█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ TYRD █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Tea, Tay, Tia, Monkey, Team Leader █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 6' █WEIGHT ▬ 150
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ On her top, she wears bindings to keep herself in place, on the bottom, she wears a loincloth with a black back skirt, trimmed with red fur. She also wears a set of fur boots and fur tribal-like vest..
█ACCESSORIES ▬ A circlet on her head. █EYES ▬ Orange █BUILD ▬ muscular, and curvy █TATTOOS ▬ Tribal Tattoos on both arms and legs █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Monkey tail, Prehensile feet, Monkey-like lower body. When entering semblance she resembles more of an ape/ gorilla-like creature with a tail.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Dexterity & Agility - Teal is able to move quickly and easily whether it be on the ground, or in trees or high obstacles. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Quintuple-dexterity: Due to having the lower body of a monkey, she is able to grasp things with her 5 limbs. With this ability, she is able to wield weapons with her feet. With her tail, it's only light items such as a water bottle. █Other Talents ▬ Acrobatics- Teal is naturally very acrobatic, having spent much of her time climbing and moving through trees. As such, she can swing herself fairly easy through them and at fast speeds. Teal is able to move faster than the average human when using an obstacle to keep/build momentum thanks to this. When she swings she can use the momentum to throw herself in a radius of around 15-feet away when doing so, and as long as she can grab something with the tip of her fingers she can pull herself up. Her speed when using all 5 extremities gives her a large boost compared to when she wears her boots; which make her clumsy at times when climbing up or over obstacles. ▬ Strength: Teal is able to deadlift 800lbs. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Polearm Proficiency: Teal is well professed with polearm weapons. She can be seen using one expertly. █Weakest Skill ▬ Near-sighted- Teal can see close to her, but far away is blurry after 25 ft. █Other Skills ▬ Survival- Teal knows how to tie knots, which plants are edible, and things you would know to be able to survive in the wilderness. ▬ Climbing- Thanks to having well managed dexterity and extremities she is an excellent climber capable of using the strength of the limbs to climb great heights or travel over obstacles with ease.
█LIKES █ ▬ Climbing trees, swinging from vines, climbing obstacles susspending her self in the air █ ▬ Brave people, take your honor and hold it high. █ ▬ Fruits, veggies anything fresh and green edible to eat from mother nature █ ▬ Nature, wild life, outdoors █ ▬ Her Team, they are her troop/ family █ ▬ Kitty Kittys… But don’t tell anyone. █ ▬ Stuffed plushies… again don’t tell anyone █DISLIKES █ ▬ Shy, people who don’t speak their mind █ ▬ Wasabi…. Always wasabi █ ▬ Men, her tribe is ran by strong women and men are treated as lower dwellings so naturally she has a distaste for them however, those in her squad she does treat differently █ ▬ Jaguars though she loves animals, these creatures once plagued her village so she sees them as a threat and dislikes them. █ ▬ That the “curse” will spread █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Teal is an “in your face” kind of girl. She sees men as inferior to her, as she grew up in a matriarchal society. However, she shows this as passive aggressiveness, and will sometimes even ignore what men have to say. She is brave, and if you question it, she will prove it to you. However she can be like a slice of butter when with her team she cares for them all (even the men) with all her heart and would do anything to protect them. She treats them like her own troop. █Vernacular ▬ Turanga Leela █Positive Traits ▬ Protective, █Negative Traits ▬ Sexist, proud
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Teal grew up in a monkey village that she claims was cursed many years ago. But that is not the truth. Around 100 years ago her ancestors started giving birth to Faunus that were more monkey-like in appearance. This terrified many until a woman that showed such resilience turned it into a blessing for her people over time the village became a female dominated troop of Monkey Fauna, and men were subservient to women. Men would tend to the children and the fields where the women would seek battles and hard working jobs across the lands to raise money for their village and families. Teal was born just after the death of the great woman that led this tribe. Teal raised in a village sought normal friends outside of her village and would often wander far away to neighboring villages, it was there she discovered how her people could be detested or feared. She would be mocked or seen as ugly, she grew up believing in those lies and find her body to be a curse not a blessing. She was asked to leave her village 3 years ago when she spoke up against the elders demanding to know why they never sought to find a way to end this curse. To ensure she would not sough distrust in other villager's hearts she was sent on her own quest to find herself. So she did.
Along the way she would learn to survive on her own the hard way and it made her better for it. Coming from a village where it rained at least once a day the summer heat and cold blizzards became amazements to her as she traveled from area to area until she happened upon a little school and 3 people that would change her life forever.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ The Demolisher █ ▬ The demolisher is a polearm that has a hexagon shaped head at the top with spikes pointing out on it's more hexagonal sides. The front of the weapon is empty. On the pole, there is a button. █Melee Form ▬ This weapon has a 5 foot long pole, and the pole itself weighs about 10 lb. The head is 2 feet long and about 1 foot wide diameter, the metal forming the lip is a solid 4 inches on both sides. Every side has a spike, but alternating between on the top and bottom. The head itself weighs about 30 lb. The spikes can impale into people, and the hit is heavy. █Ranged Form ▬ By inserting a mortar round into the open top, Teal can fire a round. The way this happens is there is a spike that is a leaver that can be pulled down, and the mortar is launched by a tight spring that is released. The mortars can be fired up to 50ft. █Other Form(s) ▬ The handle can twist off of the head, for a storage form. █Ammo Type ▬ Physical ▬ Spiked Mortars- Teal uses explosive dust in the middle of a sphere of needles. When activated with aura, the round can be launched or thrown. One post after it has been activated, it will explode in a 10 ft radius, that has heat and fire to it, the needles are then launched up to a 15ft radius. Teal and team mates are not immune to this damage. █ ▬ The weapon is heavy, and slow to swing without her semblance. ▬It takes one post to properly screw the weapon back together. If the weapon is not screwed back together properly, she can accidentally launch the head. ▬ The mortar can be thrown back at Teal if the person is quick enough. ▬ The butt of the polearm must be put against the ground to stabilize it. ▬ The round ears up one Dust ration per mortar. █OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Machete █ ▬ 4 mortars █ ▬ Steal Tactical hunting/fishing Knife █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Survival kit that she keeps in a small fanny pack under her bottoms concealed from sight. Inside this kit you will find A filtered canteen that has to be changed after 5 in RP day uses that carries 12oz of liquid. Steel flint in the shape of a small stone. and 20 pieces of jerky like rations good enough to stave off hunger for 4 people for 3 days can only be replenished every other in RP day. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Primordial Rage █AURA COLOR ▬ Limegreen █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Teal condenses her Aura channeling it into her muscle fibers and tissue, as she progresses in stages she sacrifices her speed due to the weight of the muscle fibers gained in the later stages. As she trains this will become better. With the decrease in speed also comes a large increase in defense and strength her skin thickening from the dense tissue fiber. Her appearance also slightly changes with each stage her muscles growing and thickening her outside mass till she resembles almost a gorilla like creature with a tail. Surprisingly her clothes stretch to fit each appearance change.
