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Gaia Name: Rei Hanta

Character Name: James Willow

Gender: Male

Age: 17
Apparent age:17

Race: Half Elf

Skin:
Color: Light tan
Texture: Leathery but smooth
Patterns: None

Eyes:
Color: Pupil-black, Iris-grayish-blue
Pupil Shape: Normal shape

Hair:
Length: Doesn't quite reach the shoulders
Color: Black
Style: Messy

Build:
Height: 5 foot 9 inches
Weight: 165lbs
Proportions: Evenly proportion throughout his body (legs, arms, torso, etc.)

Personality:
Basic Personality: Calm under normal circumstances but doesn’t respond well to threats to friends and will become extremely violent
Alignment: Good
Loyalties: To friends only, no affiliations
Goals: To find his long lost brother
History: He was born in the Lake Nation to Karin Thasts and Lewis of the Willow Clan. The Willow Elven Clan has the ability to control nature and strange ocular abilities too. The ocular ability is only awakened when the person has been through a traumatic experience and develops throughout the user’s life. When this ability is use extensively, the user become will confused for a short period of time then further use of this ability will cause the user’s eyes to become blind. The Willow Clan is born with the natural ability to control one element, but they can learn to control up to two more elements.
James’ entire clan was murdered by a group of mercenaries, called the Red Night Gang, when he was 2 years old. He managed to escape the blood bath with his 19 year old brother. At the age of 5, James and his older brother were separated do to an army from the Mountain Nation attacking the village they lived in at the time. He was separated from his brother and fled the village, becoming a mercenary for hire at the age of 11. He killed the entire Red Night gang at the age of 13 with a group of various other mercenaries. He wanted throughout the area.
At the age of 15, James accidentally killed the head of the Hima Elven Clan of the Mountain Nation while working for the Hima Clan; do to a war between the Hima Clan and the Laya Clan.
Since that incident, James has been traveling the world in search for his brother.
Interests: Studies animals, combat strategies, and the ancient ways of controlling nature from his clan
Likes: Swimming, drawing, sleeping, and watching rain storms
Dislikes: Hot days and deserts
Triggers: When someone threatens his friends, steals from the poor, or betrays their friends
Flaws: When enraged, he'll attack anyone
Minor Mental Disorders: None
Ticks: None
Bad Habits: Gambles too much (both with money and fighting strategies) and sleeps a little too much
Unpleasant Personality traits: Can be a little rude at times
Vices: He trusts his friends even in betrayal


Natural Special Abilities:
Physical: None
Mental: He was born the ocular abilities from his clan.
Magical/Spiritual: Controls water.

Training:
Combat: Elven Martial Arts
Other Physical Training: Runs five kilometers with 200 lbs. weights on each leg
Magic: Minor water manipulation
Mental: Minor ocular training, James can now only confuse opponents for a few seconds now
Skills: Very quick and agile
Arts: Drawing and writing
Obscure: None
Practical: Cooking and hunting
Lawful: None
Unlawful: None

Gaia Name: Rei Hanta

Character Name: James Willow

Gender: Male

Age: 17
Apparent age:17

Race: Half Elf

Skin:
Color: Light tan
Texture: Leathery but smooth
Patterns: None

Eyes:
Color: Pupil-black, Iris-grayish-blue
Pupil Shape: Normal shape

Hair:
Length: Doesn't quite reach the shoulders
Color: Black
Style: Messy

Build:
Height: 5 foot 9 inches
Weight: 165lbs
Proportions: Evenly proportion throughout his body (legs, arms, torso, etc.)

