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Eliska_Novakova_394

PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:22 pm


Here's my entry...a pathetic attempt at rhyming. Since it's so pathetic I was wondering if I could enter another. It wouldn't rhyme but would be better written. But if not that's okay *shrug*. Then again if I can't enter another poem I'll just use the topic I was thinking of to write a prose.
*cough cough corny title cough*
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Believe
By: Eliska
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Sit and watch the sun set
Wake early and see it rise
But don't despair
When life passes before your eyes

Hope may be leaving
Courage be ceasing
But don't lose hope
Keep on believing

Rivers will rise
Haters enter in
Forget about them
Dive into the deep end
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I'm not that proud of this but I hope someone likes it
I really do better work if I don't rhyme but the first stanza came at me and it was incomplete alone so I just kept going.
 
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:07 pm


2/10 I like it.

eidolon nexxus


xx_Forever_Lost_xx

PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:20 am


1/10
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:30 am


3/10

1-of-Enlightenment

Feral Hunter


miss jolene xoxo

PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 4:21 am


4/10. It's trite, but cute.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:45 am


3/10 I probably couldn't, but I think you could do better. Then again, I shouldn't be talking.

Monicaluvsu


Heart_Break_Kid_2
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:22 pm


here ill give u a good score sence noone else did 5/10
PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 11:11 am


1/10

Pesca
Captain


xx_Forever_Lost_xx

PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:42 pm


Heart_Break_Kid_2
here ill give u a good score sence noone else did 5/10


what do you mean, 1/10 is the best score you can get
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