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PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 3:33 pm


This is the place to post all your poetry. Anyone is welcome to post whether you think its good or bad.
All writing of any kind can be improved so don't feel bad even some of the most talented authors need improvement, including myself lol! mrgreen  
PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 9:16 pm


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Lighting struck my heart for the second time in my life when my one and only love left me far behind. My tears flowing softly like fire down my face, leaving acidic lines of hope and dreams. "I'm no good for you," he whispered through my window while I slept, "The love just isn't there anymore." He left me in the darkness before the dawn, leaving my bed, heart and life cold as the winter morning. To never see his bright shining eyes or run my fingers through his dark gentle curls again. To never again feel his warm body against mine. I could never love another after the love he and I had shared. With an echo of the lighting in my heart, I went to my bathroom and turned it red with my love.

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Lighting struck my heart for the second time in my life when my one and only love left me far behind. My tears flowing softly like fire down my face, leaving acidic lines of hope and dreams. "I'm no good for you," he whispered through my window while I slept, "The love just isn't there anymore." He left me in the darkness before the dawn, leaving my bed, heart and life cold as the winter morning. To never see his bright shining eyes or run my fingers through his dark gentle curls again. To never again feel his warm body against mine. I could never love another after the love he and I had shared. With an echo of the lighting in my heart, I went to my bathroom and turned it red with my love.

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wow! thats really good! i love it.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:33 am


Im forever lost in his eyes, but he only tells me lies. Never a day went by that I could go a day without thinking about him. I dont know what to do now, but i get through the days somehow. He always gets on my nerves but his eyes pull me back to him. I wish I was never lost in his eyes. To most it comes as a suprise, but I love his eyes. What do i do if i am lost in his eyes... but all he can do is tell me lies? (i wrote this poem in five minuets when i felt this way. Sorry if it's bad biggrin )

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:45 am


Mizz Pacheco da 1 nd only
Im forever lost in his eyes, but he only tells me lies. Never a day went by that I could go a day without thinking about him. I dont know what to do now, but i get through the days somehow. He always gets on my nerves but his eyes pull me back to him. I wish I was never lost in his eyes. To most it comes as a suprise, but I love his eyes. What do i do if i am lost in his eyes... but all he can do is tell me lies? (i wrote this poem in five minuets when i felt this way. Sorry if it's bad biggrin )

I have totally felt like that. It's like I know who and what he is and yet there is this part that just sucks me in.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:48 am


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Lighting struck my heart for the second time in my life when my one and only love left me far behind. My tears flowing softly like fire down my face, leaving acidic lines of hope and dreams. "I'm no good for you," he whispered through my window while I slept, "The love just isn't there anymore." He left me in the darkness before the dawn, leaving my bed, heart and life cold as the winter morning. To never see his bright shining eyes or run my fingers through his dark gentle curls again. To never again feel his warm body against mine. I could never love another after the love he and I had shared. With an echo of the lighting in my heart, I went to my bathroom and turned it red with my love.

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wow! thats really good! i love it.

Not really but thanks.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:50 am


magickgirl
Mizz Pacheco da 1 nd only
Im forever lost in his eyes, but he only tells me lies. Never a day went by that I could go a day without thinking about him. I dont know what to do now, but i get through the days somehow. He always gets on my nerves but his eyes pull me back to him. I wish I was never lost in his eyes. To most it comes as a suprise, but I love his eyes. What do i do if i am lost in his eyes... but all he can do is tell me lies? (i wrote this poem in five minuets when i felt this way. Sorry if it's bad biggrin )

I have totally felt like that. It's like I know who and what he is and yet there is this part that just sucks me in.

i know!! its like take this hold off me. i have seen your true colors but i cant seem to part.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:46 am


Mizz Pacheco da 1 nd only
magickgirl
Mizz Pacheco da 1 nd only
Im forever lost in his eyes, but he only tells me lies. Never a day went by that I could go a day without thinking about him. I dont know what to do now, but i get through the days somehow. He always gets on my nerves but his eyes pull me back to him. I wish I was never lost in his eyes. To most it comes as a suprise, but I love his eyes. What do i do if i am lost in his eyes... but all he can do is tell me lies? (i wrote this poem in five minuets when i felt this way. Sorry if it's bad biggrin )

I have totally felt like that. It's like I know who and what he is and yet there is this part that just sucks me in.

i know!! its like take this hold off me. i have seen your true colors but i cant seem to part.

I love both of the poems there awesomely amazingly good. mrgreen  

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:06 am


An ode I wrote to my belated dad a long time ago, R.I.P

Quote:
Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why not the world, just flow like the Moon.
I’ve seen death,
Straight up to my face,
But I have no one to show my rage.

Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why must the world, be filled with fun.
I’ve seen laughter till the end of June,
With something that I’ve lacked,
But letting go is something I want back.

You’ve been there since,
I’ve opened my eyes for the very first time,
But now you’re gone with a blink of an eye.
My life has now been weak and shy.
But now it's too late to reply
ODE
PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 7:53 pm


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An ode I wrote to my belated dad a long time ago, R.I.P

Quote:
Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why not the world, just flow like the Moon.
I’ve seen death,
Straight up to my face,
But I have no one to show my rage.

Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why must the world, be filled with fun.
I’ve seen laughter till the end of June,
With something that I’ve lacked,
But letting go is something I want back.

You’ve been there since,
I’ve opened my eyes for the very first time,
But now you’re gone with a blink of an eye.
My life has now been weak and shy.
But now it's too late to reply
ODE


Omg I didn't see this till today. Omg its amazing, I heart it. Post More if you have some I would love to read them  

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:27 am


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Well I do have a whole bunch more, it's from one of these Poetry projects from school, I'll add in another possibly 5-8 more poems. Also I might just write more since for me, are easier to write than songs ^^"
PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:58 am


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Well I do have a whole bunch more, it's from one of these Poetry projects from school, I'll add in another possibly 5-8 more poems. Also I might just write more since for me, are easier to write than songs ^^"

I'm sure writing poetry is easier then writing songs. I write books cause its easier then everything to me.  

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:33 pm


All these poems are originals by me, for a poetry project in English xP
The previous one repeats but ... yea this is all my work... so... if you want to use one just ask me for permission ... other than that... please give me credit . _ .

Quote:
Helicopter:

The helicopters which fell,
From their broken and shattered shells
The children had caught
Those seeds which had rot.
Though it had made their hands smell.
I’ve known you’ll still be there with me LIMERICK


Quote:
Ocean’s Calm

The sparkling of blue,
And waves settled on the shore.
Now, the ocean’s calm… HAIKU


Quote:
Cloudy Sky

The floating cottons,
Forming the figures of life,
Is a cloudy sky. HAIKU


Quote:
Howl to the Moon

The gleeful moon smiles
To a wolf loyal and brave
Howls to the moon HAIKU


Quote:
Torch-lit Sun:

Cross the torch-lit sun,
To the pitch black sky
Laughter with children having fun
With birds flying way up high

To the pitch black sky
Where the swimming fish
With birds flying way up high
Get eaten by a silent hiss

Where the swimming fish
By the fresh green trees
Get eaten by a silent hiss
When the end of life falls like a leaf

By the fresh green trees,
Laugher of children having fun,
When the end of life falls like a leaf,
Cross the torch-lit Sun. PANTOUM





Quote:
Ode to the End of Life:

Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why not the world, just flow like the Moon.
I’ve seen death,
Straight up to my face,
But I have no one to show my grace.

Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why must the world, be filled with fun.
I’ve seen laughter till the end of June,
With something that I’ve lacked,
But letting go is something I want back.

You’ve been there since,
I’ve opened my eyes for the very first time,
But now you’re gone with a blink of an eye.
My life has now been weak and shy.
But now it is, too late to reply. ODE







Quote:
Cycle of life

With the beautiful sea of wet green grass in spring,
To the loud shout of fun in summer.
With the floor of un-forgettable feelings
To the cold life-less versions of the weak.

The blooming of life growing by response,
The time where joy is most treasured comes back.
As time marches on, life changes by age anon,
But memories stayed with happy flash-backs.

Just remember all the pink cherry blossoms,
The waves crashing onto the soft silk shore,
Think of all the orange leaves of autumn,
Nor forget the blank white snow on the floor.

Life is like a cycle that doesn’t stop.
Life is only like dew from a dew drop. SONNET










Quote:
Elements of Nature

Fire lights, as the Sun rises up high,
The lonely tears rising by one’s own eye.
The soft wind blowing across the high-tide.
Trees that rise over the infinite sky.

Flames of burning candle slowly growing,
While the water of the endless ocean,
Flies to the mercy of the restless blowing,
Towards the calm breezy trees flowing with motion.

The breaths of trees, lighting the flamed candles,
That becomes swept by the violent winds kick.
Water slowly growing calm by the breeze,
Becoming four elements of nature

The water drips down the calm grass,
While the flame goes out by the winds pass. SONNET




Quote:
Ode to Unseen War

The green plants of life,
Fight a war, alone and cold,
For their own independent strife.

Trees burn, trees fall,
Trees tall, or small.
Live in the unseen world

The wind blows with a whirl,
Making the war more immense.
Protecting there defense.

Trees burn, trees fall,
Trees tall, or small.
Live in the unseen world

The trees falling and slowly dying
The war goes on
The trees die off, too soon to be gone. ODE





Quote:
THE TREES!!!

