The last technique of the clan is actually this. Does this one do something different than what the one from the clan does? Don't want you to waste a custom if you don't have to.
It was my understanding that the heart jutsu only applies the weird body/heart creations. I was looking for something more along the lines creating a jutsu that does the same/similar things for myself specifically. Like if I wanted to be a sphinx with six arms.
Theoretically speaking, this is possible with that technique, you'd just use the technique upon yourself to restructure the threads. If it's mainly for aesthetics, I would just learn that technique, so it doesn't take up slots for you.
Then what is the line between aesthetics and functionality? Like if I used the already bloodline jutsu to create longer arms isn't that more than aesthetics?
I would like to be able to use any excess appendages that I create. Like for casting jutsu, running my chakra through via my trait, and any normal function they would provided naturally. Such as hooked claws for climbing, tails for balance, etc.
Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2017 7:13 pm
Evanescently Magnificent
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Evanescently Magnificent
XAyame_HatakeX
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The last technique of the clan is actually this. Does this one do something different than what the one from the clan does? Don't want you to waste a custom if you don't have to.
It was my understanding that the heart jutsu only applies the weird body/heart creations. I was looking for something more along the lines creating a jutsu that does the same/similar things for myself specifically. Like if I wanted to be a sphinx with six arms.
Theoretically speaking, this is possible with that technique, you'd just use the technique upon yourself to restructure the threads. If it's mainly for aesthetics, I would just learn that technique, so it doesn't take up slots for you.
Then what is the line between aesthetics and functionality? Like if I used the already bloodline jutsu to create longer arms isn't that more than aesthetics?
I would like to be able to use any excess appendages that I create. Like for casting jutsu, running my chakra through via my trait, and any normal function they would provided naturally. Such as hooked claws for climbing, tails for balance, etc.
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Illegal Eden Rank: Passive Scaling Type: Bloodline Element: None Description:違法なエデン風 [Illegal Eden Style] Chet's Bloodline techniques are enhanced depending on the drug he has mixed together with his alcohol. The amount of drugs Chet can use at the same time in combat is limited by his current rank. i.e the use of two different drugs would require him to be C rank level and so on. Breaking this rule will cause him to O.D and die. The duration of each is cut by one post if mixed with another. Individual drugs may not stack for double the effect. Weed: Bloodline techniques cost -5 chakra to perform for a duration of 5 posts Ecstasy: Increases reflexes mildly for a duration of 5 posts Cocaine: Increases physical mildly for a duration of 5 posts Heroine: Increases durability mildly for a duration of 5 posts Lsd: Increases speed mildly duration of 5 posts
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: 5 Gates Of Turnt Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet has a turnto-meter that details how "turnt" he is. Turnt meaning drunk/high. He is at a constant 50%. He only gets lower if he doesn't drink or smoke, snort, etc for 10 posts. Going above fifty grants him a higher state of inebriation and affects his output. Drinking sake increases his meter by 5%. Recreational drugs increase the bar by 10% and increase sake's influence by 5% if used during the consumption of drugs. At 70% complex taijustu/bukijutsu techniques used against Chet become simple.
At 80% Chet's chakra signature becomes unstable and hard to follow for those of his rank and a nuisance for those one rank above him.
At 90% Chet can manipulate his own blood.
At 100% Bloodline techniques all decrease one rank in cost excluding S rank techs.
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XAyame_HatakeX
Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2017 8:50 am
malavaes
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Illegal Eden Rank: Passive Scaling Type: Bloodline Element: None Description:違法なエデン風 [Illegal Eden Style] Chet's Bloodline techniques are enhanced depending on the drug he has mixed together with his alcohol. The amount of drugs Chet can use at the same time in combat is limited by his current rank. i.e the use of two different drugs would require him to be C rank level and so on. Breaking this rule will cause him to O.D and die. The duration of each is cut by one post if mixed with another. Individual drugs may not stack for double the effect. Weed: Bloodline techniques cost -5 chakra to perform for a duration of 5 posts Ecstasy: Increases reflexes mildly for a duration of 5 posts Cocaine: Increases physical mildly for a duration of 5 posts Heroine: Increases durability mildly for a duration of 5 posts Lsd: Increases speed mildly duration of 5 posts
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: 5 Gates Of Turnt Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet has a turnto-meter that details how "turnt" he is. Turnt meaning drunk/high. He is at a constant 50%. He only gets lower if he doesn't drink or smoke, snort, etc for 10 posts. Going above fifty grants him a higher state of inebriation and affects his output. Drinking sake increases his meter by 5%. Recreational drugs increase the bar by 10% and increase sake's influence by 5% if used during the consumption of drugs. At 70% complex taijustu/bukijutsu techniques used against Chet become simple.
At 80% Chet's chakra signature becomes unstable and hard to follow for those of his rank and a nuisance for those one rank above him.
At 90% Chet can manipulate his own blood.
At 100% Bloodline techniques all decrease one rank in cost excluding S rank techs.
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
While I can most definitely approve the first, the second I will need to review with other moderation in order to better get an idea of what we'd like to do. This particular "gates" can set a precedent, so I will hold off on approving it for the moment. Illegal Eden → Approved 5 Gates of Turnt → Pending
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Illegal Eden Rank: Passive Scaling Type: Bloodline Element: None Description:違法なエデン風 [Illegal Eden Style] Chet's Bloodline techniques are enhanced depending on the drug he has mixed together with his alcohol. The amount of drugs Chet can use at the same time in combat is limited by his current rank. i.e the use of two different drugs would require him to be C rank level and so on. Breaking this rule will cause him to O.D and die. The duration of each is cut by one post if mixed with another. Individual drugs may not stack for double the effect. Weed: Bloodline techniques cost -5 chakra to perform for a duration of 5 posts Ecstasy: Increases reflexes mildly for a duration of 5 posts Cocaine: Increases physical mildly for a duration of 5 posts Heroine: Increases durability mildly for a duration of 5 posts Lsd: Increases speed mildly duration of 5 posts
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: 5 Gates Of Turnt Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet has a turnto-meter that details how "turnt" he is. Turnt meaning drunk/high. He is at a constant 50%. He only gets lower if he doesn't drink or smoke, snort, etc for 10 posts. Going above fifty grants him a higher state of inebriation and affects his output. Drinking sake increases his meter by 5%. Recreational drugs increase the bar by 10% and increase sake's influence by 5% if used during the consumption of drugs. At 70% complex taijustu/bukijutsu techniques used against Chet become simple.
At 80% Chet's chakra signature becomes unstable and hard to follow for those of his rank and a nuisance for those one rank above him.
At 90% Chet can manipulate his own blood.
At 100% Bloodline techniques all decrease one rank in cost excluding S rank techs.
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
While I can most definitely approve the first, the second I will need to review with other moderation in order to better get an idea of what we'd like to do. This particular "gates" can set a precedent, so I will hold off on approving it for the moment. Illegal Eden → Approved 5 Gates of Turnt → Pending
Character: Axel Storn Technique Name: Tempered Rain Rank: S Type: Bukijutsu {Training, Shigure Soen Free Custom} Description: Having mastered the style and having gone through the extensive chakra training, Axel has matched his physical training to his meditation to extend the reach of his Insight Rain as well as being able to tell when its being directed at him. Additionally, he gains half of the chakra given as part of the style as Stamina [A total of 50]
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XAyame_HatakeX
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2017 5:06 pm
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Sake Seeking Orbs Rank: D Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: 12 orbs the size of baseballs orbit around Chet. They are controlled by him. He can choose to launch them at his opponent. While they aren't meant to do physical damage they will cause burning in the eyes and the impact will throw the enemy off balance. A barrage of twelve will definitely knock the opponent to the ground.
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: It's Gonna Be A Lit Party Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet's alcohol level has been a constant high for so long that it has affected his chakra flow permanently. Techniques he uses against his opponents afflict them with small amounts alcohol poisoning. Stacking on each other. Taijutsu techniques apply direct contact stacks and so will afflict the enemy with 2 stacks. Using a technique that applies contact several times applies a stack for each of the times he connects a punch, kick, bite, etc. Ninjutsu techniques become diluted and apply one stack per jutsu. At 5 stacks the enemy will begin to feel the effects of the alcohol in their system, but will not be impaired. At 10 stacks the enemy will begin to feel disorientation and nausea. At 15 the enemy will have no control over themselves anymore. At 20 the enemy will suffer the full on effects of alcohol poisoning.
