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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 4:41 pm
It's a little brief right now, and this is my first, but here we go.
In 2000 the government conducted a study in which they changed human DNA. Since they didn't know what would happen to the subjects, they chose teens from an orfanage. Each teen was tested in a different way, all surviving, some barely. After recovery they noticed, each teen had an abnormal "power". The government ended the study immediatly, saying nothing to the public. Each teen was put in a power cell, a cell in which they could only hurt themselves, and not get out. Shipped to a military base, they were all supposed to be exacuted.
While this was going on, a young boy, maybe about the age of 12, was looking through General Kinico's files. He noticed the exacution of these people and thought, what have they done wrong, nothing at all. The boy raced down to Area 52 (lol) and saw the containers. Luckily his dad was a Sergant and taught him something about rescuing hostages. Racing over to a nearby officers post he started scrambling through the files until he found one titled "Urgant&Important". The boy ripped open the file and dug until he found a keypad, using the code he found in the file he typed in the unlock code, and pressed send.
The doors on all of the containers let out a pop of air as they opened. The boy walked up to one looking him over.
Now these escapees are in a military base, full of weapons. Will they ban together? Will they take what they can find? Will someone catch them? Will I stop typing these?
So what do you think? Once we get settled I might make some positions, such as leader and what.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 4:46 pm
tis good keepworking on it
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 5:00 pm
Thanks, I hope to get some more imput before I post it, so people know about it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:18 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 11:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 5:22 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:25 am
when does this open I want to join
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:21 am
If it were just that I would have to move it to Beginners. Make sure you check out the Where to Post sticky. I am sure that you can at least make it an Intermediate level RP before you open it.
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School Of Dedicated RPers Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 12:45 pm
Looks interesting. I was in something simmilar to this, but unfortunately it kinda died. My character was kind of a werewolf, only a bit different. If you need some help developing the plot, I'd be willing to give you a hand.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 12:55 pm
I wouldn't join, most likely.
My main issue is the Bad Science of DNA tampering that results in superpowers instead of super-tumors or super-nonfunctional organs.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 1:04 pm
It sounds cool, if it ever opens let me know and I'd join. The only thing I think would be good to do would to be maybe add something where there's more of a variety of characters because right now we have those who have super powers, the boy who set them free, and anyone working at area 52. I don't know that may be enough, just maybe you could figure out something to add more people. Just an idea.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:59 pm
I'd be interested in this. You might want to provide us with more information about the outside world, unless you plan to leave it up to the players. Or if you are going to sort of GM. Either way, send me a PM when it gets up and running. Thanks
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:41 am
This looks like a very intresting RP. I know some other people already said this but if you want some help with plot, editing, making it more intresting im here.
Please PM me when it comes to life
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 1:46 am
damn sounds good i think ill sign up when it opens
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 2:05 am
I'd join it, let me know when you get it started.
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