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 Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:49 pm
MY REVENGE
I watched every aching minute go by. i was sitting out here. so young and helpless. it was as if nobody could hear my cries. i was all alone. my mind froze, my body didnt no wat to do. it was as if time itself had stopped. then i realized, it was really the end. i was going to die. then, my furry built up inside of me. "this cant be happining. i cant die, NOT LIKE THEM! ILL KILL THOSE PEOPLE!" i thought to myself. then, i couldnt controll myself anylonger. i blancked out. when i awoke the people were dead.
the people that ruined my life. those people that killed everybody i knew and loved! I had finally gotten.....My Revenge!
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:55 pm
I love it! Raw ans powerful! Good work Shadow!
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Night Of The Shadowraven Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:16 pm
thank you. i worked on it at the library. i thought of it because i was sharing my friends library card(mine was at home) so she kicked me out to the studying hall! that got me really mad, cause both my friends were on the computer. that lady was a QU***!!!! (no offenss guys, yall no yall r the only quakes i luv! xd )
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:31 pm
this is y i have a split personality...... emo
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:12 pm
*sighs* only a few people in this world care about me....*mumbles to a whisper* at least, thats how other people make it seem. " cry ur the only one who reads my poems. nobody else cares. plus, i think im going...*swallows*.....stale! cry "
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:15 pm
punch her in the face ninja
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:19 pm
ShadowDaughterofRaven *sighs* only a few people in this world care about me....*mumbles to a whisper* at least, thats how other people make it seem. " cry ur the only one who reads my poems. nobody else cares. plus, i think im going...*swallows*.....stale! cry " You can always try new styles, or different topics
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Night Of The Shadowraven Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:19 pm
RubyKai punch her in the face ninja .... emo
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:31 pm
ShadowDaughterofRaven RubyKai punch her in the face ninja .... emo y?
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:45 pm
RubyKai ShadowDaughterofRaven RubyKai punch her in the face ninja .... emo y? *shruggs* i dunno.... im not populare, pretty, skinny, short, or "normal". wats there to like about me? so...i guess....that y i hate myself.... emo
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:30 pm
Your still young, and there's plenty of time for change!
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:35 pm
NORMAL IS A SWEARWORD! Never complain that your not normal. Popularity is only a game. Pretty is in the eye of the beholder. short is a double edged sword and skinny is frequently ugly.
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:42 pm
Your right 3nodding
It kinda reminds me of this line from Subdivision:
In the high school halls
In the shopping malls
Conform or be cast out
(Subdivisions)
In the basement bars
In the backs of cars
Be cool or be cast out
Any escape might help to smooth the unattractive truth
But the suburbs have no charms to soothe the restless dreams of youth
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Night Of The Shadowraven Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:43 pm
Course I'm right. I took it all, then I figured out how to not get wrapped up in their games and so they ask me how they should play.
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