has any one even read the open ing of the draven nights stor

[Your Beautiful Darkness]

he wrote like two sentences!!
its not even long enough to be a children's book
NOT considered a story
so therefore it cannot be a GOOD short STORY
case closed  

[darkgod252]

the story shall be updated asap im working on the main baody of it right now so that i can post more about it ove rthe next release date untill then please bare with me as im trying to juggle many storys at once  

[Your Beautiful Darkness]

xD
two sentences at a time?!  

[Arluen14]

Yeah. I read it b4 you had the forum open. It's really good. I think you should continue. In that small space you captured my attention rather effectively. Ita vero. I would very much enjoy it if you were to decide to continue writing on that story.  

[Your Beautiful Darkness]

oo, latin/italian
very nice


-ahem-


Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa equum habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** neigh-neigh hic, c** neigh-neigh illic.
Hic neigh, 'lic neigh, undeque neigh-neigh.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa canem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** woof-woof hic, c** woof-woof illic.
Hic woof, 'lic woof, undeque woof-woof.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa felem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** meow-meow hic, c** meow-meow illic.
Hic meow, 'lic meow, undeque meow-meow.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa murem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** squeak-squeak hic, c** squeak-squeak illic.
Hic squeak, 'lic squeak, undeque squeak-squeak.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa ovem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** baa-baa hic, c** baa-baa illic.
Hic baa, 'lic baa, undeque baa-baa.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa porcum habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** oink-oink hic, c** oink-oink illic.
Hic oink, 'lic oink, undeque oink-oink.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa pullum habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** cluck-cluck hic, c** cluck-cluck illic.
Hic cluck, 'lic cluck, undeque cluck-cluck.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa piscem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** glub-glub hic, c** glub-glub illic.
Hic glub, 'lic glub, undeque glub-glub.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa ursam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** growl-growl hic, c** growl-growl illic.
Hic growl, 'lic growl, undeque growl-growl.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa avem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** tweet-tweet hic, c** tweet-tweet illic.
Hic tweet, 'lic tweet, undeque tweet-tweet.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa ranam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** croak-croak hic, c** croak-croak illic.
Hic croak, 'lic croak, undeque croak-croak.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa capram habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** bleat-bleat hic, c** bleat-bleat illic.
Hic bleat, 'lic bleat, undeque bleat-bleat.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa serpentem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** hiss-hiss hic, c** hiss-hiss illic.
Hic hiss, 'lic hiss, undeque hiss-hiss.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.

Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
Et in villa bovem habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.
c** moo-moo hic, c** moo-moo illic.
Hic moo, 'lic moo, undeque moo-moo.
Horatius villam habet. Ee-i, ee-i-o.


WHAT NOW??
xD i so beat your little ita vero
and OMG I TYPED THAT WHOLE THING!!
xD
you will find that NOWHERE on the internet, no matter how hard you look
well, i didn't really type it all..
i copied and pasted and changed the key words in each one xD
but i typed the whole first one and all the key words!! xD
i'm so proud of myself^^  

[darkgod252]

comu shikain tomodo kia  

[An Invisible Shapeshifter]

I have! ARe ya going to continue? razz  

[darkgod252]

soon i will continue the story of bd decides to re edit it for me if she is even willing to that is