THE TREES THE TREES!
WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING TO THE TREES!!!
THEIR DEFENSELESS!!!
QUIT BURNING THE TREES!!!
WHY THE TREES!?!?
DID THE TREES DO ANYTHING TO YOU!?
NO I DIDN’T HINK SO!
SO WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO THE TREES!!!
QUIT BURNING THE TREES!!!

Why the trees?

I need an answer I say.
Why would you burn down the trees?
The trees are the earth’s lungs.
SO WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO THE TREES!
THE TREES THE TREES!!!
WHY THE TREES!!!
TREES ARE DYING NOW!!!
CAUSE OF WHO? CAUSE OF YOU!!!
SEE THE PAPER INFRONT OF YOU!?!?
THOSE PIECES OF PAPERS ARE TREES!!!

HOW MANY DO YOU KILL A DAY!!!???
PROBABLY 5-10 TREES A DAY YOU KILLER!!!
THOSE TREES HAVE A LIFE TOO!!!
So why would you do this to the trees?

FREE VERSE


Quote:
Youth

Age moves at the mercy of Time,
Slowly becoming slower and weaker.
Like the young children singing their chimes,
The elders reading and watching the sky shimmer.

Slowly becoming slower and weaker,
Let your youth last.
The elders reading and watching the sky shimmer,
Thinking of their happy lives in the past.

Let your youth Last,
As long as it possibly can.
Thinking of their happy lives in the past,
Achieve further than you have ever ran.

As long as it possibly can,
Age moves at the mercy of Time.
Achieve further than you have ever ran.
Like the young children singing their chimes. PANTOUM





Quote:
Ode to Light

The glares of the calm bright lights,
Shine through the calm blue water.
Shimmering with sparkles of its might,
Tells how much light really matters.
Falling with a welcomed feeling.

Light reflects off the moon-beamed moon.
Spreading like the little buds from growing mushrooms.
Shadows crawling up from the roots of the trees,
The moon’s gaze swallows the darkened leaves.
Sprawling like a virus splitting.

The welcoming rays from the Sun,
Shine in the faces of the young.
Glittering off the calmed ocean,
Smiling, at the clear blue sky,
Into the calm Zen garden. ODE






Quote:
Pouring Rain


The rain tittering,
The rain splashing on the floor.
Pouring quiet rain HAIKU


Quote:
Crystal Jewels


The tiny cold Jewels,
Falling from the frozen sky.
The Crystal Jewels. HAIKU


Quote:
Golden Beach
The gold misty brown,
Stands like an untouched sand dune
Like the Golden Beach. HAIKU




Quote:
Crystal Blue Seas
Calm smoothing waves crash,
See across the horizon,
To Crystal Blue Seas. HAIKU


©Ian T. Yang
 
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:08 pm


FroxDemon
All these poems are originals by me, for a poetry project in English xP
The previous one repeats but ... yea this is all my work... so... if you want to use one just ask me for permission ... other than that... please give me credit . _ .

Quote:
Helicopter:

The helicopters which fell,
From their broken and shattered shells
The children had caught
Those seeds which had rot.
Though it had made their hands smell.
I’ve known you’ll still be there with me LIMERICK


Quote:
Ocean’s Calm

The sparkling of blue,
And waves settled on the shore.
Now, the ocean’s calm… HAIKU


Quote:
Cloudy Sky

The floating cottons,
Forming the figures of life,
Is a cloudy sky. HAIKU


Quote:
Howl to the Moon

The gleeful moon smiles
To a wolf loyal and brave
Howls to the moon HAIKU


Quote:
Torch-lit Sun:

Cross the torch-lit sun,
To the pitch black sky
Laughter with children having fun
With birds flying way up high

To the pitch black sky
Where the swimming fish
With birds flying way up high
Get eaten by a silent hiss

Where the swimming fish
By the fresh green trees
Get eaten by a silent hiss
When the end of life falls like a leaf

By the fresh green trees,
Laugher of children having fun,
When the end of life falls like a leaf,
Cross the torch-lit Sun. PANTOUM





Quote:
Ode to the End of Life:

Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why not the world, just flow like the Moon.
I’ve seen death,
Straight up to my face,
But I have no one to show my grace.

Life’s cycle ends so soon,
Why must the world, be filled with fun.
I’ve seen laughter till the end of June,
With something that I’ve lacked,
But letting go is something I want back.

You’ve been there since,
I’ve opened my eyes for the very first time,
But now you’re gone with a blink of an eye.
My life has now been weak and shy.
But now it is, too late to reply. ODE







Quote:
Cycle of life

With the beautiful sea of wet green grass in spring,
To the loud shout of fun in summer.
With the floor of un-forgettable feelings
To the cold life-less versions of the weak.

