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alw8701
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:25 pm


This song is from Angel Beats, it played when Yui had passed on...
I decided to write my own version to fit the english language, but I don't know if it's good or not, I think I want to rewrite an alternative version 'cause I believe I messed up on the second chorus with the lyrics (I just kept it the same as the first chorus and I don't think it is the same). But here it is biggrin

Long before we would always fight,
The moments I keep close to me,
Just the memories you and I,
always share.
You taught me not to be so afraid,
Despite my broken wings I've recieved,
You'd say "You can surpass it all,
And find happiness along the way, just believe."

I'll go, even if I fail,
Even if I am by myself,
Bringing the dream with you and I,
Though I wake up without you right here.
And I would always be happy,
It was something that I always felt,
Even though we are so lonely,
We're smiling now, but we've got to go.

Thinking we would always be,
Together and never leave,
But I knew that was just a dream of mine,
Waking up to a new morning once again,
I have learned to cherish life,
'Cause you gave me all you had and more,
Though we now move on our separate ways,
Without strife.

I'll go, even if I fail,
Even if I am by myself,
Bringing the dream with you and I,
Though I wake up without you right here.
And I would always be happy,
It was something that I always felt,
Even though we are so lonely,
We're smiling now, but we've got to go.

I'll go, even by myself,
Just sad from the lonliness,
I hear you saying "Please don't cry,"
I could feel you holding me again.
Just because I am all alone,
Just stay 'cause I could fall apart,
I hear you saying "Please don't die,"
I could feel the warmth inside my heart.

Running around in these circles,
Time would never begin to end,
I don't remember anything,
But your promises you'd always say.
If I try to close my sad eyes,
I can hear you laugh along with me,
For this is now one of my dreams,
One of my most precious treasures.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 3:34 pm


Okay, here is my redo of the english lyrics biggrin Please tell me what you think biggrin and tell me which one you think is better.

Long before we would always fight,
The moments I keep close to me,
Just the memories you and I,
Always share.
You taught me not to be so afraid,
Despite my broken wings, I can fly,
You'd say "You can surpass it all,
And find happiness along the way," and that's why.

I'll go even if I fail,
Even if I am by myself,
Bringing the dream with you and I,
And glad it was you and no one else.
And I would always be happy,
It was something that I always felt,
Now I wake up to new mornings,
Though I wake up without you right here.

I would always play around,
That was just how I would feel,
But I know that was just a feeling I had.
I don't regret that I was born just like this,
I have learned to cherish life,
But it's the end of this festival,
So lonely, but soon we must move on,
Without strife.

I'll go anywhere with you,
Carrying everything I have learned,
I will show you what I can do,
Make this dream of happiness come true.
Even if we depart sometime,
No matter how far away we go,
I will be alright all because,
I'm waking to a brand new morning.

I'll go, even by myself,
Even if I want to cry,
I hear you say I shouldn't die,
I can feel you holding me again.
Just because I am all alone,
Just sad from the lonliness,
I hear you say I shouldn't cry,
I can feel the warmth inside my heart.

Running around in these circles,
Time would never begin to end,
I don't remember anything,
But your promises you'd always say.
If I try to close my sad eyes,
I can hear you laugh along with me,
For this is now one of my dreams,
This is my most precious treasure.

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