█*LEVEL 0 ▬ 1st Stage: In the first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her Aura. In this stage she can lift around 100lbs above her strength and can strike just as hard while moving at her normal speed, projectiles under .5 of an inch in diameter fired from over 40ft in distance can only graze her skin with scratches and can not pierce it unless closer. Objects over the size will cause normal damage as intended.
Stage 2: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance starts to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/2 her usual speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 200lbs above her strength and can strike just as hard and stopping the same size projectiles fired from up to 30ft away and mitigating damage in half the closer the projectile is. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/4th their original damage.
Stage 3: The final stage of her transformation Teal takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but odd red hair grows from her arms back and chest, green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still untamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movements impossible. She can now lift 500lbs above her strength and can strike just as hard In this state physical close range attacks are cut by 1/4 their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 20ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 19ft or closer deal their intended damage.
█*LEVEL 1▬ 1st Stage: In the first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her aura. In this stage she can lift around 200lbs above strength and can strike just as hard while moving at her normal speed. Projectiles under .5 of an inch in diameter fired from over 35ft in distance only graze her skin with scratches and can not pierce it until closer then 34ft. Objects over the size or closer will cause normal damage as intended.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance start to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving 1/2 her normal speed and her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 400lbs above her strength, and can strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 25ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/4 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a fain hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest, green steam rolls fro mher mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way if she looses control (see draw back). Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still un tamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movement impossible, still only being able to move 1/4th as fast as normal. She can now lift 1000lbs over her own strength and deliver attacks of equal strength. Physical attacks are now cut in by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 15ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce of her skin. Projectiles fired 14ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage.
█*LEVEL 2▬ 1st Stage: In first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her aura. In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed. Projectiles under 1.0 of an inch in diameter fired from over 30ft in distance only graze her skin with scratches can not pierce it until close then 29ft. Objects over the size or closer will cause normal damage as intended. Physical attacks aren now cut by 1/4th their intended damage.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance start to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass i now almost double its size bulk wise. In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed., and can strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 20ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/4 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest. green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way if she looses control. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. However, when maneuvering in trees she can move at 1/2 her speed. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 10ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 9ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage. She can now lift 1500lbs above her strength. She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll).
█*LEVEL 3 ▬ 1st Stage: In this stage she can lift around 800lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed. Projectiles under 1.0 of an inch in diameter fired from 25ftor farther in distance harmlessly bounce off her skin, projectiles fired 24ft or over the size will cause damage as intended. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/2 their intended damage.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissuefiber. Her outward appearance starts to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of 1/2 her normal speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 1600lbs above her strength, and can now strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 20ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/2 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest. Green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has gained better control over her emotions and rage almost controling the ability though there is still a chance she could rage at any momment. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/2 their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 10ft or farther away now harmlessly boounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 9ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage. She can now lift 3000lbs above her strength. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. However, when maneuvering in trees she can move at 1/2 her speed. She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll)
█*DRAWBACKS ▬ Her speed is greatly sacrificed at the cost of her strength. ▬ Dead Weight: Because of the density of her muscle tissue when using her semblance she loses all buoyancy in any form of liquid. ▬ Rage/ Control: From level 0-2 a dice roll must be made in the post she determines to go 3rd stage and is only rolled once, to determine if her rage takes over. She rolls 100 sided die 1 time. 1-75 roll: Rage 76-100: Control
At level 3 rolls are reversed.
▬ In Level 0-2: She must go in stage order in activation of her semblance and can not choose. This changes at level 3 with free will of which part of her semblance to enter. It requires 1 post in a stage to move up or change stages.
▬ From level: 0-2 She is incapable of using her weapon in stage 3. At level 3 she is capable of wielding her weapon. Stages 1-2 are not affected as she still has control.
▬ Level 0: She can use her semblance for up to 5 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ Level 1: She can use her semblance for up to 7 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ Level 2: She can use her semblance for up to 10 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬Level 3: She can use her semblance for up to 15 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ In Rage mode, she can only be calmed by certain people (those being her 3 other team mates) Her first time ever releasing 3rd stage it takes her entire team. 2nd time it takes a certain interest. To calm her down all 3 take a place around her two lock their arms around her neck the third grabs her face and begins to sing a lullaby *to be determined by group*
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ TYRD █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Tea, Tay, Tia, Monkey, Team Leader █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 6' █WEIGHT ▬ 150
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ On her top, she wears bindings to keep herself in place, on the bottom, she wears a loincloth with a black back skirt, trimmed with red fur. She also wears a set of fur boots and fur tribal-like vest..
█ACCESSORIES ▬ A circlet on her head. █EYES ▬ Orange █BUILD ▬ muscular, and curvy █TATTOOS ▬ Tribal Tattoos on both arms and legs █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Monkey tail
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Dexterity & Agility - Teal is able to move quickly and easily whether it be on the ground, or in trees or high obstacles. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Quintuple-dextry: Her fauna trait goes beyond the tail she waves prominently around and uses freely as a third hand. Her troop lives with a curse and a blessing. Hidden under a set of fur skin boots are two sets of monkey hand feet. Her family cursed with the lower extremities of an ape-like animal. Though it is not a curse and she is the only one in her troop who finds the lower extremities of her clan an abomination. These hand-like feet are kept in tight knuckles inside the boots as such she is rather clumsy on the ground her boot sometimes catches things due to her dragging her feet across the ground, this causes her to stumble and fall a lot, when she walks it looks like a limp but is simply how she walks as she is walking on a set of knuckles making her gap in her step rather wide. Though she only uses her tail and upper limbs. She is afraid to reveal her feet and will only do so in dire need. She turns scarlet while taking her boots off but once she is off the ground she can be beautiful to watch using all 5 extensions of her body.
