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 Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:21 pm
I wrote a part of a story:
Here
So if you could read it and give me some constructive criticism, that would be great. ^^
Thank you! ^^
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 7:30 pm
Oooh~ I like it very much! I didn't really get to read the whole thing, but I love the imagery and action writing! ^^b
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