You can look tehre for the stroy thus far. Then come back here for a revew. I love when poeple nicely crit instead of comapreing my stories to their like saying
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Its crappy Unlike mine which has everything and is perfect!!! MUAHAHAHA!!!!!!!one!!!!!Eleven!
Please I dont need that, this is my secound story nad the one Immaking a manga for. COurse I'll send it to Square when I have enough time. But yeah put your reviews here and if you got a FF account send a review tehre too!
