chan! Hope you like it."
"Happy Birthday!"
"Group hug on Shiro chan!"
"Look at you. Your so funny."
"Shiro-chan! Shiro-chan! Look! I climbed all the way up here!"
"Shiro-chan. Before I go, want a hug?"
~+~
"Shiro... chan....."
High above.
So high up.
Higher than before.
Sitting on a branch.
With pink flowers.
Falling endlessly.
Getting colder every minute.
More petals falling.
Drifting away.
So is the view.
Turning everything into a blur.
Then darkness.
Feeling more wind than ever.
Then gone.
The last petal fell from the tree.
Its done.
"HINA!!"
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:53 pm
I like it. It should be used as a sort of intro, because of the style. It's not a bad style for introductions, just confusing and catching enough to get someone curious, but not enough the annoy them. But it would get too confusing for much else. It's not a bad idea though. Elaborate a bit more?
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