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Alpha_Ichigo
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:35 pm


Okay; here's how it works. I post my rough copy of the episodes, then you guys can put constructive critisizm on the rest of the post, and then I will make corrections based on my liking. I can veto anyone's ideas because, well, it's my comic. But I am usually open to ideas unless they are TERRIBLE. Also remember, I have terrible spelling, so don't correct me or I will have Little Fred eat your organs with a straw. I will post episodes here periodically, just so you know.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:38 pm


MONDAY


Little Fred- "Hey Maseo, got any gum?"

Maseo- "Go beg Tim for some gum, Fred."

Little Fred- "Got any gum Timmy?"

Tim- "Don't call me Timmy!"

Little Fred- *Eyes go red.* "You didn't answer my question."

Tim- "No I don't have gum." *Little Fred kicks Tim onto the road*

Maseo- "That doesn't look to safe..." *Little Fred glares at him* "Never mind..."

O. Maurice- "I have some gum. Do you like spearmint?" *Cue angel chorus*

Little Fred- "Thank you random stranger!" *Jumps at gum*

Maseo- "I dont think you should take gum from... never mind."

O. Maurice- "Uh...shouldn't someone go get him off the road?"

Maseo- "Nah; that usually happens when he doesn't have gum."

O. Maurice- "Okay... my name's Maurice, what's your's?"

Maseo- "I'm not entitled to tell you my-"

Little Fred- "His name is Maseo, mine's Fred, and the kid sprawled out on the road is Timmy."

Tim- "Don't call me Timmy!" *Truck runs Tim over*

Little Fred- "Is it starting to rain?"

Maseo- "Unfortunatly...no."

O. Maurice- "I think I'm going to be sick."

Little Fred- "Thats too bad for Timmy..."

Tim- "Don't...call...me...Timmy..."

Maseo- "Ah! How is he still alive!?"

Little Fred- "Oh, my bad." *Pulls out walkie-talkie* "Okay, back it up." *Truck starts beeping.*

Tim- "No!...No!" *Tim gets run over again*

Kam-Kam - "Scandabulicious!"

THE END

Alpha_Ichigo
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Alpha_Ichigo
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 2:37 pm


TUESDAY


Maseo- "Hey Fred, did you go to Tim's funeral yesterday?"

Little Fred- "No; did you?"

Maseo- "No. I fell asleep with my eyes open again and parents thought I was dead... again."

Little Fred- "It's almost as if they are clinging to that hope. I mean, what kind of son are you to rip up their hopes and dreams?"

Maseo- "Hey, you little-"

Tim- "What's up guys?" *Maseo starts screaming*

Maseo- "Ah! What the- who the- how are you still alive!?"

Tim- "What do you mean?"

Maseo- "You were run over- twice- yesterday!"

Tim- "You mean that wasn't just a bad dream?" *awkward silence*

Maurice- "Hey what's up?"

Little Fred- Hi random stranger-whose-name-I-forget. Got any gum?"

Maurice- "Yep. Today I brought Big Red. And my name is Maurice."

Little Fred- "As in, rhymes with obese?"

Maurice- "Well... yes. But I would prefer-" *Black van pulls up*

FBI Agent #1- "Is there a Timothy here?"

Tim- "That would be me."

FBI Agent #2- "We need you to come with us."

Little Fred- "You're here!"

Tim- "What did I do!?"

FBI Agent #1- "Sources have told us that you know the secret to coming back from the dead."

(Flashback) *During awkward silence, Little Fred sent the message to FBI in morse code*

Maseo- "Wow... you know morse code?"

Little Fred- "No." *awkward silence* *FBI takes Tim away in the van*

Maseo- "You know Tim's clueless about the secret of coming back from the dead, right?"

Little Fred- "Yeah. I know."

Kam-Kam - "Scandabulicious!"

THE END
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