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Contact high Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet's chakra around his body applies stacks of alcohol onto enemies that maintain close proximity to him for an extended period of time. One stack per post. This only happens when he is exerting himself in combat and releasing chakra. Otherwise it is mute.
Character: Axel Storn Technique Name: Tempered Rain Rank: S Type: Bukijutsu {Training, Shigure Soen Free Custom} Description: Having mastered the style and having gone through the extensive chakra training, Axel has matched his physical training to his meditation to extend the reach of his Insight Rain as well as being able to tell when its being directed at him. Additionally, he gains half of the chakra given as part of the style as Stamina [A total of 50]
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
Sorry to Keep you waiting. Your technique is under review. To move the process along at minimum we will need to know how far you are wanting the reach of your insight rain to reach. Quote me when you have it set please.
malavaes
Don't have much of an issue with null star seeking orbs
Party : first I need clarification on this. Your chakra is altered so i think this would require at the very least hits using complex techniques.
Secondly, all the listed effects need 5 addition posts on their trigger time. This isn't me being unreasonable; alcohol has a section in our poison hazard lis tings starting to effect a person at 10 posts of continious contact.
Contact high: unfortunately this will need a lays Exertion per post to remain active. Give me a minimum chakra/stamina output for it to take effect and a range on this aura. I need to check my Suiken but this may also already exist
Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 8:13 am
Holy Rinaku
I'm fine with it it being set to complex taijutsu.
So the stacks would only being to mount after five posts?
Contact High would have to use up a very small amount of chakra/stamina per post otherwise the amount of alcohol the enemy receives would have to be increased to balance it out. Otherwise I'd be hemorrhaging energy without much gain. As for the range I'd say 2 feet.
I'm fine with it it being set to complex taijutsu.
So the stacks would only being to mount after five posts?
Contact High would have to use up a very small amount of chakra/stamina per post otherwise the amount of alcohol the enemy receives would have to be increased to balance it out. Otherwise I'd be hemorrhaging energy without much gain. As for the range I'd say 2 feet.
Edit so that it shows complex taijutsu as the introduction method.
The EFFECTS would need five more posts of contact before they began. Though I may need a second opinion about full on poisoning.
Contact high: the way I read it was that it manifested when you're using chakra and stamina, ie sweating from exertion. I need a threshold pet turn for it to be active. It won't cost extra, but will have a qualifier. Range is fine
Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 12:59 pm
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Sake Seeking Orbs Rank: D Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: 12 orbs the size of baseballs orbit around Chet. They are controlled by him. He can choose to launch them at his opponent. While they aren't meant to do physical damage they will cause burning in the eyes and the impact will throw the enemy off balance. A barrage of twelve will definitely knock the opponent to the ground.
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: It's Gonna Be A Lit Party Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet's alcohol level has been a constant high for so long that it has affected his chakra flow permanently. Techniques he uses against his opponents afflict them with small amounts alcohol poisoning. Stacking on each other. Complex Taijutsu techniques apply direct contact stacks and so will afflict the enemy with 2 stacks. Using a technique that applies contact several times applies a stack for each of the times he connects a punch, kick, bite, etc. Ninjutsu techniques become diluted and apply one stack per jutsu. At 5 stacks the enemy will begin to feel the effects of the alcohol in their system, but will not be impaired. At 10 stacks the enemy will begin to feel disorientation and nausea. At 15 the enemy will have no control over themselves anymore. At 20 the enemy will suffer the full on effects of alcohol poisoning. Requires 5 posts of continuous contact before showing any effects
Character: Chet Oni Technique Name: Contact high Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Chet's chakra around his body applies stacks of alcohol onto enemies that maintain close proximity (2 feet) to him for an extended period of time. One stack per post. This only happens when he is exerting himself in combat and releasing chakra. Minimum 5 stamina and Chakra.
Thought I'd reword Doraihyouton since the previous wording was gross and really really damn vague.
Previous wording
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Using this jutsu, Sonyo is able to make her ice extra special. Instead of using normal water ice for techniques, sonyo is able to use dry ice instead. A "Dry Ice" chakra pool is made; how much is in it depends on how much chakra is put in to it. If a B-rank worth of chakra is put in, then Sonyo gets a "Dry Ice" chakra pool of [ 40 ]. The same applies for each amount put in. However, pools cannot stack and this jutsu can only be used [2] posts after the current pool has run out.