Personality:
Basic Personality: Calm under normal circumstances but doesn’t respond well to threats to friends and will become extremely violent
Alignment: Good
Loyalties: To friends only, no affiliations
Goals: To find his long lost brother
History: He was born in the Lake Nation to Karin Thasts and Lewis of the Willow Clan. The Willow Elven Clan has the ability to control the five basic elements in nature, water, fire, earth, lightning, and wind, and strange ocular abilities too. They can control one the five element by a special gene which synchronizes with the an elements energy and can hold up to two more different element energies, but the third is the weakest. The ocular ability is only awakened when the person has been through a traumatic experience and develops throughout the user’s life. When this ability is use extensively, the user become will confused for a short period of time then further use of this ability will cause the user’s eyes to become blind. Each individual's ocular ability is different. Some can control weak minded people and others can slow down time. The Willow Clan is born with the natural ability to control one element, but they can learn to control up to two more elements.
James’ entire clan was murdered by a group of mercenaries, called the Red Night Gang, when he was 2 years old. He managed to escape the blood bath with his 19 year old brother. At the age of 5, James and his older brother were separated do to an army from the Mountain Nation attacking the village they lived in at the time. He was separated from his brother and fled the village, becoming a mercenary for hire at the age of 11. He killed the entire Red Night gang at the age of 13 with a group of various other mercenaries. He wanted throughout the area.
At the age of 15, James accidentally killed the head of the Hima Elven Clan of the Mountain Nation while working for the Hima Clan; do to a war between the Hima Clan and the Laya Clan.
Since that incident, James has been traveling the world in search for his brother.
Interests: Studies animals, combat strategies, and the ancient ways of controlling nature from his clan
Likes: Swimming, drawing, sleeping, and watching rain storms
Dislikes: Hot days and deserts
Triggers: When someone threatens his friends, steals from the poor, or betrays their friends
Flaws: When enraged, he'll attack anyone
Minor Mental Disorders: None
Ticks: None
Bad Habits: Gambles too much (both with money and fighting strategies) and sleeps a little too much
Unpleasant Personality traits: Can be a little rude at times
Vices: He trusts his friends even in betrayal


Natural Special Abilities:
Physical: None
Mental: He was born the ocular abilities from his clan. His abililty is messing with his opponents mind and bringing out their worst fears.
Magical/Spiritual: Controls water.

Training:
Combat: Elven Martial Arts
Other Physical Training: Runs five kilometers with 200 lbs. weights on each leg
Magic: Minor water manipulation
Mental: Minor ocular training, James can now only confuse opponents for a few seconds now
Skills: Very quick and agile
Arts: Drawing and writing
Obscure: None
Practical: Cooking and hunting
Lawful: None
Unlawful: None

Gaia Name: II-Silent-Echo-II

Character Name: Hadoron

Gender: Male

Age: 57 (Earth years)
Apparent age: 20

Race: Vragon

Skin-
Color: Color is fairly pale, but like humans, it tans.
Texture: Skin is very human like, Except for bird clawed feet.
Patterns: Red tribal pattern on right arm. (Sign of importance)

Eyes-
Color: Retina is a mechanized zoom lens, Pupil is black, Sclera is white)
Pupil Shape: Round, like a humans

Hair-
Length: Medium length (4-5 inches)
Color: Brown with red streaks
Style: Unkempt

Build-
Height: 5'8
Weight: 140 lbs
Proportions: Very strong build, Tall

Personality-
Basic Personality: Curious, Independant
Alignment: Evil, With very rare displays of good.
Loyalties: No one (Why he's evil)
Goals: Find his linked human
History: Vragons are what humans call "Angels" When a Vragon is in it's true form, it's a white and gold dragon. But because Hadoron was unlinked, his white and gold plumes turned to black and red later on in life, to match his personality. Born to a wealthy Vragon family, he was well brought up as a child. He fell in love early on, and was engaged. But each Vragon had a human to protect, linked to the vragon at birth. Sadly, Hadoron was unlinked, therefore he was outcast from their society. Missing his love, he found his way back into the town where he lived, and as he went to visit her, he saw her with another person, so he took to the skies and left. Alone, he wandered, searching to find a human, and questing for revenge against the Vragon race. He now wanders Earth, blending with society, hiding in the shadows.
Interests: Mechanics, Stealth, Flight, Speechcraft.
Likes: Mental and Physical strength.
Dislikes: All Vragons, Most Humans.
Triggers: Seeing a Vragon with its matched Human.
Flaws: Unlinked.
Minor Mental Disorders: Somewhat homocidal at times.
Ticks: Always holds onto things
Bad Habits: Thievery, Sloppy
Unpleasant Personality traits: Hateful.
Vices: Wickedness


Natural Special Abilities-
Physical: Flight (when in true form)
Mental: Reads Human minds, Can temporarily link with another being to absorb it's knowledge/power (The linked creature is unharmed)
Magical/Spiritual: The ability to shape-shift. (True form is a dragon)

