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 Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:09 am
Here is one,
My sister i think should be put in a cage
Because she's out of control, irritating and fills me with rage.
She is like a raging wild fire
always destroying the things you cherish and desire.
She likes to fight, lie, cheat and steal
you don't know how bad it makes me feel.
when around her you can't sing
because she hits you with whatever she finds, and it usually stings.
I do believe she is quite the hypocrite.
she does whatever she wants and we say nothing about it.
And after you hear this you'll be quite surprised.
She is twelve years old and full of hatred and lies.
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:17 am
its kinda sad and funny at the same time....(i'm such a horrible person) as far as quality, the rhyming was good but i think you used the same words a lot. it might just be a weirdness factor of myself but thats how i felt^^
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:32 am
thanks for the input!
and yeah the funny thing is...is that i came up with this in 5 minutes.
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:18 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:18 am
OMG Limerick! rofl
There once was a boy named Vear.
Who filled everybody with fear.
Some boys passed him one day,
and he sent them running away,
Because he screamed "METAL GEAR!"
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Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:16 pm
^^ nice, i wrote on about a panda before but it was kinda lame*shrug*
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 1:38 am
There once was a girl
who was bored out of her mind.
She just sat and stared
at the ceiling at all times.
She lived in an old house
that groaned and creaked through the night.
Knees drawn up to her chest
wishing there was a comforting light.
As she grew older
She began to live in a dream world.
Consisting of shadows
and other nightmarish creatures.
Left alone in the house
with her younger brother.
She would only glare
as he pushed her further.
He even drove her friends mad
when they came for a visit.
Never understanding the need
for him to can it.
Her friends wished to slap some sense into him,
but they would not at her request.
All knowing she would be to blame
when all came to a rest.
However, as time passed by
She gave a knowing smile.
In a few years he would be forced to mature
has he would walk miles.
So, she let things continue
as best as she could.
Living in her isolated world of dreams
Knowing all things will fall into place as they should.
She would have the last laugh
in the end.
As he stuggled with his selfish ways
and the bridges he would have to mend.
Sorry, but I'm borrrrreeeeeedddddd. And this just kind of came to mind. Doesn't help I'm avoiding dishes and an essay on top of my boredom. Lol.
By the way this is in reference to my life surrounding my younger brother. I swear, I should be paid to watch him as much as I do. He's a cruel brat. Threatening me, saying cruel things. I wish I could strangle him like Homer does to Bart. Sigh. But, noooo. I can't even yell at him or anything without my mom or older brothers yelling at me for it. What the hell is up with that? They can but I can't.
Sorry. Done ranting.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 5:20 pm
^^ very interesting poem, i'm sorry that your younger brother is annoying. I'm a younger sister myself and i know how annoying we can be, but now my and my older sister get along 95% of the time so, i hope that you'll have the same luck^^
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:46 am
omg are all of the poems here are gonna be about kids! eek
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