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 Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:33 am
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/chatterbox/my-heart-on-a-page/t.48108937/?_gaia_t_=3936
I stared this thread a reeeeeeeealy long time ago and since i really like writing sometimes I might just post a thing or two starting here *stomps foot on ground*. 3nodding So enjoy! or Don't..... meh. Feel free to write your own stuff!
Love,
Your Captain
Spotty
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:32 pm
"if you die then die proud,if I die then i die a brave death"
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:01 pm
The greatest thing you'll ever know is to love and to be loved in return.
From the Moulin Rouge heart
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:04 pm
uterrly true spot utterly true (hehe i said utter)
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:56 am
Hate Me, Shake Me, Break Me, but you will never Take Me.
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Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:33 am
Here's the preface for my book: The wailing, whining wind howled viciously; the very sound of it made the trees shudder, although it was hard to see because they were being pushed and shoved around like ragdolls in the wind. The wind tossed bins around, scattering litter everywhere and plucked leaves off their very branches and blew them away, losing them into the night. Windows shook, bins fell and doors creaked open, but only to slam shut again. It was a wind like no other; it seemed to have a mind of its own. Opinions?
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:13 am
cupcakenerdxD Here's the preface for my book: The wailing, whining wind howled viciously; the very sound of it made the trees shudder, although it was hard to see because they were being pushed and shoved around like ragdolls in the wind. The wind tossed bins around, scattering litter everywhere and plucked leaves off their very branches and blew them away, losing them into the night. Windows shook, bins fell and doors creaked open, but only to slam shut again. It was a wind like no other; it seemed to have a mind of its own. Opinions? I had to read the first sentence over to understand what it says. Maybe a little revising of words? But otherwise it's beautiful!!
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:16 am
There they stand. They watch us with their lusting eyes. Oh if they could grab us. They try to reach but the wall, the watery wall fights them. watch them turn thier heads to a passerby. Oh how they long. But they are dead and we are still here. It is sad for them but we must forget.
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:48 am
Spot Guardian cupcakenerdxD Here's the preface for my book: The wailing, whining wind howled viciously; the very sound of it made the trees shudder, although it was hard to see because they were being pushed and shoved around like ragdolls in the wind. The wind tossed bins around, scattering litter everywhere and plucked leaves off their very branches and blew them away, losing them into the night. Windows shook, bins fell and doors creaked open, but only to slam shut again. It was a wind like no other; it seemed to have a mind of its own. Opinions? I had to read the first sentence over to understand what it says. Maybe a little revising of words? But otherwise it's beautiful!!
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