█Other Talents ▬ Speed- Teal is able to move faster than the average human when using an obstacle. She has a jump radius of around 25ft so long as she can grab something with the tip of her fingers she can pull herself up. Her speed when using all 5 extremities gives her a large boost compared to to when she wears her boots this makes her clumsy at times. ▬ Dexterity- Teal is able to move stuff expertly with her hands tail, and at times feet. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Quarterstaff proficiency- Teal knows his way with a Quarterstaff. She can do flips with it, or even stand on top of it to avoid attacks. █Weakest Skill ▬ Near-sighted- Teal can see close to him, but far away is blurry after 40 ft. █Other Skills ▬ Survival- Teal knows how to tie knots, which plants are edible, and things you would know to be able to survive in the wilderness. ▬ Climbing- Due to having a tail to catch onto things, she is a better climber than most.
█LIKES █ ▬ Climbing trees, █ ▬ Brave people █ ▬ Fruits! █ ▬ Plants █ ▬ (Animals) █DISLIKES █ ▬ Shy, people who don’t speak their mind █ ▬ (Foods) █ ▬ (Objects) █ ▬ (Animals) █ ▬ (Fears) █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Teal is an “in your face” kind of girl. She sees men as inferior to her, as she grew up in a matriarchal society. However, she shows this as passive aggressiveness, and will sometimes even ignore what men have to say. She is brave, and if you question it, she will prove it to you. However she can be like a slice of butter when with her team she cares for them all (even the men) with all her heart and would do anything to protect them. She treats them like her own troop. █Vernacular ▬ Turanga Leela █Positive Traits ▬ Protective, █Negative Traits ▬ Sexist, proud
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Teal grew up in a monkey village that she claims was cursed many years ago. But that is not the truth. Around 100 years ago her ancestors awoke from a slumber to find they had grown primate like extremities, some almost fully representing monkies. This terrified many until a women that showed such resilience turned it into a blessing for her people over time the village became a female dominated troop of Monkey Fauna were men were subservient to women. Men would tend to the children and the fields were the women would seek battles and and hard working jobs across the lands to raise money for their village and families. Teal was born just after the death of the great woman that lead this tribe. Teal raised in a village sought normal friends outside of her village and would often wonder far away to neighboring villages it was there she discovered how her people could be detested or feared. She would be mocked or seen as ugly, she grew up beliving in those lies and find her body to be a curse not a blessing. She was asked to leave her village 3 years ago when she spoke up against the elders demanding too know why they never sought to find a way to end this curse. To ensure she would not sew distrust in other villagers hearts she was sent on her own quest to find her self. So she did.
Along the way she would learn to survive on her own the hard way and it made her better for it. Coming from a village were it rained at least once a day the summer heat and cold blizzards became amazements to her as she traveled from area to area until she happened upon a little school and 3 people that would changer her life forever.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Tree branch █ ▬ Tree branch is a quarterstaff with a scooper at the end. Inside of the scooper, there are channels to the metal orb that can be used to store seeds from plants and trees. █Melee Form ▬ Tree branch can be used as a normal quarterstaff, the scooper end is able to be used as a wider edge to catch legs, the blades on it are meant to cute plants if needed. █Ranged Form ▬ By inserting an air dust crystal at the base of the connection to the seed collector, Teal can fire 3 bursts of 5 seeds at an opponent. They hit more like Ball bearings rather than bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ (Additional Forms) █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ Teal must have dust to fire the seeds. ▬Teal’s effective range with the seeds is 30 ft from her. ▬ The scoop can be clogged by leaves and tiny branches that require one post to clear. █OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Machete █ ▬ Seeds of flowers. █ ▬ █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Seeds █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ █*AURA COLOR ▬ Limegreen █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Teal is able to take plant life, be it plants or seeds, and cause them to grow. It takes less time for already established plants to grow. She can manipulate all kinds of plants, and some kinds of fungus, like mushrooms. The levels establish how far her range is with this, this range also includes under the ground. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Teal is able to cause roots or vines to grow, trapping an enemy. Her realm of control is within a 20ft radius from her and upto 5foot in size. If the roots/vines are already established, then it takes one post to fully grow them more and cause them to entangle. If she starts with seeds, it takes 3 posts. With this power, she can also cause flowering plants to grow. At this level, she can use it 3 times per battle. █*LEVEL 1▬ Teal is able to affect trees now, She can cause them to grow, twist, and sometimes even catch people. If the tree is already established, then it takes one post to cause it to grow. She can do this within 20 ft radius of her and upto 10ft in size. To fully grow a tree from a seed, it would take all 3 uses of this ability, and almost 5 posts to complete. She can use this 3 times per day, and level 0 increases to 4 times per day. █*LEVEL 2▬ Teal is now able to create megaflora with her semblance. What this means is that within a 40ft radius, she is able to take a normal plant, and make it into a large form of it. This can be a flower that can be 10 wide. These plants look prehistoric. The plants do need to fit in the 40ft radius of her up to 15ft in size. She can grow 3 plants like this, and if the plant already exists, then it takes one post, otherwise it takes 3 posts. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Level 3 is very much like level 3, however, Teal is now able to manipulate them into unnatural shapes, for example, making a tree grow into a house. She is still limited to the 40ft radius from her and can grow them upto 20ft in size. She can do unnatural structures 2 times per day, and all other levels increase their times by 2. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ If in an area where plants can’t grow, then the ability doesn’t work. ▬ Growing things from scratch takes a lot more aura than taking what is already there. ▬ She can take no hostile movements when she is growing plants, and hostile movements make her lose focus.
✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Affectation:
- If you are to have monkey hand-feet, it should be here in faunus features too.
Archetype:
- Quintuple dextry: So this feels more like a weakness than a benefit? As I can see how having hand feet helps climbing, movement, and other things. But all you really list here is the drawbacks to it. Can you please elaborate on the benefits?
- Also does she have a prehensile tail? I saw in climbing how it is used to catch onto things. This would be a faunus trait in and of itself (given it can help support her and be used as a full on limb to climb for example). Please pick one faunus trait (animal ability that benefits her); be it jumping up to 25ft, prehensile tail that can support her body/acts as a full on limb, or the hand feet that I can assume helps with movement and other things. She can have the tail, if you want to keep hand feet, so long as the tail doesn't provide her a benefit; being able to have it move/ pick up very light objects is fine.
