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 Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 11:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 11:33 pm
Hm I like it ;] For some reason I want to cry after listening to it.But also make your voice kind of go with the beat.Yah know?
Overall.loved it
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 11:52 pm
ImShiZZle Hm I like it ;] For some reason I want to cry after listening to it.But also make your voice kind of go with the beat.Yah know? Overall.loved it THAX
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 1:14 am
Your delivery sounds too much like you're reading off of a page. =/ Put some expression into it, man.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 8:42 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 9:40 am
I agree add more feeling to your voice I listened to the lyrics this is a real a** song but it sounds as if it isn't that serious like blah add more feeling not neccessarily yell but you got to sell it with your voice make us believe it or it'll just sound like somebody else wrote it and told you to recite it to this beat overall nice song like the beat
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 9:13 am
yea i used adobe..ican really see the change and quallity from my other work
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