hey guys biggrin I've been working on something lately want some feed back can you guys please go here read my story , reblog if your on tumblr . tell me what you think some-placetoofar.tumblr.com
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:26 pm
I really love it, you are an amazing writer. I loved the simile you used in the first chapter, I watched the smoke in the night air as it turned and twisted like a belly dancer. That was amazing. You truly have a gift. PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!
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