- Speed: You should remove the part of 25ft jumps, as that is a faunus trait in and of itself and would replace your other one.
- You are missing an other skill. Not necessary to fill in, but just letting you know.
- Quarter staff proficiency: This is acrobatics + weapon combat, even if its just with the weapon. Please add acrobatics to other skills if you want to be able to do so.
- To keep it in line with others who have near sighted as a weakness, please make it blurry after 25ft.
History:
- I know you say the people believe it to be a curse, but how does an entire tribe of humans (im assuming human) turn into monkey faunus? We don't really allow actual curses in the rp at this time, and while there can be faunus that look a lot more animalistic than others, they don't spontaneously arise normally. We do have mythical faunus that have faunus features hidden for a time, but this feels like a different case (as that is what made some of them mythical, like the dragons, till a certain age).
Primary weapon:
- This is actually fine; I like the idea of it.
Semblance:
- This shall be addressed in next judgement when most of the above has been clarified/ fixed.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ TYRD █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Tea, Tay, Tia, Monkey, Team Leader █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 6' █WEIGHT ▬ 150
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ On her top, she wears bindings to keep herself in place, on the bottom, she wears a loincloth with a black back skirt, trimmed with red fur. She also wears a set of fur boots and fur tribal-like vest..
█ACCESSORIES ▬ A circlet on her head. █EYES ▬ Orange █BUILD ▬ muscular, and curvy █TATTOOS ▬ Tribal Tattoos on both arms and legs █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Monkey tail, Prehensile feet, Ape-like lower body
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Dexterity & Agility - Teal is able to move quickly and easily whether it be on the ground, or in trees or high obstacles. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Quintuple-dexterity: Due to having the lower body of an ape, she is able to grasp things with her 5 limbs. With this ability, she is able to wield weapons with her feet. With her tail, it's only light items such as a water bottle. █Other Talents ▬ Acrobatics- Teal is naturally very acrobatic, having spent much of her time climbing and moving through trees. As such, she can swing herself fairly easy through them and at fast speeds. Teal is able to move faster than the average human when using an obstacle to keep/build momentum thanks to this. When she swings she can use the momentum to throw herself in a radius of around 15-feet away when doing so, and as long as she can grab something with the tip of her fingers she can pull herself up. Her speed when using all 5 extremities gives her a large boost compared to when she wears her boots; which make her clumsy at times when climbing up or over obstacles. ▬ Strength: Teal is able to deadlift 800lbs. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Polearm Proficiency: Teal is well professed with polearm weapons. She can be seen using one expertly. █Weakest Skill ▬ Near-sighted- Teal can see close to her, but far away is blurry after 25 ft. █Other Skills ▬ Survival- Teal knows how to tie knots, which plants are edible, and things you would know to be able to survive in the wilderness. ▬ Climbing- Thanks to having well managed dexterity and extremities she is an excellent climber capable of using the strength of the limbs to climb great heights or travel over obstacles with ease.
█LIKES █ ▬ Climbing trees, swinging from vines, climbing obstacles susspending her self in the air █ ▬ Brave people, take your honor and hold it high. █ ▬ Fruits, veggies anything fresh and green edible to eat from mother nature █ ▬ Nature, wild life, outdoors █ ▬ Her Team, they are her troop/ family █ ▬ Kitty Kittys… But don’t tell anyone. █ ▬ Stuffed plushies… again don’t tell anyone █DISLIKES █ ▬ Shy, people who don’t speak their mind █ ▬ Wasabi…. Always wasabi █ ▬ Men, her tribe is ran by strong women and men are treated as lower dwellings so naturally she has a distaste for them however, those in her squad she does treat differently █ ▬ Jaguars though she loves animals, these creatures once plagued her village so she sees them as a threat and dislikes them. █ ▬ That the “curse” will spread █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Teal is an “in your face” kind of girl. She sees men as inferior to her, as she grew up in a matriarchal society. However, she shows this as passive aggressiveness, and will sometimes even ignore what men have to say. She is brave, and if you question it, she will prove it to you. However she can be like a slice of butter when with her team she cares for them all (even the men) with all her heart and would do anything to protect them. She treats them like her own troop. █Vernacular ▬ Turanga Leela █Positive Traits ▬ Protective, █Negative Traits ▬ Sexist, proud
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Teal grew up in a monkey village that she claims was cursed many years ago. But that is not the truth. Around 100 years ago her ancestors started giving birth to Faunus that were more monkey-like in appearance. This terrified many until a woman that showed such resilience turned it into a blessing for her people over time the village became a female dominated troop of Monkey Fauna, and men were subservient to women. Men would tend to the children and the fields where the women would seek battles and hard working jobs across the lands to raise money for their village and families. Teal was born just after the death of the great woman that led this tribe. Teal raised in a village sought normal friends outside of her village and would often wander far away to neighboring villages, it was there she discovered how her people could be detested or feared. She would be mocked or seen as ugly, she grew up believing in those lies and find her body to be a curse not a blessing. She was asked to leave her village 3 years ago when she spoke up against the elders demanding to know why they never sought to find a way to end this curse. To ensure she would not sough distrust in other villager's hearts she was sent on her own quest to find herself. So she did.