Training-
Combat: Various Vragonian fighting techniques, Street fighting.
Other Physical Training: Parkour, Served in a Human army (Gun use, Piloting vehicles, etc.)
Magic: N/A
Mental: Has mastered temporary linking.
Skills: Building, Thievery, Strategizing, Driving
Arts: Speechcraft
Obscure: N/A
Practical: Hunting, Cooking,
Lawful: N/A

Unlawful: His (also outcast) mentor, S'kravva

Gaia name: Zeonblade24
Character name: Zappfire Kotaku
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Apparent Age: teenager

Race: Human

Skin: tanish white tone
Color: A little caramel color
Texture: Smooth
Patterns:

Eyes: Normal human eyes
Color: Blue
Pupil Shape: CIRCULAR

Hair: GUY”S YAWN TEAL
Length: NORMAL
Color: DARK
Style: Spikey

EQUIPMENT:SILVER SWORD_BRASS GLOVES_SAPPHIRE

SPECIAL ABLITIES: ABLE TO JUMP HIGH_CAN USE THE POWER OF THE SAPPHIRE_ALSO HAS AN ITEM TO ENHANCE HIS PERFORMANCE.

BIO:ZAPPFIRE IS A BOY BRON WITH A HIDDEN POWER INSIDE HIM.
BUT A MAN CALLED DARKKEN WANTS TO TAKE OVER THE UNIVERSE>>>BUT UNFORTUNATLY ZAPPFIRE ALWAYS MANAGE TO SUCEED IN WARDING DARKKEN OFF.
CERATIN PEOPLE ALSO REFER TO HIM AS A HERO.


WORDS FROM ZAPPFIRE

ZAPPFIRE:HI THERE. I’m PRETTY SURE YOU ALREADY KNOW ME NOW..BUT MY CREATOR TOLD ME TO TELL THE READER THAT THE KEYBOARD IS SORTA…SPAZZING OUT RIGHT NOW_BUT DON”T WORRY!_IT”LL WILL BE FIXED.

ME:CURSE YOU KEYBOARD!!!!!!

ZAPPFIRE:O_O”HEY ZEON!DON”T DESTROY THE KEYBOARD!!!!!

ME: NOOO!!I MUST HAVE MY VENGANCE!!!I MUS HAV MMM VENGANCE!!!RRABYBBAWAWBYY…..

ZAPPFIRE:…OKAY…THAT WAS WEIRD.

ME:WHO YOU CALLING WEIRD? >

ZAPPFIRE:OH CRAP…GOTTA GO_BYE!!!

ME:GET BACK HERE_YOU!

((That means you should do it :p ))

Gendol_the_dragoon

Build-
Proportions: 8.5-1
(As compared to humans, meaning how long are the arms, legs, tail, ears, midsection and such based on the length of at "normal" sized human.)

Personality-
History:As a relatively young dragon, Gendol still has much of a history to talk of. As one of only two survivors from his clutch(Using the word clutch.. do you mean like handful? Clutch in the dictionary means: to seize, snatch or the second term to grip, hold tightly, or firmly. ) of kin, he was protected(from what?) only to the extent that he was not to be harmed enough to be lethally wounded or unable to heal from the wound.(Where was this wound located, and how bad was it?) Since he was about 100 years old he has been hunting for himself, alas, humans have become an increasing problem to his species' survival and population. Although he has not been driven to steal from the humans for food yet in the last couple thousand years that they have been here, recent circumstances are leaving less and less food as a resource and he may have need (have OR need. Pick one.)to do this soon.
Gendol has been on his own for about 50 centuries(with this time gap, I'd like you to mention how old he is now so the reader doesn't have to look it up themselves. It's your job to make sure everything is explained.), and he is still learning how some things work. When Gendol was still a drake,(230 years) his mother was killed one night in a raid by humans and elves, leaving his father as his only guardian. Since his father never really cared for him other than to provide food, Gendol has had to fend for himself for most of his living life since then. Even though one of his parents lies dead at the hands of men and elves, Gendol has never felt the need to kill them unless they attack. He is not the violent kind of dragon, which is fairly rare for a male, and this leads him to have a certain curiosity towards humans and other bipedal races.
(I've not only reviewed this, but I've given example edits for you to consider, unless you have a better option, I'd like it changed..)

Vices: N/A
(In the brackets, it states that Vice is a bad habit. He has no bad habits? Example: watching humans a little too closely, following a certain one too long, etc.)

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