New Wording
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons [ X-rank after learning ] Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Relocating to a desert makes one rethink their options when it comes to forming ice, and that's the main reasoning behind this technique. Using her hyouton chakra, Sonyo forms ice out of gas instead of water, creating solid Carbon Dioxide or Dry Ice. The jutsu works on a chakra pool, turning any hyouton techinque used while the pool is active in to Dry ice in stead of Water ice. How big this pool is depends on how much chakra the user puts in to the technique; ei, if someone were to put a B-rank's worth of chakra in to the technique it would create a Doraihyouton pool of 40 chakra, and this applies to every rank amount. Pools cannot stack, and once the current pool has run out, the user must wait [2] posts to create another. The main differences between Dry Ice and Water Ice come in pros and cons: the pros are that carbon dioxide sublimates at −109.3 °F making dry ice much colder than water ice, dry ice sublimes in to carbon dioxide instead of water leaving various effects, and it is more readily available to make than Water Ice. Cons come in the form that, having a lower freezing point, Dry Ice is weaker to fire and also that dry ice is structurally more fragile-- as one can break dry ice with their bare hands. Also in that the user must be careful not to kill themselves with the subliming carbon dioxide in enclosed spaces without much ventilation.
Usually It'd just go ahead and do it but seeing as the wording changes drastically I thought I'd make sure it's still up to your guys' standards.
( Sorry for the Double edit, I'm an idiot )
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Holy Rinaku
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2017 11:48 pm
I Tortured Sleep I
Thought I'd reword Doraihyouton since the previous wording was gross and really really damn vague.
Previous wording
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Using this jutsu, Sonyo is able to make her ice extra special. Instead of using normal water ice for techniques, sonyo is able to use dry ice instead. A "Dry Ice" chakra pool is made; how much is in it depends on how much chakra is put in to it. If a B-rank worth of chakra is put in, then Sonyo gets a "Dry Ice" chakra pool of [ 40 ]. The same applies for each amount put in. However, pools cannot stack and this jutsu can only be used [2] posts after the current pool has run out.
New Wording
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons [ X-rank after learning ] Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Relocating to a desert makes one rethink their options when it comes to forming ice, and that's the main reasoning behind this technique. Using her hyouton chakra, Sonyo forms ice out of gas instead of water, creating solid Carbon Dioxide or Dry Ice. The jutsu works on a chakra pool, turning any hyouton techinque used while the pool is active in to Dry ice in stead of Water ice. How big this pool is depends on how much chakra the user puts in to the technique; ei, if someone were to put a B-rank's worth of chakra in to the technique it would create a Doraihyouton pool of 40 chakra, and this applies to every rank amount. Pools cannot stack, and once the current pool has run out, the user must wait [2] posts to create another. The main differences between Dry Ice and Water Ice come in pros and cons: the pros are that carbon dioxide sublimates at −109.3 °F making dry ice much colder than water ice, dry ice sublimes in to carbon dioxide instead of water leaving various effects, and it is more readily available to make than Water Ice. Cons come in the form that, having a lower freezing point, Dry Ice is weaker to fire and also that dry ice is structurally more fragile-- as one can break dry ice with their bare hands. Also in that the user must be careful not to kill themselves with the subliming carbon dioxide in enclosed spaces without much ventilation.
Usually It'd just go ahead and do it but seeing as the wording changes drastically I thought I'd make sure it's still up to your guys' standards.
Character: Hatsu Yuki Hattori Technique Name: Body and Soul Rank: C Type: Taijutsu, Spiritual, Supplemental Element: Non-Elemental Description: Focusing one's own chakra to store energy from attacks, Hatsu will gain [1] Soul Charge every time she activates a Complex or Spiritual Taijutsu or Bukijutsu technique. She may expend [6] Soul Charges to increase a Taijutsu or Bukijutsu Complex or Spiritual technique's rank by [1]. She may store up to [6] Soul Charges, increasing by [1] per Body Rank increase past D Rank, up to a maximum of [10] potential Soul Charges stored at once at S Rank. The technique that Body and Soul supplements does not give a Soul Charge. Body and Soul does not take an activation to use, as it just pulls stored energy to increase technique power. Soul Charges are lost upon the end of battle, or falling unconscious or otherwise incapacitated.
