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 Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 5:53 pm
   ＡＮＧＥＬ ＩＮＦＯＲＭＡＴＩＯＮTrue Name: Ariel
Cover Name: Christina
Nickname: N/A
Age: 100
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: Tan
Hair Color:Black
Hair Length: Waist-length
Wing Detail: Pristine white wings, average wingspan
Appears to be: 17
Gender: Female
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Likes: Ramen,Sushi,German food
Dislikes:Spicy foods
Hobbies:Drawing,Cooking,Dancing
Birthday:03/11
Horoscope:Pisces
Personality:Ariel/Christina is well known amongst other Angels for her bright,bubbly personality. She is rarely seen not smiling, or giggling. She strongly believes that Gabriel and Sariel will return once she has learned all there is to know about Demons. She has a habit of getting overexcited over any sort of cute thing, and often takes stray animals home with her. She also seems to enjoy learning about most subjects-excluding math.
Ariel/Christina was born 100 years ago, her life was extremely sheltered and she was raised by two angels, Gabriel and Sariel.
She was protected from ever learning about demons and was sent to live in the human realm with her two guardians as"parental figures. They trained her to be skilled with various types of weaponry, and taught her how to fight, and eventually how to fly and control her wings. They never told her why she was training or why she needed to learn to fight, until after their disappearance.
Many years later, Gabriel and Sariel suddenly vanished leaving Christina to fend for herself in the human realm.She enrolled herself in True Cross Academy, hoping to learn more about the life she was originally sheltered from. She also wished to learn what became of her two guardians and wished to protect those around her in the same manner as they protected her. She gradually climbed her way up the ranks of her fellow Angels and became known as one of the Seven Archangels. Her nickname amongst Angels is the Imperium Angelus. She strongly believes that her guardians will return once she has proved herself worthy in their eyes.
ＯＴＨＥＲRank: One of the Seven Archangels Weapon of choice:Staff/KnivesPicture:
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2014 7:18 pm
Hello, dear. Before I can accept your profile,
there are a few issues that need to be resolved.
I'd appreciate if you didn't bold all the text.
The bold was only to be used on the things
like name, nickname, age, etc, and not what
hers actually is.
So instead of Name:Christina Juno Lumine,
it would be Name: Christina Juno Lumine
(with a space between them preferably)
Also, is Christina Juno Lumine a cover name? Angels
generally only have one name and it's an old biblical
sounding one.
Please put the picture in the proper designated area.
It's at the very top of the profile format, you'll see it resembles
[imgright](Anime picture goes here. Nothing too big)[/imgright] Is she going to be a student exorcist?
If so, please delete this and transfer her information
into the proper format and place it
in the student exorcist profile area. Or, if you ask me to, I will
move it to the student exorcist profile area and there you can
edit it into the proper profile format.
Please add onto her personality. I expect complete sentences
and a paragraph at the very least.
Lastly, 10,000 years seems like a very long time for someone
who is considered "naive about the world." I doubt she'd be a
student, let alone in innocent, at that age, so I'd recommend
changing that to something lower (100s perhaps?) or changing
her personality and back story to fit it.
Thank you for your time.
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2014 12:09 pm
Achidanza
Hello, dear. Before I can accept your profile,
there are a few issues that need to be resolved.
I'd appreciate if you didn't bold all the text.
The bold was only to be used on the things
like name, nickname, age, etc, and not what
hers actually is.
So instead of Name:Christina Juno Lumine,
it would be Name: Christina Juno Lumine
(with a space between them preferably)
Also, is Christina Juno Lumine a cover name? Angels
generally only have one name and it's an old biblical
sounding one.
Please put the picture in the proper designated area.
It's at the very top of the profile format, you'll see it resembles
[imgright](Anime picture goes here. Nothing too big)[/imgright] Is she going to be a student exorcist?
If so, please delete this and transfer her information
into the proper format and place it
in the student exorcist profile area. Or, if you ask me to, I will
move it to the student exorcist profile area and there you can
edit it into the proper profile format.
Please add onto her personality. I expect complete sentences
and a paragraph at the very least.
Lastly, 10,000 years seems like a very long time for someone
who is considered "naive about the world." I doubt she'd be a
student, let alone in innocent, at that age, so I'd recommend
changing that to something lower (100s perhaps?) or changing
her personality and back story to fit it.
Thank you for your time.
Thanks for checking it over, I've edited the portions you asked to, and I only make the name Christina Juno Lumine because,quite frankly, I was running out of names...
I'm still figuring out what hers should be.
I also edited the time to 100 years old, and I altered her back story to fit.
In regards to the school, I thought that she would masquerade as a student exorcist, but really wanted to learn about the past/history of angels and demons if that's okay with you.
Her cover name will be "Christina" and "Uriel" will be her true name.
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2014 5:34 pm
Mikkabi Hello ^_^
Thanks for checking it over, I've edited the portions you asked to, and I only make the name Christina Juno Lumine because,quite frankly, I was running out of names...
I'm still figuring out what hers should be.
I also edited the time to 100 years old, and I altered her back story to fit.
In regards to the school, I thought that she would masquerade as a student exorcist, but really wanted to learn about the past/history of angels and demons if that's okay with you.
Her cover name will be "Christina" and "Uriel" will be her true name.
I appreciate the cooperation, but
the name Uriel already belongs to
an angel in existence. High angelic
positions such as that will only go
to people of which I know can roleplay
properly. If you'd like to send me an
example of your skills to see, and
if I approve, then you can keep the
name, but know that much will be
expected of her, since she would be
a higher up on the Angelic scale.
Also, is she a practicing exorcist?
If so, say the word and I shall move
this thread to its proper place to save
you the trouble of having to delete and
copy and paste o:
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2014 5:38 pm
Achidanza Mikkabi Hello ^_^
Thanks for checking it over, I've edited the portions you asked to, and I only make the name Christina Juno Lumine because,quite frankly, I was running out of names...
I'm still figuring out what hers should be.
I also edited the time to 100 years old, and I altered her back story to fit.
In regards to the school, I thought that she would masquerade as a student exorcist, but really wanted to learn about the past/history of angels and demons if that's okay with you.
Her cover name will be "Christina" and "Uriel" will be her true name.
I appreciate the cooperation, but
the name Uriel already belongs to
an angel in existence. High angelic
positions such as that will only go
to people of which I know can roleplay
properly. If you'd like to send me an
example of your skills to see, and
if I approve, then you can keep the
name, but know that much will be
expected of her, since she would be
a higher up on the Angelic scale.
Also, is she a practicing exorcist?
If so, say the word and I shall move
this thread to its proper place to save
you the trouble of having to delete and
copy and paste o:
That'd be great if you could move the profile to the Student Exorcism one, but it's okay that she's still an angel...right?
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