Welcome to Gaia! ::

Reply Rainbow Daydream
The Poetry Corner

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Do you like poetry
  Yes
  No
  I write it! YEAH!
View Results

Elysia Bloom
Captain

3,000 Points
  • Member 100
  • Consumer 100
  • Statustician 100
PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:24 am
Alright, this is specifically for those of you who are poets or poetry readers. You may post your own poem, or a poem that might be inspiring to you for the day, whatever you want. And if it is your poem, people are allowed to speak about it. So yeah feel free you guys to post  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:45 am
This is the opening for my journal...




If you Dare


Come and have a look inside
So many secrets
but nothing to hide

Bathed both in shadow and in sun
childish games and childish fun
Where does this Black winged angel dwell?
Lost in love? Eternal Hell.

So much darkness
So much pain
So much life
So much to gain

My life is here for you to read
So many lies
but I do not deceive.

Who would know what isn’t true?
rarely me
and never you.  

AnirbasFlowgnaf

Ruthless Lover

10,800 Points
  • Married 100
  • Partygoer 500
  • Cash Grabber 500

Naytalia Cain
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:32 pm
oh wow, the poem is really good! mrgreen  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:37 pm
I really like the poem, it seems to have a meaning behind it. You know, the fact is a lot of people don't tell full truths, and most people don't notice it.  

LilixFlame


AnirbasFlowgnaf

Ruthless Lover

10,800 Points
  • Married 100
  • Partygoer 500
  • Cash Grabber 500
PostPosted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:19 pm
tks for the comments! heart  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:21 pm
Ice Queen


Round and round it goes
Never stopping, as everyone knows.
That is how the wheel of life turns
And in my heart this fire burns…

The ice has melted, the snow is gone
I rise up off my frigid throne.
My world, once gray
has become a bright sunny day

What is this feeling that I have never known?
Green things with bright colors have grown
in my world, once bare as bone.

He whispered to me “This is Spring…”
and he offered me a golden ring

Too flattered to know what to say
I accepted it in hopes
that the rest of eternity would be like this day.

Round and round it goes
Never stopping, as everyone knows.
That is how the wheel of life turns
And in his heart a fire burns…

My love is no longer good enough for him…
My bright world starts to grow dim…

Chilly winds start to blow
I ask myself “Why didn’t I know?”
that such a love as he promised me
could never truly be…
But he is gone and so I must move on
now living with too great a fear
to let anyone draw near

Ice and snow start to fall
around my heart I build a wall
None can cross, it is too tall

Now I sit silently in my world
covered thick in snow and ice
because of the One who broke my heart
and never even thought twice…  

AnirbasFlowgnaf

Ruthless Lover

10,800 Points
  • Married 100
  • Partygoer 500
  • Cash Grabber 500

Elysia Bloom
Captain

3,000 Points
  • Member 100
  • Consumer 100
  • Statustician 100
PostPosted: Fri May 22, 2009 3:35 pm
that is the coolest poem ever. I like it alot you are really good at writing. biggrin  
Reply
Rainbow Daydream

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum