sadness of love. short 8 lines

[fallingrace92588]

Im done trying to convince you
Every time I look in your eyes,
I die a little more inside.
Your every word catches my breath, then haunts me.
How could I ever beleive your lies?
Your heart is so cold, anyone who touches it dies.
My love for you never fades.
Yours touches me, then breaks apart and flies away.  

[syloscis]

Ah, the sadness of love indeed.....well written, this is. It may be eight lines, but it holds meaning. Well done.  

[fallingrace92588]

thanx. smile