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To Tell or Not To Tell
A young girl about the age of 14 ran down the hallway and that girl just happened to me. I quickly continued running also mumbling to my self under my breath words that didn’t come out as real words so anyone could possibly hear what they meant. There where other kids in the hall way and they stopped and looked at me but as much as I wanted to I did not stop to yell in their faces that it was rude to stare. I ran into an open door and looked at all the students in the room. The room smelt like chalk dust and you could feel the nice breeze come from the open windows in the room.
“Man I’m late again…” I said to my self under my breath. The teacher gave me a bug eyed stare then I slowly walked over to my seat and sat down as the other kids just giggled and talked about me. My name is Amy; I am about 5 ft 6 and have the average weight of all the kids my age. My eyes sparkled like little blue diamonds in the light of the sun that shone through the open window of the class room.
Mrs. Demarco continued to talk about a story we had just finished in class the other day.
“Ok class now your job is to write about the story and write down what you think the moral of it is. This will be dew next Monday.”
She wrote down the name of the story on the board in a bright grass green chalk colour. ‘Two girls and a golden apple.’ The story was about two girls that found an golden apple and each of them take there turns with the magical apple and finding out things they shouldn’t have and not telling each other everything that happen and the other getting mad, but in the end they tell each other the whole story.
I took out a blank piece of paper and wrote down the title of the book then thought to my self of what to write about the book. By the end of class I had written everything down but couldn’t think of anything to put as the moral.
The five minute bell rang then all the students in the class got up and walked out of the room quickly like a heard of deer running away from a tiger. My best friend Lily came up to me and then smiled after she saw my waving at James. James was the hottest guy in school, he had straight blonde hair that was never messy and his hair was complimented by his bright clear green eyes like little marbles, and he just happened to be my biggest crush in the wide world.
“Hey Amy, when are you ever going to get up the courage to ask James out?” Lily asked me while Brian her boy friend came up to her and put his arm around her waist. Brian was the second hottest guy in the school he looked exactly the same as Brian from behind but totally different from the front. Brian had the same hair colour and hair cut as James but Brian had freckles and brown eyes, The reason they looked so alike was because they were brothers.
“Are you crazy, He would never say, yes. I’m ugly.” But the fact was I was one of the prettiest girls in our grade everyone told me this because I have the deepest blue eyes and long waving brown hair I also had perfect skin which was a light tone of tan.
After Lily went to her locker witch was on the second floor because she is only in my English class, I went to my locker and James just happened to be right there talking to his friends. I walked up to him and gathered all my courage then it just popped out.
“James would you like to go out sometime.” I couldn’t believe what I had just said. I mean its James, I slowly turned around and smacked my self in the face then started to walk away but before I got away he turned me around and looked right into my eyes as if he was trying to hypnotize me.
“I would love to Amy.” He then turned back to his friends and waved at them and continued to walk with me.
After a few days of going out with James it was the biggest news of the school, but it turned out to be the most embarrassing day of my life. That afternoon James went home for the rest of the day, if any one just anyone had told me that this would have never happened. I was walking down the hall to my locker and I saw which just happened to look like James but it wasn’t but I had no clue so I just walked up to him and turned him around and kissed him on the cheek.
“Oh my god, It’s you.” I quickly walked away and ran out to the lunch room but bumped into Lily on the way. I felt so wrong but I had to tell her.
“Lily I just kissed your boy friend.” I told her quietly but she took it in the wrong way and gave me a mad stare then before running of yelled at me.
“Amy how could you.” She yelled it so loud the whole school would be able to hear her. All the students in the lunch café stared at me then I quickly ran off home skipping the rest of school.
After falling asleep that night all I could think about was what happened and I had a bad dream, about me and Lily getting into a big fight and never being friends ever again.
It had been rainy that day but it got worst that night. It was dark and stormy that night the rain was coming down as fierce as the big warm waves of a dark Caribbean storm. I was woken by the loud pitter-patter of the warm acid rain pounding on my bedroom window. My hand slowly headed over to the lamp shivering because I was so tired. I turned on the lamp and my eyes got blinded the bright light. Having not been able to fall back to sleep I took out my Journal and started to write about what happened the day before and how I think my dream might actually come true.
I woke up in the morning not reliesing that I had fallen asleep. I got dressed for school then looked in my mirror brushing my hair.
“I’ve got to tell her the whole story only if she had listened to me the first time.”
I ran down the stairs noticing that I only had 10 minutes to get to school and James was walking with me today so he was outside waiting for me. I ran down the stairs grabbing my purse and back pack then headed out the door meeting up with James to walk to school together.
After arriving at school I finally got to tell Lily the whole story and I had said sorry to Brian for kissing him. Lily said sorry for not listening the first time and James and I decided that he would get a hair cut that was different then Brian’s so they would look different. In free period that day I wrote down what I thought the moral of the story was.
I think the moral of the story is that you should always listen to the whole story right away before getting mad or thinking that something was done that way in the first place on purpose.
Then I handed it in on Monday to the teacher and I learned all ways look before you leap and also look before you kiss someone.
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