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christianthecub

PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 11:17 pm


ғeel free to call me. . .
[Jesse greyguard] stare

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υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
[a male]

чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
[14]

The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
[December 13]

α lot of people say I'm. . .

Mysterious at first because I tend to sit back and watch everything that is happening. I don't speak until spoken to, but after that I can have a full conversation with the person. I can get angry fast. Interogating me on anything can stir this, also if someone is pounding on me or esspecially another person I get furious. With me the anger takes over. My illusion takes over. They can see and even feel the pain i want them to feel weather its getting decked in the face or getting eaten alive. I don't get upset often, but when I do Its hell. I don't speak to anyone, I don't leave my bed, And I just stare up. Thinking, I overthink everything...

care to hear my story?
I lived with my family for 13 years, in a large city. It was a simple life really school, eat, and sleep. That was it nothing more, nothing less. When i tried getting into activites like sports they could of cared less. I didn't even like sports but i thought it would make them happy.But one night they were murdered for not paying their drug fees. I never even knew they were druggies until the authorities told me the whole story.It was so obvious too.They were a bit weird sometimes, but I had figured it was the illusion taking over. Of course i was the one to find them dead and bloody in the living room.At first I thought it was the illusion, but then i touched them, and the blood was real. I simply called 911 and said I had found my parents dead. And all of the therapists i went to thought i was mental dew to the fact the situation didnt bother me at all. I mean truly it never bothered me because they were never there for me. They brushed me off with everything I did.Maybe thats how I developed my powers... But instead of going into some foster care I decided i should come into the academy. These powers needed control, there were times when the illusion took over, and i couldnt do anything about it. So that's how I got here, but Im not as helpless as i sound...

αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
I have 1 simple ability. My illusion. I can make anyone think something is real or make them seem like there in another place or doing something, and then in the middle of it all i can make the come straight back to reality.

I aםore. . .
o Reading
o relaxing
o writing
o drawing
o listening to music
o exploring a forest
o socializing
o and actually talking

єveryone of these drive me mad. . .
o ignorance
o pointless hatered
o sunlight
o heat
o migranes
o being ignored

мy homeroom and dorm room are. . .
Dorm: [Dorm Room, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
Homeroom: [Magics and weaponry ]

чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
[indiana0jones]
PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:55 pm



Hello, thank you for your patience.

You will have to really elaborate on Jesse's personality. Here are a few pointers: How does he feel when he's happy or sad? What makes him angry? Why do people think he is mysterious on first encounter? Is a type of silent observer who prefers to watch rather than join along in a conversation? Or is it simply because he is introverted and prioritizes himself over others?

Please add more to his biography as well, it seems rather choppy. What was his life like before he discovered his deceased family? Why wasn't he affected by their death? Was it because he didn't like them or they treated him badly? Did Jesse have any other relatives to take care of him or was he avoided because the rest of the family was aware of their consumption of drugs? When did he discover his abilities? Did he hide it from his family?

I would also request that you either reduce the number of powers to two or tone their intensity down a little. Shape shifting, telepathy and illusions seem a bit much for me since you do not mention a single drawback to his abilities. After all, Fuyu Academy is still an educational institution and you should leave room for improvement to his abilities.



Sapphire Waltz
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christianthecub

PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:41 pm


Whew , Fixed it ! Sorry about that before, I was in a bit of a rush! But i'll take my time from now on!!!!!! xd biggrin biggrin biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 11:31 pm



Thank you for editing the profile, it looks much better now : D

Jesse Greyguard is approved and sorted into Burnar!

Please wait patiently for his dorm. Meanwhile, you can come join the fun in the New Year's Event!

Sapphire Waltz
Vice Captain


Fuyu Muley
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 7:49 pm


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Jesse now has a dorm!


Burnar House, Grullo Dorm


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