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Mr snugglehead

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:28 pm


It was noon the day that the doctors called..

Anonymous voice in the phone "I'm sorry son but you need to towns"

I spoke suddenly as I listened "Don't call me your son and what do I need to head to towns for. I replied annoyed that another person man or female had called me son..

"Your mothers sick" the voice said..

I sat for a while worried about my mother.. it would be no delay that i would head there.. who was it that called.. and what was she sick with, all these thoughts filled my mind as I finally replied to the person.

"Ill need a day or so to prepare tell my mother I'm coming" I said as I slammed the phone onto its ringer and stood from my bed..

"great another adventure.." I laughed at myself.. over the next few hours I began to prepare as often as I could, memories of my last encounter with my mother would flood my mind.. "You were never a good son, if I'm dieing do me a favor and don't come." I would soon shiver with grief at my own pity..

What was I to do. what ever it was I needed to see what was wrong and I did so that.. after I prepared I headed to the train station with my bag on my back and cigarette in hand I walked. I walked with pity for my mother.

Whence I arrived at the train station I would continue to look around for the ticket booth it was packed in the city and their were trains going everywhere. Everywhere I looked would remind me of the day I ran away from home.. The train station was the first place I arrived when I did.. at the brief pause passed I spotted the ticket booth and bought a ticket.. "One ticket to Barton Towns please" I said with a grim look upon my face..

Now it was only a matter of time until I found the train. I found a Police man and he pointed to the train headed to Barton towns.. "That way boy" he said as I looked at him annoyed. Now it was time for the train ride.. something I never yearned to enjoy as it was usually full of old couples.. and people with a destination all to their own.. where I was going was an adventure all in its own.. but now it was time to rest.. as I continued to dream I fell asleep and would continue for several hours..


[wooo wooo] The train began to slow down and I woke drooling on the window of the passenger car.. "great" I said "I'm already here" my expression changed as I got off the train and began walking to my mothers house..

Then being greeted by Frank with his usual message.. "Welcome to Barton towns" .. "Pfft go away frank I need not welcome from you" and as soon as it was said I was off to figure out.. what I had set to find..
PostPosted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:33 pm


Comments and opinions are welcomed.. Sorry its not all Gramatically correct ... lol im not perfect 3nodding

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:20 am


it's kinda dismal man...
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 5:34 am


I....really do not know on what to say about it. ^^; I honestly do not.

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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 5:45 pm


D:
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