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Astre_Kyrs

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:42 pm


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Not trying to start an art war or anything, but i'm
hoping you guys can help...

Yes, i know there isn't a background.
i was lazy and i didn't make one.

Yes, i know her boobs are kinda big, but that's not
the point

i just got Gimp (yay for me) and i'm testing out how
it works. i like it a lot, but i still don't have a full understanding
of how it works. This pic was done with mostly the brush
and smudge tool.

You like? Tell me what you like and what you don't like.
What could I have done differently to make it better?
i would really REALLY love your help.




















Thanks a bunch!
--Koneii
PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 2:48 pm


Well, um... I'm no expert or anything, so the most you're going to get out of me is, "Wow that's awesome!" because I think it is. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 9:52 pm


Actually, I really like it. I asked my boyfriend who is a computer graphics artist and he says he has no complaints. whee
Umm...I like Hinata a lot so I think it's really good. I personally like exaggerated breasts on anime characters in fanart.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 1:31 pm


Give me 26 lead soldiers...




wow!! That is SO good [i'm jealous hehe]



...and i'll rule the world

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xxxxA t o l i

PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:21 pm


Actually, the picture is done really, truly well. I would say that the only thing you need to improve on is her chest size... it's rather large compared with the rest of her... The shading is amazing, I wish I could do as well as you... *is jealous* ><

Anyways, an overall great pic. Great job!! heart
PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 4:07 pm


I love the shading, I don't know the program your using... and I know the angle you drew on is an annoying one, but I think you did really well better then I could do... *pokes fingers together* do you draw avi art *puppy eyes*

x.silver deserts.x


Sakura Eyes

PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 12:10 am


I like this. Very nice for a "test" picture. Yes her breasts are a little big but that happens. The skin shading is quite nice. I don't know -that- much about digital painting and anime-style coloring but from a traditional aspect, I would try to stay away from the black when shading and use the cool colors like purple and blue. But I'm just being really nitpicky in trying to find something lol. But yes. Overall, great work. 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 9:44 pm


That is an amazing picture, you are better than me if that says anything.

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nobodys0somebody

PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 11:37 pm


atleast u can draw
PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:20 pm


It is really good. Her boobs are a bit big but that doesn't matter. The shading looks nice. The only thing I didn't really like was the eyes they look a bit to... whats the word... spooky? Pure? Freaky? I don't know. But still good. *give you a pat on the back*

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