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 Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 8:10 pm
Enter your poetry that you've written to a lover. I bet there are some class A poets out there. And even if they're not that good, post them because we'll be able to feel the heart you put in them!
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 8:11 pm
Leave me wasted away
Surrounded by winter's cold
Keep in the frozen snow
Finding me tired and shaken
Because all was taken from me.
Ain't ever had true love
Not in that winter snow
That is until when
Your heart picked me up
But that was taken away from me
Thunder rolls down my backside
The heat is something new
My heart beats wildy
Beneath my breast
My heart was taken from me.
So now I've fallen down
You're fallen sweetheart
Your heart beats wildly only for me
Just beating for the heartbreak
You gave to me...
You breathe into my very soul
Changing my heart for good
My hopes a'goin
When you're not a'showin
And you were taken away from me...
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 8:29 pm
he doesn't really matter
doesn't really matter to me
said he loved my curls, curves, my body
even said he loved me; loved me
laid my curls across his chest one night
asked him if everything was alright
and I waited, and waited
he didn't really love me
promised he had never truly loved me
oh and how I loved him
I'd fallen down
and when the sun sets here
it doesn't really matter to me
because my light will shine, will shine through
my fire, my flame showing what I am
who I am
so please don't judge me for my
sassiness, and bitchiness, craziness, my lovingness
and all because I love you
so please don't let me fall
I'm falling, falling for you
and when the sun sets here
it doesn't really matter to me
because your light has shown into me
your fire and soul showing what you see
what you see in me
and when the sun sets here
it doesn't really matter to me
because our light has shown into the world
our fire and souls showing what we see
showing what oyu feel for me
you seem to really matter
you seem to really matter to me
you say you love my curls, my curves, my body
I think you might even love me
catch me I'm falling
falling for you
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 10:41 pm
a lot of my stuff's on fictionpress.com under the pseudonym "sol chance"
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 12:59 am
I feel like a horrible boyfriend. I've never written any poetry for Xander. Mostly 'cuse I suck at it.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 2:10 am
I used to write poetry bout love..but it got burned by me (don't ask..)...the only copies of poems I have now are...depressing ones..heh...
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 11:36 am
Erm, sorry to burst your bubble but I started a poetry thread a long time ago...its a general one but its still a poetry thread. ^^; So yeah, theres already one in exsistence you just have to find it.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 11:45 am
Poetry in general or poetry for lovers. I was being more specific and wanted outright opinions of it. However, I don't think I can delete this thread so you'll have to ask a mod to delete it if that's your wish.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 11:51 am
No I don't want you to deleate it ^^; I was just saying, that I had already created one. So that way they wont be a double General Poetry Thread.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 1:17 pm
But I'm trying to tell you that it's not just general poetry. It's romantic poetry that you've written for your lovey.
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:32 pm
I realize that.....I'm just saying that so someone wont make another general one, ok?
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:06 pm
Brandon Taylor I feel like a horrible boyfriend. I've never written any poetry for Xander. Mostly 'cuse I suck at it. then you're not horrible, you're just afraid of not living up to the standards you set for yourself. (or I might be wrong... but you're still not horrible)
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:28 pm
So much happened since last we talked
So many thoughts as I stand where we used to walk
So many people have asked me what I once asked you
but I know you love me and you know I love you, too
I'm just wondering what I should do
after losing all contact, you've been gone for too long
Temptation is hard to resist.....
Especially after so many insist...
but I stay steadfast, because my love still exists
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:29 pm
I knwo that sucked... but, I just freestyled it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:44 pm
hi everyone i dont write poetry cuase i am not very good at it , but a lot of you members are awsome at poetry , keep it up
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