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 Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 11:38 am
Yeah, my titles are weird, but I've always found them very fun to make. Can you understand it? d: dA = http://zhoushijie.deviantart.com I can take fairly brutal critique, depending on the piece of art I've put up. I would prefer if you take time to attend to things I bring notice to before pointing out other things, though, because if I feel the need to say it, that means I find it very glaring. Okay, so my most recent example/WIP will be posted here~ (Scraps may be posted throughout the thread, though... I'm honestly not too sure how this will work. xD; ) [none at the moment] **Please take a look at my dilemma several posts down, too. O:
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:10 pm
General Information ll
Birthdate: Sept 10 1991
Drawing [seriously]: since seventh grade -- 2004
Influenced Greatly By: Anime/manga, favorite artists on dA, semi-realism
Things I Enjoy Drawing ll
Females
Aesthetically pleasing things (pretty, in a word)
3/4 view facing the left of face (I draw it too often)
Things I Suck At ll
Males (generally)
Hands/Feet
Anatomy (more or less)
Backgrounds
Coloring (especially on the computer)
Clothing/Folds
Mecha/Anthromorphic
Complicated Poses
Perspective
...the list goes on.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:27 pm
ll Archives lloldest (top) -> newest (bottom)
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:45 pm
Extra ll
I'd like to ask you guys a question because I have a rather pressing dilemma. I promised my friend I'd enter her art contest since I am her friend and she barely gets entries in general. The contest, however, doesn't spark my interest very much, and honestly, I am dreading drawing it. How should I go about doing this?
I have put together a simple composition sketch that is decent [imo], but I'm worried that this will turn into one of those things I will despise both working on and how it turns out.
Do you need more info?
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 7:17 pm
-cuts ribbon- You can post if you want to. (You could post before, but I'm just making it clear/er.) xD
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Errol McGillivray Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 7:19 pm
Is there a particular image you'd like any comment on?
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 7:42 pm
Hmmm I'd like to comment on 'Nikohl OC pencil commish'
The breasts look a bit squished... and the perspective of the pool/pond/birdbath is a bit off... It's too much of an arial view, when it should be more of an angle.
I'd say define the wrists a bit more.
It's b-e-a-utiful though. And those are some of the best hands I've seen in a while... 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 7:58 pm
Errol// Not at this moment, but I'll have some concept sketches and questions up soon. :3
YuriMono// Ah, yes, they do. O: I seem to have gotten into a bad habit of simply drawing them like that all the time.
And a friend pointed out the perspective wonkiness...oops. ^ ^;;;
Mm, the wrists do blend into the lower arm. I'll pay more attention to that. C:
Why, thank you. ;D I worked hard on those hands. xD (And I got a little lucky, too.)
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 8:39 pm
Ooh, I love the smooth, sleek quality of your pencils <33 I guess I'll wait until you post some questions/sketches to crit, though. O:
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:22 pm
Wonderful drawins! Keep up the great work.
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:04 pm
A work in progress in need of urgent crit. ;D <3 (It's due on Sunday, uwaaah!)
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 7:31 pm
The WIP is actually done quite nicely.
Just add the other foot.... shape the torso a bit more into that hourglass shape, and it's good to go.
3nodding I might add a draw over later...Tablet's not here atm... sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 4:31 pm
Finished the picture since the deadline is today. Please still crit because there is a buffer period in case there are people who dropped out without telling us or people can't finish.
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 3:43 pm
I'm in love with the face *u*
The crossed legs look a little off, as if the leg underneath were flat. But I think it can be solved with the shading, emphasizing the cilindric shape of the tigh.
Also, the right arm is too long (the one that is resting over the chest). If the hand is leaning over the front part of the chest, her back should be a little curved; and as her back is straight, the arm should be more to the back. I suggest trying the second option, so it won't change much in the structure of the drawing.
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