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 Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:08 am
Sigil Warden You found it, didn't you? Also, satire. The use of irony, sarcasm, ridicule, or the like, in exposing, denouncing, or deriding vice, folly, etc.? Not that I made any mention of it, but it reads more like an opinion (your's) sprinkled with sarcasm. Of course, it isn't considered very nice to ridicule, denounce, or deride other people; Especially in a competitive setting where judges ultimately decide the outcome. wink My post will be done in a moment, and I really appreciate you quoting me in our fight! Have a fantastic day. pirate
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:09 am
Welp I laughed.
At work.
Thanks Sigil evil
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:18 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:22 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:24 am
lol what the...
Why do you guys make your fights so complicated. razz
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:24 am
Thankfully I work in a cold and miaerable backroom where few dare tread so all i had to deal with was the hick Frito guy looking at me funny.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:28 am
King Bug lol what the... Why do you guys make your fights so complicated. razz Out of necessity.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:38 am
As a point of constructive criticism I think you guys could do better with simpler versions of your attacks/intents. At least in some regards. When you tighten up your posts and get rid of a lot of unnecessary complicated stuff it leaves less room for NO U as well.
Someone can't end up going "LOL YOU MISSED BY .5" BECAUSE YOU SAID 2" TO THE LEFT" when you post.
I don't know. Could be just me. Not saying you need to play like Clash but... it could help a bit to whittle it down? I dunno.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:44 am
To Slash's credit, he's taking it like a man. One thing though, that I kind of want to mention (you've already sold the attack solidly, so that is not the issue) is that the pain is accompanied by something like this on the area of contact: EDIT: Spoilered for those with weak stomachs.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:47 am
Eh...The judges will either read it, see where we ******** up, and grade it accordingly...
Or they won't, and just give the win to whomever they have the most maximum bro-rection for.
So, I'ma have a blast and do whatever the hell I want with the kit they approved. If they like it, then that's really awesome...
If not, then at least it won't be a waste of my time. cool
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:49 am
Sigil Warden To Slash's credit, he's taking it like a man. One thing though, that I kind of want to mention (you've already sold the attack solidly, so that is not the issue) is that the pain is accompanied by something like this on the area of contact: EDIT: Spoilered for those with weak stomachs. I had a dice ******** that needed correcting, and I didn't know what you expected to happen...but now that I've seen that grade-A picture, I'll adjust on the next post. sweatdrop This fight feels really familiar all of a sudden...
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:53 am
King Bug As a point of constructive criticism I think you guys could do better with simpler versions of your attacks/intents. At least in some regards. When you tighten up your posts and get rid of a lot of unnecessary complicated stuff it leaves less room for NO U as well. Someone can't end up going "LOL YOU MISSED BY .5" BECAUSE YOU SAID 2" TO THE LEFT" when you post. I don't know. Could be just me. Not saying you need to play like Clash but... it could help a bit to whittle it down? I dunno. One of the few times KB will ever make a good point.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:54 am
That's fine, it probably would take a few seconds to fully manifest anyway, given the sort of rot effect it has.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:54 am
Pretty much what KB said. The details are nice but they do make reading things a headache, a callback to the FFA days where some people would give relative positions of their limbs to everything about every second line.
There is a beauty in keeping it simple. Still entertaining though smile
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The Female of the Species
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:56 am
Slash Zinrai Or they won't, and just give the win to whomever they have the most maximum bro-rection for. Basically this.
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