The blooming of life growing by response,
The time where joy is most treasured comes back.
As time marches on, life changes by age anon,
But memories stayed with happy flash-backs.

Just remember all the pink cherry blossoms,
The waves crashing onto the soft silk shore,
Think of all the orange leaves of autumn,
Nor forget the blank white snow on the floor.

Life is like a cycle that doesn’t stop.
Life is only like dew from a dew drop. SONNET










Quote:
Elements of Nature

Fire lights, as the Sun rises up high,
The lonely tears rising by one’s own eye.
The soft wind blowing across the high-tide.
Trees that rise over the infinite sky.

Flames of burning candle slowly growing,
While the water of the endless ocean,
Flies to the mercy of the restless blowing,
Towards the calm breezy trees flowing with motion.

The breaths of trees, lighting the flamed candles,
That becomes swept by the violent winds kick.
Water slowly growing calm by the breeze,
Becoming four elements of nature

The water drips down the calm grass,
While the flame goes out by the winds pass. SONNET




Quote:
Ode to Unseen War

The green plants of life,
Fight a war, alone and cold,
For their own independent strife.

Trees burn, trees fall,
Trees tall, or small.
Live in the unseen world

The wind blows with a whirl,
Making the war more immense.
Protecting there defense.

Trees burn, trees fall,
Trees tall, or small.
Live in the unseen world

The trees falling and slowly dying
The war goes on
The trees die off, too soon to be gone. ODE





Quote:
THE TREES!!!

THE TREES THE TREES!
WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING TO THE TREES!!!
THEIR DEFENSELESS!!!
QUIT BURNING THE TREES!!!
WHY THE TREES!?!?
DID THE TREES DO ANYTHING TO YOU!?
NO I DIDN’T HINK SO!
SO WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO THE TREES!!!
QUIT BURNING THE TREES!!!

Why the trees?

I need an answer I say.
Why would you burn down the trees?
The trees are the earth’s lungs.
SO WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO THE TREES!
THE TREES THE TREES!!!
WHY THE TREES!!!
TREES ARE DYING NOW!!!
CAUSE OF WHO? CAUSE OF YOU!!!
SEE THE PAPER INFRONT OF YOU!?!?
THOSE PIECES OF PAPERS ARE TREES!!!

HOW MANY DO YOU KILL A DAY!!!???
PROBABLY 5-10 TREES A DAY YOU KILLER!!!
THOSE TREES HAVE A LIFE TOO!!!
So why would you do this to the trees?

FREE VERSE


Quote:
Youth

Age moves at the mercy of Time,
Slowly becoming slower and weaker.
Like the young children singing their chimes,
The elders reading and watching the sky shimmer.

Slowly becoming slower and weaker,
Let your youth last.
The elders reading and watching the sky shimmer,
Thinking of their happy lives in the past.

Let your youth Last,
As long as it possibly can.
Thinking of their happy lives in the past,
Achieve further than you have ever ran.

As long as it possibly can,
Age moves at the mercy of Time.
Achieve further than you have ever ran.
Like the young children singing their chimes. PANTOUM





Quote:
Ode to Light

The glares of the calm bright lights,
Shine through the calm blue water.
Shimmering with sparkles of its might,
Tells how much light really matters.
Falling with a welcomed feeling.

Light reflects off the moon-beamed moon.
Spreading like the little buds from growing mushrooms.
Shadows crawling up from the roots of the trees,
The moon’s gaze swallows the darkened leaves.
Sprawling like a virus splitting.

The welcoming rays from the Sun,
Shine in the faces of the young.
Glittering off the calmed ocean,
Smiling, at the clear blue sky,
Into the calm Zen garden. ODE






Quote:
Pouring Rain


The rain tittering,
The rain splashing on the floor.
Pouring quiet rain HAIKU


Quote:
Crystal Jewels


The tiny cold Jewels,
Falling from the frozen sky.
The Crystal Jewels. HAIKU


Quote:
Golden Beach
The gold misty brown,
Stands like an untouched sand dune
Like the Golden Beach. HAIKU




Quote:
Crystal Blue Seas
Calm smoothing waves crash,
See across the horizon,
To Crystal Blue Seas. HAIKU


©Ian T. Yang


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2011 10:22 pm


Sing me your song of newborn
When the sunlight shines
And the children come out
Promise to change the world

Sing me your song of struggle
When the hot sun burns our skin
And the enemies come out
But we'll let them take us down

Sing me your song of glory
When the moon greets the dusk
And the people cheers up
This is our big victory

Sing me your song of peace
When the stars are twinkling
My time is over
I'm going to afterlife
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