Along the way she would learn to survive on her own the hard way and it made her better for it. Coming from a village where it rained at least once a day the summer heat and cold blizzards became amazements to her as she traveled from area to area until she happened upon a little school and 3 people that would change her life forever.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ The Demolisher █ ▬ The demolisher is a polearm that has a hexagon shaped head at the top with spikes pointing out on it's more hexagonal sides. The front of the weapon is empty. On the pole, there is a button. █Melee Form ▬ This weapon has a 5 foot long pole, and the pole itself weighs about 10 lb. The head is 2 feet long and about 1 foot wide diameter, the metal forming the lip is a solid 4 inches on both sides. Every side has a spike, but alternating between on the top and bottom. The head itself weighs about 30 lb. The spikes can impale into people, and the hit is heavy. █Ranged Form ▬ By inserting a mortar round into the open top, Teal can fire a round. The way this happens is there is a spike that is a leaver that can be pulled down, and the mortar is launched by a tight spring that is released. The mortars can be fired up to 50ft. █Other Form(s) ▬ The handle can twist off of the head, for a storage form. █Ammo Type ▬ Physical ▬ Spiked Mortars- Teal uses explosive dust in the middle of a sphere of needles. When activated with aura, the round can be launched or thrown. One post after it has been activated, it will explode in a 10 ft radius, that has heat and fire to it, the needles are then launched up to a 15ft radius. Teal and team mates are not immune to this damage. █ ▬ The weapon is heavy, and slow to swing without her semblance. ▬It takes one post to properly screw the weapon back together. If the weapon is not screwed back together properly, she can accidentally launch the head. ▬ The mortar can be thrown back at Teal if the person is quick enough. ▬ The butt of the polearm must be put against the ground to stabilize it. ▬ The round ears up one Dust ration per mortar. █OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Machete █ ▬ 4 mortars █ ▬ Steal Tactical hunting/fishing Knife █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Survival kit that she keeps in a small fanny pack under her bottoms concealed from sight. Inside this kit you will find A filtered canteen that has to be changed after 5 in RP day uses that carries 12oz of liquid. Steel flint in the shape of a small stone. and 20 pieces of jerky like rations good enough to stave off hunger for 4 people for 3 days can only be replenished every other in RP day. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Primordial Rage █AURA COLOR ▬ Limegreen █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Teal condenses her Aura channeling it into her muscle fibers and tissue, as she progresses in stages she sacrifices her speed barely able to make short bursts of 10ft before having to stop this is due to the weight of the muscle fibers gained in the later stages. As she trains this will become better. With the decrease in speed also comes a large increase in defense and strength her skin thickening from the dense tissue fiber. Her appearance also slightly changes with each stage her muscles growing and thickening her outside mass till she resembles almost a gorilla like creature with a tail. Surprisingly her clothes stretch to fit each appearance change.
█*LEVEL 0 ▬ 1st Stage: In the first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her Aura. In this stage she can lift around 100lbs above her body weight while moving at her normal speed, projectiles under .5 of an inch in diameter fired from over 40ft in distance can only graze her skin with scratches and can not pierce it unless closer. Objects over the size will cause normal damage as intended.
Stage 2: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance starts to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 25ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 200lbs above her body weight and stopping the same size projectiles fired from up to 30ft away and mitigating damage in half the closer the projectile is. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/4th their original damage.
Stage 3: The final stage of her transformation Teal takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but odd red hair grows from her arms back and chest, green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way. Her speed is reduced to her normal run speed for a short burst every 10ft resting for 1 post afterward. Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still untamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movements impossible. She can now lift 500lbs above her weight In this state physical close range attacks are cut by 1/4 their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 20ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 19ft or closer deal their intended damage.
█*LEVEL 1▬ 1st Stage: In the first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her aura. In this stage she can lift around 200lbs above her body weight while moving at her normal speed, however she must rest by staying in place for one post (this does not stop her from attacking). Projectiles under .5 of an inch in diameter fired from over 35ft in distance only graze her skin with scratches and can not pierce it until closer then 34ft. Objects over the size or closer will cause normal damage as intended.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance start to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 25ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 400lbs above her body weight, and can strike with the same amount of force, her skin is cappable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 25ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/4 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a fain hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest, green steam rolls fro mher mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way if she looses control (see draw back). Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still un tamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movement impossible. She can now lift 1000lbs over her own body weight and deliver attacks of equal strength. Physical attacks are now cut in by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 15ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce of her skin. Projectiles fired 19ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage.
█*LEVEL 2▬ 1st Stage: In first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her aura. In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her body weight and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed. However she must rest by staying in place for one post (this does not stop her from attacking). Projectiles under 1.0 of an inch in diameter fired from over 30ft in distance only graze her skin with scratches can not pierce it until close then 29ft. Objects over the size or closer will cause normal damage as intended. Physical attacks aren now cut by 1/4th their intended damage.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance start to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass i now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 30ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 800lbs above her body weight, and can strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 20ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/4 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest. green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way if she looses control. Her body is now cappable of manuvering like a normal monkey at a a normal speed for every other post. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 10ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 9ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage. She can now lift 1500lbs above her body weight. She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll).
█*LEVEL 3 ▬ 1st Stage: in first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in apperance. However her veins now glow the color of her aura. In this stage she can lift around 800lbs above her body weight and strike with the same amount of force as well while move at her normal speed. However she must rest every other posts after moving for that fast (this does not stop her from attacking). Projectiles under 1.0 of an inch in diameter fired from 25ftor farther in distance harmlessly bounce off her skin, projectiles fired 24ft or over the size will cause damage as intended. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/2 their intended damage.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissuefiber. Her outward appearance starts to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 35ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 1600lbs above her body weight, and can now strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 20ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/2 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest. Green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has gained better control over her emotions and rage almost controling the ability though there is still a chance she could rage at any momment. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/2 their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 10ft or farther away now harmlessly boounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 9ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage. She can now lift 3000lbs above her body weight. She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll)
█*DRAWBACKS ▬ Her speed is greatly sacrificed at the cost of her strength. ▬ Dead Weight: Because of the density of her muscle tissue when using her semblance she loses all buoyancy in any form of liquid. ▬ Rage/ Control: From level 0-2 a dice roll must be made to determine if her rage takes over. She rolls 100 sided die 1-75 roll: Rage 76-100: Control
At level 3 rolls are reversed.
▬ In Level 0-2: She can use each stage of her semblance 2times a day. But must go stage 1-2-3 in activation order and can not activate however she pleases. However she decides when she go’s to the next stage.
▬ In level 3: She can use each stage of her semblance 3times a day, and can free choose witch stage to active (no order).
▬ Level 0: Each stage can last max 5post.
▬ Level 1: Each stage can last max 7post
▬ Level 2: Each stage can last max 10post
▬Level 3: Each stage can last max 15post
▬ In Rage mode, she can only be calmed by certain people (those being her 3 other team mates) Her first time ever releasing 3rd stage it takes her entire team. 2nd time it takes a certain interest. To calm her down all 3 take a place around her two lock their arms around her neck the third grabs her face and begins to sing a lullaby *to be determined by group*
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Judgement:
- Just going to summarize cause the below looks like a lot. And its mostly cause I went like one by one through all levels and stages for wording and such to show examples of changes that would work for the semblance (so if one sentence, for example, appears in every stage. I put a sentence of what to change it to for every stage/ level along with original so you see where since its a big semblance lol).
