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shadowbattlex

PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 6:32 pm


hey im gona post stories that i made up here, feel free to coment on them. here goes nothing.
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"that'll be 12.50 ma'am." as the woman took the money out of her purse to pay the clerk she noticed a squirel out of the corner of her eye. the animal was sniffing a loaf of bread. the clerk followed her stare. "hey get out of my store you filthy animal!" the clerk through a lighter at the squirel but it missed. the squirel ran into one of the isles. "stupid animal." the clerk grabed a broom and cornered the squirel. "i got ya now dumb animal." at that moment a sparow flew into the store and onto the clerk's head. the clerk raised the broom ready to strike the bird. the squirel darted between the clerk's legs picked up the lighter and ran out the door and up a tree. just as the clerk swung the broom the bird flew to the next isle causing the clerk to hit himself with the broom. "oww" the clerk folowed the bird to the next isle but only found a girl. "do you always let wild animals into your store?" the clerk looked agitated and walked back to the counter.
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ok this shows two of my charactors tarlo the animal shifting girl and torbolt the squirel who can burst into flames. i have 2 other charactors that ill write about later. one is laku the bad guy with the power to do prety much any thing you dont want to hapen. and terry my main charactor and what my avatar is desighned to look like. he can control fire but he cant create it. he also has an obsesion with trees, he always seems to be waching people from a tree branch.  
PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 12:31 pm


working on a short sci-fi story. ill post it soon. oh some thing you should know. I USUALY WRITE SHORT HALF STORIES. that means i write parts of biger stories that tie into other stories with the same charactors in them. i try to have them make sense without having to read the others but it doesent always work.

shadowbattlex


ZyKada
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:44 am


I thought it sounded pretty good. heart
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 11:03 am


mrgreen thanks that one doesent even have my main charactor in it.

shadowbattlex


shadowbattlex

PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 11:59 am


omg just noticed how long this is. enjoy post feedback.
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as shadow assassin walked down the hall he passed several elites running towards the bridge. 'what is going on' he thoght. it dident mater he had his own mission to wory about. he was sent by jax dager to find a stowaway. shadow presed his hand to a sensor pad to open the cargo hold. the door slid aside and he walked in. imideatly seeing somthing in the corner behind a crate he walked over raising an assassin rod to the young boys head. it extended a blade sharp enough to cut through 3 feet of steel. "who are you." the boy looked at the blade. "my name is aron. i... i just wanted a ride." shadow put the blade a little lower so it was inches from aron's chest. "on a battle ship?" aron sat up a little bit. "i umm... well i wanted to get a job too. i wana be a pilot." shadow laughed. "wow you stowaway on a ship and then ask an assassin for a job. now i'v seen it all." aron let out a little laugh. "so will you let me up?" shadow retracted the blade and put the rod in his pocket. "my orders are to take you to jax the capitan." his face turned stern. "you will not resist." aron stood up nervously and followed the assassin. shadow saw even more elite guards going towards the bridge. "hey. elite. what is going...." the ship shook. aron looked at shadow. "what was that" shadow started runing to the bridge. when he got there he noticed he had left the boy unsupervised. the boy had goten away. it dident mater if this ship fell they would all die. if he saved it he could find the boy again. shadow looked out the bridge window. what he saw did not make him at all confident in the last option. he saw an arcea ship headed starait for them. shadow went into the air lock room and put on a life suport assassin suit. the ship then took a hard right which made shadow fall down. he looked though the glass at the pilot's controls. aron stood there presing butons and puling levers while stering the ship. shadow turned and walked away to the open nothingness of space. he pressed a buton on his wrist and his boots jeted him towards the arcea ship. as he flew he saw the fire-bird turned half way around and ready to go. shadow aimed himself for the back of the enemy ship so he could destroy the engines. with great manuvering he dodged the shots fired at the ship from the fire-bird. finaly he got to the engines. protected by his life suport system he went into the engine and placed a time bomb. quickly he jeted out of the basin of flames and went toward the front of the ship. the bomb exploded and the blast gave shadow more speed. unfortunatly it gave the debris more speed as well. as a giant sheet of metal came flying at him he puled out his assassin rod and set the laser to oblitherate. he aimed at the metal that was about to crush him and pressed a buton. the rod blasted the debris and in an amazing display of sparks destroyed it. shadow saw the fire-birds engines start to glow and turned his boots to maximum. just as the ship took off he smashed throgh the glass of the air lock. the alarm wennt off and the glass was covered by automatic sheets of titanium. aron smiled at him. "i thout you wouldent make it." shadow grunted. "sorry to disapoint you." as he said this the capitan spoke up. "excuse me." aron turned around to see a man staring at him with an angry expression. "you have broken several rules. you stowed away on my ship, ran away from my assassin, taken control of the ship with no permission from myself..." aron gave a sheepish look. "the runing away from the assassin was his fault he ditched me." the capitan gave shadow a mean glance. "none the less. you are in violation of several rules.... but you also are an amazing pilot and saved all of our lives. would you like a job." aron's face lit up. "yes! yes definetly!" the capitan gave a freindly nod and left the room. shadow stood up and took off his life suport suit and walked to aron. "jax is a prety good capitan isnt he." aron looked at him. "the best!" shadow gave him a small smile and walked away. "see you around kid." aron sat back in the piolots chair. finaly he was a pilot.  
PostPosted: Thu May 21, 2009 6:01 pm


"hahaha" terry went into a crouch. "let her go laku" terry said with a growl. "hahaha she'll be dead by the end of the day." terry took out his lighter and ignighted it. "last chance." laku put a knife to tarlo's throut. "NOOOO!" terry gatered fire around himself and lunged at laku. laku disapeared in a cloud of mist. "are you ok tarlo?" tarlo sat up and rubed her forehead. "yeah im fine." terry looked at what was left of the mist and helped tarlo up. "lets go home." tarlo said. terry flame ported them to arat. {later} terry walked down the castle hall. "if only laku hadent cut of my wings, then i coud beat him." torbolt ran up behind terry and jumped on his shoulder. "hey tor. whts up." torbolt noded towards the book in terry's hand. terry sat on the floor leaning against the wall and opened his family book with a golden flame on the cover. the page he opened on had a brown flame on it in the shape of wings. the wings flew of the page and onto terry's back. "aaaggghhh!" the flames disolved into terry's back and he passed out. {morning}
when terry woke up he saw torbolt staring at him. "wow" terry jumped up and did a backflip. torbolt looked at terry with a squirel version of a wide grin. "how did i do that." tarlo stood up from her spot on the floor. (terry hadent noticed her.) "probably those wings on your back helped out." terry looked alarmed. "wings?" tarlo laughed. "yeah they look like eagle wings." terry bent his wings so he could see them. "wow they're amazing." terry flaped his wings and he slowly started to lift off the ground the wings should have added weight but they made him even lighter than before. as he landed tarlo went over to torbolt and picked him up. "the family book says if you have the wings from the book you can make them go in to your back to look normal." terry landed. "hmm, lets test that theory." terry folded his wings in and put pressure on them. the wings disolved into his back. "this could be usefull."
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this shows my main charactor terry and well all the charactors. laku had riped off terry's wings long ago and thrown him to earth, but as always terry's familly book has an answer for everything. including better wings than before. i bet laku wont be expecting what hapens in the next story

shadowbattlex


ZyKada
Captain

PostPosted: Sat May 23, 2009 11:14 am


Good job smile
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