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I'm thinking the head's too big, but other than that I can't quite put my finger on what's wrong with it. It's for a contest and i'd like to have it perfect =]

any c+c would be highly appreciated, I'd give you cookies.

The one thing that bothers me is that the chest seems to be a bit too ... um.. flat I guess would be the best way to describe it. And the shoulders seems to be back too far. I'd say try and widen up the torso a bit, put more definition in the chest, like bring it out a bit more so it doesnt look soo flat, and bring the arm and shoulder in a bit.

I'll see if I can find some good side male references for you to study from.