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 Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:58 am
Just got an Idea, Bar for bar, you gotta up the syllable
Shitty Example
When you drop the first line
Only 1 syllable should rhyme
When you get to bar two
the challenge starts, dude xd
For bar 3, you rhyme ya best
every other line should out shine the rest
4th bar is the next to per-fect
blah blah blah, I'll wreck ya direct
by the 5th bar the s**t's harder than marble
better get fired up like startin a throttle
6 bar and I'm done with this ******** verse
see my shitty test bars, dont come in with nuthin worse
Two people accept, drop a verse not dissing each other, LG votes on the better verse, flow, relevence, the whole 9.
IF you stop rhyming the sylly's, ******** doing it over, you will be replaced, ain't got time for that rich boi s**t.
Anyone can enter, no cost.
wink
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:44 pm
I'm one broke ********... i need dough. I accept!!
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:02 pm
Iight... here goez.
First I'd like to thank that ***** named, Ceaz
For givin me the chance to make some extra cheese
With ease, I'll leave the other opponent in threes
Makin it hard to breathe, when I plow ya under to rest in peace
Excuse me... this ain't a battle, just a challenge 4 mad dinero
For cheddar so... makes victory sweeter than the classical sound of Figaro
Here we go... time for the spit to get a lil bit difficult
even though complexity rises, I steadily get lyrical
I think i know how Ceaz came up with this... quite original
sarcasm, hoe... I'm only doin this for a flight o gaian gold
And if I don't win... ******** this contest anyway
I'll learn how to hack... just so i can steal his gold less than a day
((lolz Forced like a ********... but I think i kept to the syllyz))
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:58 am
Ha. Let's take a minute just to breathe
Chillin' together in a pod like peas
Mixin' classics kinda like rappin' carrots
instead of shopping lists, i could do without karets
leave 'em smokin' like the end of a cigarette
or like fine dining, more flavor like it's been simmerin'
I'm krunk with it, leave the ladies shakin' the salt
Make 'em quake with orgasms like they're breakin' a fault
Left 'em with my fingers in their comps, finger <********' their systems
Shot 'em and made 'em lose their sides like I'm tuckin' their biscuits
I killed 'em all like Vlad, screw leavin' a witness
I'm impossible to beat like you leadin' a business
mur. =/
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 11:41 pm
Bona...I'm kind of disappointed that you accepted this...Unless you're sure that you can pull it off, keep practicing. ((Not tryna play you))
So many of your bars didn't rhyme....You're disqualified.
Anyone can replace him at this point...Just drop.
Good s**t Vedic, you forced the 3rd/5th bar, but it's aight otherwise.
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 9:43 am
Yeah, been away for a while.. haven't even written any content in months. Figure I'll try to ease back in again.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 11:36 am
I'm a bad dream, you can't catch me, I'm moving out of reach
Not drifting into the distance, but growing like the giant peach
Make mc's shake, when I spit even the earthquakes
Exposing more cry babies, looking like I upped the birth rate
With my radiator flow, I touch the mic and make it hot
Looking for a rapper with a rep, just so I can take his spot
I live in the moment, I've got no place for regrets
Cos, looking in the past means currently you can't face or see threats
My lines are cancer sticks, rappers need nicotine patches
I'm killin 'em slow, laughing manically till my sicker scheme hatches
Taking the world over, one square inch at a time
Say it again cos someone, some where thinks that I'm lyin...
Ha!
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2007 11:09 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 12:53 am
I vote for lucky. Alot of his s**t rhymed perfect...Personal fave was the sicker scheme bar.
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 3:42 am
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 3:55 am
Syllvurr I vote for lucky. Alot of his s**t rhymed perfect...Personal fave was the sicker scheme bar. second'd... that s**t was hella nice.
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:23 am
luky shuld win
definately
biggrin domokun
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:23 pm
No offense guy, but we need some people who've been around this b***h to vote on this.
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 12:57 pm
All 'beef', if you can call it that, aside....Lucky's verse was the better of the two. Your s**t didn't really go that well together Vedic.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 12:09 am
Im one to damage ya, shoot you like a digital camera
then leaving my victims seeing like a tarantula
Call me dracula
its like raping virgins, i murder rappers wit the mic drippin blood
lickin it up as i fill their bodies with lead just so they stiffen up
The Fat Kid can get his up
Fill caskets like custard cups, leave ya body floating like rubber ducks
make hard kats feel soft like im melting reese's bite size butter cups
its like i need to shut the ******** up
But wait its like my words are weights pumping words like steriods
i bury dudes in rivers cuz i hear dumping dirt might scare boyz
poppin dudes in mouths like altoids
cuz my s**t freshenz breath so call it winter fresh
cuz i got frozen bodies like mortal combat so i just finished them
no wonder why my shits explicit then
lol damn just a quick keystyle, wut ya think???
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