But in general (with point 1 and 2 being the majority of why its so long lol): 1)Changed wording of carrying stuff over body weight to over strength, which is a big buff to how it was before. Ex: instead of 150+200, its now 800+200 at some stages. 2) Changed how the speed debuff for her semblance was worded/ works, because it is one of the main weaknesses to it and in most fights people really don't specify exact distances like in dnd terms. Nor is it really said how far someone can move in a post because each post is very different time wise. 3) Clarifications on dice roll with rage for how often its rolled, as well as how long it takes to go from one stage to another (minimum). 4) Clarification to add a drawback into semblance that only was mentioned by level 2/3 stage 3(when it no longer applied; her not being able to use her weapon) 5) Changing how long/ how often she can use the semblance, because it was longer than any other semblance in guild with prior wording. And was lacking a cooldown too. But slight buff in that it doesn't have to be limited to per day.
Semblance:
- Description: "Teal condenses her Aura channeling it into her muscle fibers and tissue, as she progresses in stages she sacrifices her speed barely able to make short bursts of 10ft before having to stop this is due to the weight of the muscle fibers gained in the later stages." to "Teal condenses her Aura channeling it into her muscle fibers and tissue, as she progresses in stages she sacrifices her speed due to the weight of the muscle fibers gained in the later stages."
- Level 0, stage 1: Change: "Now capable of lifting 100lbs above her body weight" to "Now capable of lifting 100lbs above her strength"
Level 0, stage 2: "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 25ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled." I would change this to: "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/2 her usual speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased."
And to change: "Now capable of lifting 200lbs above her body weight" to this: "Now capable of lifting 200lbs above her strength"
Level 0, stage 3: "Her speed is reduced to her normal run speed for a short burst every 10ft resting for 1 post afterward." Change to "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed."
"She can now lift 500lbs above her weight" to "She can now lift 500lbs above her strength."
Changed description mention of the bursts of speed cause it wasn't really consistent with bursts at all levels/ stages. Also with having this speed debuff be less of distance traveled per post and more just that much slower. Especially since it is emphasized how much her speed is impacted by this.
I say it like this cause its hard to say how long/short a given post can be with things active makes it hard just say distance on things (and most times it won't be said how far people or things are). Plus its more a significant drawback when its more ever present kind of thing.
The other part is since her other talent is strength, she doesn't really double in strength at this level. She gets stronger and more durable, which you do say by how much, but it isn't double. And with current wording for how much she can carry, she isn't getting a boost if you just say body weight. If you say strength though, as listed above, then she is able to carry more/ is getting stronger. Cause other talent strength (which is deadlight 800) lets you carry a lot.
The explanations here will also go to apply to the other levels below, but not going to write explanations each time unless it something new. So, overall, this is buffing the character in several ways while also nerfing in others.
- Level 1, stage 1: "In this stage she can lift around 200lbs above her body weight while moving at her normal speed, however she must rest by staying in place for one post (this does not stop her from attacking)." to "In this stage she can lift around 200lbs above strength while moving at her normal speed."
Level 1, stage 2: "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 25ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 400lbs above her body weight," to "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving 1/2 her normal speed and her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 400lbs above her strength,"
Level 1, stage 3: "Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still un tamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movement impossible. She can now lift 1000lbs over her own body weight and deliver attacks of equal strength. Physical attacks are now cut in by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 15ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce of her skin. Projectiles fired 19ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage." to "Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still un tamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movement impossible, still only being able to move 1/4th as fast as normal. She can now lift 1000lbs over her own strength and deliver attacks of equal strength. Physical attacks are now cut in by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 15ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce of her skin. Projectiles fired 14ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage."
- Level 2, stage 1:
"In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her body weight and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed. However she must rest by staying in place for one post (this does not stop her from attacking)." to "In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed."
Level 2, stage 2: "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 30ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 800lbs above her body weight," to "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving 1/2 her normal speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 800lbs above her strength,"
Level 2, stage 3: "Her body is now cappable of manuvering like a normal monkey at a a normal speed for every other post." to "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. However, when maneuvering in trees she can move at 1/2 her speed."
"She can now lift 1500lbs above her body weight." to "She can now lift 1500lbs above her strength,"
I do get the flavor of being more apelike, but it was emphasized how speed was sacrificed for strength with semblance. So it doesn't make as much sense to me to normalize in speed if that is meant to be a drawback by later levels when they are nearer to their strongest point. However, because of this faunus talents and others for moving through the treetops, I would allow them to not be as penalized in speed when moving through the trees (1/2 as much instead of usual 1/4 on ground). I do know the animal itself is pretty fast, but I do this mostly to fit theme of semblance with its drawback.
- Level 3, stage 1: "In this stage she can lift around 800lbs above her body weight and strike with the same amount of force as well while move at her normal speed. However she must rest every other posts after moving for that fast (this does not stop her from attacking)." to "In this stage she can lift around 800lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while move at her normal speed."
Level 3, stage 2: "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of making 35ft burst of her normal speed every other post but her strength and defensive ability is doubled. Now capable of lifting 1600lbs above her body weight," to "Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of 1/2 her normal speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 1600lbs above her strength,"
Level 3, stage 3: "She can now lift 3000lbs above her body weight." to "She can now lift 3000lbs above her strength. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. However, when maneuvering in trees she can move at 1/2 her speed."
- Drawbacks: - Is the dice roll for rage every post? If so, please list that here
- I see how she has to go through the stages in order for levels 0-2. I would say she needs to spend at least 1 post in a stage before going to the next. Not sure if that was the original intent or no, but its what I feel helps balance/ clarity for it.
- Also I see this mentioned in level 2 and 3 but not level 0 and 1 where it actually applies: "She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll)." Please list in drawbacks she can't use her weapon for outside of stage 3 for level 2 and level 3
- Ok, so this will be the last part. In terms of how long she can use this its a bit too long. The longer lasting stat boost ones (that have significant penalties) can reach up to max of 15 posts by level 3. So rather than each stage having X uses per day and X posts per stage, we need to stream line this. You also do not need a times per day unless you want that limitation. As for durations, I would have it like this:
▬ Level 0: She can use her semblance for up to 5 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ Level 1: She can use her semblance for up to 7 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ Level 2: She can use her semblance for up to 10 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬Level 3: She can use her semblance for up to 15 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ TYRD █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Tea, Tay, Tia, Monkey, Team Leader █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 6' █WEIGHT ▬ 150
█HAIR ▬ Red █CLOTHING ▬ On her top, she wears bindings to keep herself in place, on the bottom, she wears a loincloth with a black back skirt, trimmed with red fur. She also wears a set of fur boots and fur tribal-like vest..
