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 Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 6:48 pm
please tell me if this plot sounds good
this is the srory of a boy of the age of 12 who is the ultimate weapon This is the story of how hori's life has been scrambled after the 3 year long war that began when hori was 9 years old. now he is the main target for the death bringers! will his fight for freedom and his life end in happieness or death? will the death bringers conquor the world?
as i said above the main charactor is hori
age: 12
hight: 5.3
weight:5 lbs
occupation:warrior
info:he is skilled with 2 swords
clan:toshiki
full name:hori toshiki
planet:kiara
year:1563
birthday:june 28, 1551
please comment the beggenning of it is on my profile!
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 6:52 pm
ITS GOOD the way its wrote got my attention
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 6:56 pm
really? so far its about 103 pages!
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 7:30 pm
Hey Cheryl! this is about your book? so have written any more lately? you were stuck when i last heard about it. even though i did give you the idea of a flashback. sweatdrop please continue! blaugh
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 10:57 am
i like the plot! its interesting! sweet!
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 3:50 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 3:51 pm
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