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Well, I was listening to Fall by jesus and the mary chain, and I got inspiration for this song:


FALL!
Fall, fall, fall,
Fall away from all,
And Crawl,
Crawl, crawl, crawl,
Crawl into a ball,
And go DOWN,
Down, down, down,
Down until you drown,
Then you DIE!
DIE, DIE, DIE!
You shoot yourself in the eye,
And you're DEAD,
DEAD DEAD DEAD!
The sheets are stained red,
Dead, dead, dead,
With a bullet in your head

Then WHY?
Why, why, why?
Why won't the pain subside?
Why, why, why?
Why can't you die?
He HATES,
Hate, Hate, Hate,
It's just a bit irate,
Just try,
Try try, try,
You just won't ever die,
You can't Creep,
Creep, creep, creep,
You can't creep into peace.

I love it, you hate it,
It's just so complicated,
I live, and you die,
and Beauty always cries,
I'm happy, You're dead,
With a bullet in your head,

You're stuck,
Stuck, stuck, stuck,
Stuck with rotten luck,
You live,
Live, live, live,
In the last moment he gives,
Before you die,
DIE DIE DIE,
From the bullet in your eye.
Forever,
Ever, and ever,
You're stuck in that moment of never,

You try and try to repent,
But your time is spent,
Because you've died,
The life you live is a lie,
Because you're dead,
With a bullet in your head.

It's a dream
Dream, dream, dream,
A dream so real it seems,
You can never, ever escape,
Your purpose or your fate,
Or the pain,
You can never escape the pain,
The pain you've chosen to gain,
You won't be at peace again,

And you DIE,
Die, die, die,
You put a bullet in your eye,
So you're DEAD,
Dead, dead, dead,
The sheets are stained red,
With bullet in your head,
You shot yourself in the eye,
This is what happens when you die,
What happens in a suicide,
This is what HAPPENS WHEN YOU DIE!

Thank you very much! Good to finally get a comment on it, I'll try and work that into some of my other songs...

(why is this one of the only sections of the forum that seems completely unresponsive, even though it's normally the place where response is most likely to be wanted?)

Wow, thanks for the very positive response. You kinda caught me off guard with how good you think it is...

Thank you very much, it just seemed to flow through my mind, ya know? (it's my fav part too XP)