█ACCESSORIES ▬ A circlet on her head. █EYES ▬ Orange █BUILD ▬ muscular, and curvy █TATTOOS ▬ Tribal Tattoos on both arms and legs █SCARS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Monkey tail, Prehensile feet, Monkey-like lower body. When entering semblance she resembles more of an ape/ gorilla-like creature with a tail.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Dexterity & Agility - Teal is able to move quickly and easily whether it be on the ground, or in trees or high obstacles. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Quintuple-dexterity: Due to having the lower body of a monkey, she is able to grasp things with her 5 limbs. With this ability, she is able to wield weapons with her feet. With her tail, it's only light items such as a water bottle. █Other Talents ▬ Acrobatics- Teal is naturally very acrobatic, having spent much of her time climbing and moving through trees. As such, she can swing herself fairly easy through them and at fast speeds. Teal is able to move faster than the average human when using an obstacle to keep/build momentum thanks to this. When she swings she can use the momentum to throw herself in a radius of around 15-feet away when doing so, and as long as she can grab something with the tip of her fingers she can pull herself up. Her speed when using all 5 extremities gives her a large boost compared to when she wears her boots; which make her clumsy at times when climbing up or over obstacles. ▬ Strength: Teal is able to deadlift 800lbs. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Polearm Proficiency: Teal is well professed with polearm weapons. She can be seen using one expertly. █Weakest Skill ▬ Near-sighted- Teal can see close to her, but far away is blurry after 25 ft. █Other Skills ▬ Survival- Teal knows how to tie knots, which plants are edible, and things you would know to be able to survive in the wilderness. ▬ Climbing- Thanks to having well managed dexterity and extremities she is an excellent climber capable of using the strength of the limbs to climb great heights or travel over obstacles with ease.
█LIKES █ ▬ Climbing trees, swinging from vines, climbing obstacles susspending her self in the air █ ▬ Brave people, take your honor and hold it high. █ ▬ Fruits, veggies anything fresh and green edible to eat from mother nature █ ▬ Nature, wild life, outdoors █ ▬ Her Team, they are her troop/ family █ ▬ Kitty Kittys… But don’t tell anyone. █ ▬ Stuffed plushies… again don’t tell anyone █DISLIKES █ ▬ Shy, people who don’t speak their mind █ ▬ Wasabi…. Always wasabi █ ▬ Men, her tribe is ran by strong women and men are treated as lower dwellings so naturally she has a distaste for them however, those in her squad she does treat differently █ ▬ Jaguars though she loves animals, these creatures once plagued her village so she sees them as a threat and dislikes them. █ ▬ That the “curse” will spread █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Teal is an “in your face” kind of girl. She sees men as inferior to her, as she grew up in a matriarchal society. However, she shows this as passive aggressiveness, and will sometimes even ignore what men have to say. She is brave, and if you question it, she will prove it to you. However she can be like a slice of butter when with her team she cares for them all (even the men) with all her heart and would do anything to protect them. She treats them like her own troop. █Vernacular ▬ Turanga Leela █Positive Traits ▬ Protective, █Negative Traits ▬ Sexist, proud
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Teal grew up in a monkey village that she claims was cursed many years ago. But that is not the truth. Around 100 years ago her ancestors started giving birth to Faunus that were more monkey-like in appearance. This terrified many until a woman that showed such resilience turned it into a blessing for her people over time the village became a female dominated troop of Monkey Fauna, and men were subservient to women. Men would tend to the children and the fields where the women would seek battles and hard working jobs across the lands to raise money for their village and families. Teal was born just after the death of the great woman that led this tribe. Teal raised in a village sought normal friends outside of her village and would often wander far away to neighboring villages, it was there she discovered how her people could be detested or feared. She would be mocked or seen as ugly, she grew up believing in those lies and find her body to be a curse not a blessing. She was asked to leave her village 3 years ago when she spoke up against the elders demanding to know why they never sought to find a way to end this curse. To ensure she would not sough distrust in other villager's hearts she was sent on her own quest to find herself. So she did.
Along the way she would learn to survive on her own the hard way and it made her better for it. Coming from a village where it rained at least once a day the summer heat and cold blizzards became amazements to her as she traveled from area to area until she happened upon a little school and 3 people that would change her life forever.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ The Demolisher █ ▬ The demolisher is a polearm that has a hexagon shaped head at the top with spikes pointing out on it's more hexagonal sides. The front of the weapon is empty. On the pole, there is a button. █Melee Form ▬ This weapon has a 5 foot long pole, and the pole itself weighs about 10 lb. The head is 2 feet long and about 1 foot wide diameter, the metal forming the lip is a solid 4 inches on both sides. Every side has a spike, but alternating between on the top and bottom. The head itself weighs about 30 lb. The spikes can impale into people, and the hit is heavy. █Ranged Form ▬ By inserting a mortar round into the open top, Teal can fire a round. The way this happens is there is a spike that is a leaver that can be pulled down, and the mortar is launched by a tight spring that is released. The mortars can be fired up to 50ft. █Other Form(s) ▬ The handle can twist off of the head, for a storage form. █Ammo Type ▬ Physical ▬ Spiked Mortars- Teal uses explosive dust in the middle of a sphere of needles. When activated with aura, the round can be launched or thrown. One post after it has been activated, it will explode in a 10 ft radius, that has heat and fire to it, the needles are then launched up to a 15ft radius. Teal and team mates are not immune to this damage. █ ▬ The weapon is heavy, and slow to swing without her semblance. ▬It takes one post to properly screw the weapon back together. If the weapon is not screwed back together properly, she can accidentally launch the head. ▬ The mortar can be thrown back at Teal if the person is quick enough. ▬ The butt of the polearm must be put against the ground to stabilize it. ▬ The round ears up one Dust ration per mortar. █OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Machete █ ▬ 4 mortars █ ▬ Steal Tactical hunting/fishing Knife █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Survival kit that she keeps in a small fanny pack under her bottoms concealed from sight. Inside this kit you will find A filtered canteen that has to be changed after 5 in RP day uses that carries 12oz of liquid. Steel flint in the shape of a small stone. and 20 pieces of jerky like rations good enough to stave off hunger for 4 people for 3 days can only be replenished every other in RP day. █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█NAME ▬ Primordial Rage █AURA COLOR ▬ Limegreen █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Teal condenses her Aura channeling it into her muscle fibers and tissue, as she progresses in stages she sacrifices her speed due to the weight of the muscle fibers gained in the later stages. As she trains this will become better. With the decrease in speed also comes a large increase in defense and strength her skin thickening from the dense tissue fiber. Her appearance also slightly changes with each stage her muscles growing and thickening her outside mass till she resembles almost a gorilla like creature with a tail. Surprisingly her clothes stretch to fit each appearance change.
