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 Posted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 1:22 pm
 Amunet
Egyptian Style Sword
Nickname: Hidden
Birthday: April 14
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 132 lbs
Nationality: American
Homeland: Denver, Colorado
Accent: None
Personality/Mannerism: A quiet person who really opens up to friends, but seems to make friends quickly. A kindhearted person.
Appearance: Light blue hair. Grey eyes. Light brown jacket with black pants. Running shoes. Headphones with her always.
Partner: Searching for one
Personal Skill: Is a very good artist
Occupation: Unemployed
Rank: Student
Classification: Egyptian Weapon
Family Members: Blake Sheut- Older Brother. Is a normal weapons dealer
Mary Sheut: Was a waitress. Now deceased
Galen Sheut: Was owner of the shop her brother owns. Now deceased
Friends: Dylan Night: A friend of hers that works in her brothers store. Childhood friends
Dan Ashwing: A neighbor and a close family friend.
Ever Charady: Another childhood friend, and loves to try to push Amunet to her limit.
Enemies: Anyone threatening her friends or family.
History/Background: Lost her parents when she was very little. Her parents both died the same night when Amunet's old house caught fire. They usered out their children before they even thought of themselves. Her older brother raised her after they died.
She joined the DWMA when she found out she was a weapon. She was happy to finally be able to so something worth wile. People call her Hidden, because that is what her name stands for.
Weapon Form: 
Soul Resonance Form:
Soul Color: Pale gold. With what seems like Ahnk symbols floating around it.
Weapon Type: Egyptian
Abilities: Rev Up:An ability that makes her attacks stronger and quicker to hit, but it takes a long time to charge up enough power.
Gatekeeper: Only achieved by a complete soul resounce. Both Meister and Weapon hit the enemy with a flurry of attacks. Is really obvious to enimies and if not protected, will give the enimies enough time to attack.
Hobbies: Listening to music. Hanging out with friends. Drawing.
Flaws:
- Klutz (trips a lot)
- Shy around new people
- Not a lot of confidence
Weaknesses: Physical weakness. Not very strong.
Emotional weakness. Not a lot of confidence. Will be discurouged easily.
Likes:
- Sweets
-friends
-Music
-Cheesy comedy shows
Dislikes:
-Bullies
-Mushrooms
-Extream Cold
Theme Song:
Interesting Facts/Trivia:
-Really loves staying up late
-An average student
-hates studying
-Visits her brother often
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Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:22 pm
It's good...just...it's seems really plain, and very little details.
In the bio it says her and her brother's parents died, and it had happened when she was very little. Mind giving a little more info on that? Like how they died, what had happened before then, etc.
That and in the family section, you did not include the parents...You may wanna edit that in since they're mentioned in the bio.
Also, your abilities need flaws.
As for your friends section, please describe which character is her friend, and not just "A few close friends, gets along with most".
Other than that, she's really cool. biggrin
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 2:39 pm
Reiko Iwamaru It's good...just...it's seems really plain, and very little details.
In the bio it says her and her brother's parents died, and it had happened when she was very little. Mind giving a little more info on that? Like how they died, what had happened before then, etc.
That and in the family section, you did not include the parents...You may wanna edit that in since they're mentioned in the bio.
Also, your abilities need flaws.
As for your friends section, please describe which character is her friend, and not just "A few close friends, gets along with most".
Other than that, she's really cool. biggrin Thanks for the advice. smile I edited it a little bit and added more detail. So if you could help me out and tell me if it's fine? Thank you if you do!
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Posted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:46 pm
Ghost Wolf15 Reiko Iwamaru It's good...just...it's seems really plain, and very little details.
In the bio it says her and her brother's parents died, and it had happened when she was very little. Mind giving a little more info on that? Like how they died, what had happened before then, etc.
That and in the family section, you did not include the parents...You may wanna edit that in since they're mentioned in the bio.
Also, your abilities need flaws.
As for your friends section, please describe which character is her friend, and not just "A few close friends, gets along with most".
Other than that, she's really cool. biggrin Thanks for the advice. smile I edited it a little bit and added more detail. So if you could help me out and tell me if it's fine? Thank you if you do!
Approved!
Head on over to the "Book of Meisters and Weapons" or...however it's titled, (I forget sweatdrop ) and make your topic to hold your charries there~
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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