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 Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:27 pm
For genjutsu genius, you can instead gain only 2 genjutsu slots since that is typically allowed. If you can do so, it's approved!~
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:36 pm
Seirei no Hogosha adds 40 to chakra pool. Everything else has been fixed.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:00 pm
My apologies, fixed again.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:04 pm
About your inventory; You cannot have plasma pills, scrolls or medical kit because they are not projectiles. To dictate what is considered projectiles are Shurriken, kunai knives, senbon needles.
By element separation, I meant more of ;
Katon : : 00/?? (however many you choose to learn under your limitations)
Fuuton : : 00/?? (however many you choose to learn under your limitations)
Together, they should make 18.
Alright with the additional forty to your chakra pool.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:10 pm
Yeah, just look at my profile, Yukiko, and see if it can help you fix yours up. 3nodding
Granted, I'm still fixing my own. BUT I'm near-done and most of it seems perfectly correct.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:16 pm
Granted, Apples (I love apples) has a good limitation section. Very useful for the reference. Thank you.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:22 pm
Thank you, Apples. I've fixed it, Redera.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:23 pm
No problem. sweatdrop Dun mention it.
EDIT: You loves apples?! <3 Apples loves you.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:25 pm
Yukiko Masaki Thank you, Apples. I've fixed it, Redera. Approved. Have fun~
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:36 pm
I'm happy to say, Approved! Welcome again to Shinobi Nations and I hope you have Fun in Konohagakure no Sato.
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:52 am
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Hinako. Just Hinako.
Nickname: Hina.
Age: Sixteen.
Birthdate: 18th of March.
Gender: Female.
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 79lbs
Nindo: "Never Doubt Your Ability To Survive."
Personality: Hinako is strong willed and breaking her spirit and will to survive is not as easy as you make think. Hinako is quite silent at times and is quite intelligent. Her behavior and additude to others is quite harsh and rude most of the time but at the same she can be quite cute and innocent at the same time.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin.
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Musical.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Raiton and Suiton.
Chakra Color: Purple.
Chakra Materialization: Hinako's Chakra appears kind of like flickers of lightning running through her body.
Strengths:
• Bukijutsu.
• Genjutsu.
Weaknesses:
• Fuuton Techniques.
• Agility.
Fears:
• Cooties!
• Being stuck with people who can't survive on their own.
Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess
• Class Attribute - Latent Talent: Able to perform techniques rank D and below via instrument.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
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Personal Attributes:
• Learn Genjutsu [1] post faster.
• Reaction speed increased.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 01 + 00 /03 = 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Sword.
Weapon Range: 11inches in length and half an inch in width.
Weapon Weight: 13lbs.
Weapon Location: On the right side of her hip.
• Katana.
Summoning Type: None Available.
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x5
• Shuriken x15
• Senbon needles x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Raiton
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Suiton
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
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•
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
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•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Hinako was a normal girl, she was born in a good family; a family full of Shinobi. Quite skillful for someone at her age, her parents thought she'd ought to be a shinobi as well. Hinako wears a long orange scarf over her mouth and protects what is hidden beneath, kind of like Kakshi's mask. Hinako holds some great secret behind her scarf which you shall never know, unless you force her. Hinako is quite beautiful; Her voice is smooth and gentle when she's not calling you an idiot and she can she quite harsh on people.
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:13 am
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Zeramaru Akasun
Nickname: Zeramaru
Age: Looks 18
Birthdate: ???
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 165
Nindo: "Control is the only way to halt Chaos."
Personality: Charming, Intelligent, Calm
Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Puppeteer
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Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 250+20+40= 310
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Pale Blue
Chakra Materialization: Aura
Strengths:
• Long Range Combat
• Speed
Weaknesses:
• Close Range Combat
• Physical Strength
Fears:
• Dying
• Being Forgotten
Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
• Bunraku: Able to use one hand to perform techniques rank D and below.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [2] posts faster.
• Learn kujutsu one [2] posts faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Can use ninjutsu/genjutsu of rank and lower without handsigns.
• Hearts grant Jiongu users an additional 2 slots of the corresponding element.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Sword
Weapon Range: 21" blade, 38" overall
Weapon Weight: 9lbs
Weapon Location: in left hand or on left hip
• Cane Sword
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x10
• Exploding Tags/Kunai x20
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Raiton
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Doton
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Kugutsu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
His history is mostly unknown. He grew up in a rich household but was often neglected. Without many friends Zeramaru resorted to making puppets to give himself the company he was never given.
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 6:21 pm
duckmasta I'm happy to say, Approved! Welcome again to Shinobi Nations and I hope you have Fun in Konohagakure no Sato.
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 6:26 pm
apples g a l o r e duckmasta I'm happy to say, Approved! Welcome again to Shinobi Nations and I hope you have Fun in Konohagakure no Sato. You may edit yours to say that Raiton Jutsu effects are slighty increased. We do not allow "by rank" increases.
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