█*LEVEL 0 ▬ 1st Stage: In the first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her Aura. In this stage she can lift around 100lbs above her strength and can strike just as hard while moving at her normal speed, projectiles under .5 of an inch in diameter fired from over 40ft in distance can only graze her skin with scratches and can not pierce it unless closer. Objects over the size will cause normal damage as intended.
Stage 2: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance starts to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/2 her usual speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 200lbs above her strength and can strike just as hard and stopping the same size projectiles fired from up to 30ft away and mitigating damage in half the closer the projectile is. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/4th their original damage.
Stage 3: The final stage of her transformation Teal takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but odd red hair grows from her arms back and chest, green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still untamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movements impossible. She can now lift 500lbs above her strength and can strike just as hard In this state physical close range attacks are cut by 1/4 their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 20ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 19ft or closer deal their intended damage.
█*LEVEL 1▬ 1st Stage: In the first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her aura. In this stage she can lift around 200lbs above strength and can strike just as hard while moving at her normal speed. Projectiles under .5 of an inch in diameter fired from over 35ft in distance only graze her skin with scratches and can not pierce it until closer then 34ft. Objects over the size or closer will cause normal damage as intended.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance start to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving 1/2 her normal speed and her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 400lbs above her strength, and can strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 25ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/4 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a fain hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest, green steam rolls fro mher mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way if she looses control (see draw back). Her ability to maneuver like normal is also hindered as her power is still un tamed this makes her normal climbing and swinging movement impossible, still only being able to move 1/4th as fast as normal. She can now lift 1000lbs over her own strength and deliver attacks of equal strength. Physical attacks are now cut in by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 15ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce of her skin. Projectiles fired 14ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage.
█*LEVEL 2▬ 1st Stage: In first stage of her semblance besides her skin taking on a rather glossy shine almost there is no physical change in appearance however her veins glow the color of her aura. In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed. Projectiles under 1.0 of an inch in diameter fired from over 30ft in distance only graze her skin with scratches can not pierce it until close then 29ft. Objects over the size or closer will cause normal damage as intended. Physical attacks aren now cut by 1/4th their intended damage.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissue fiber. Her outward appearance start to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass i now almost double its size bulk wise. In this stage she lift around 400lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed., and can strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 20ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/4 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest. green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has no control over her emotions or rage and will attack anything that comes her way if she looses control. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. However, when maneuvering in trees she can move at 1/2 her speed. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/4th their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 10ft or farther away now harmlessly bounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 9ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage. She can now lift 1500lbs above her strength. She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll).
█*LEVEL 3 ▬ 1st Stage: In this stage she can lift around 800lbs above her strength and strike with the same amount of force as well while moving at her normal speed. Projectiles under 1.0 of an inch in diameter fired from 25ftor farther in distance harmlessly bounce off her skin, projectiles fired 24ft or over the size will cause damage as intended. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/2 their intended damage.
2nd Stage: Her arms and legs begin to thicken as her aura continues to condense the tissuefiber. Her outward appearance starts to change with this, her body growing thicker all around as her mass is now almost double its size bulk wise. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of 1/2 her normal speed but her strength and defensive ability is increased. Now capable of lifting 1600lbs above her strength, and can now strike with the same amount of force, her skin is capable of stopping the same size projectiles fired from upto 20ft or farther harmlessly bounce off her skin. Close physical damage is cut by 1/2 its intended damage.
3rd Stage: The final stage of her transformation Teal Takes on almost complete Gorilla like features. Her skin glows a faint hue of her Aura, her face is still hers but a lot more ape like as she becomes more ape like in feature. Red hair grows from her arms, back and chest. Green steam rolls from her mouth in this stage as well though it has no effect, or ability. In this state she has gained better control over her emotions and rage almost controling the ability though there is still a chance she could rage at any momment. Physical attacks are now cut by 1/2 their power and physical projectiles (size mentioned above) fired from 10ft or farther away now harmlessly boounce off her skin. Projectiles fired 9ft or closer deal their intended amount of damage. She can now lift 3000lbs above her strength. Her speed begins to suffer at this point, only capable of moving at 1/4th her usual speed. However, when maneuvering in trees she can move at 1/2 her speed. She can now use her weapon in this stage so long as she does not loose control (rage roll)
█*DRAWBACKS ▬ Her speed is greatly sacrificed at the cost of her strength. ▬ Dead Weight: Because of the density of her muscle tissue when using her semblance she loses all buoyancy in any form of liquid. ▬ Rage/ Control: From level 0-2 a dice roll must be made in the post she determines to go 3rd stage and is only rolled once, to determine if her rage takes over. She rolls 100 sided die 1 time. 1-75 roll: Rage 76-100: Control
At level 3 rolls are reversed.
▬ In Level 0-2: She must go in stage order in activation of her semblance and can not choose. This changes at level 3 with free will of which part of her semblance to enter. It requires 1 post in a stage to move up or change stages.
▬ From level: 0-2 She is incapable of using her weapon in stage 3. At level 3 she is capable of wielding her weapon. Stages 1-2 are not affected as she still has control.
▬ Level 0: She can use her semblance for up to 5 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ Level 1: She can use her semblance for up to 7 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ Level 2: She can use her semblance for up to 10 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬Level 3: She can use her semblance for up to 15 posts. She has a 5 post cooldown between uses.
▬ In Rage mode, she can only be calmed by certain people (those being her 3 other team mates) Her first time ever releasing 3rd stage it takes her entire team. 2nd time it takes a certain interest. To calm her down all 3 take a place around her two lock their arms around her neck the third grabs her face and begins to sing a lullaby *to be determined by group*
