Character:Tosokurui Ashi Hojo Technique: Ika-Nejiru [Squid Twist] Rank: X (Trained as C) Type: Bloodline (Hojo) Element: None Description: The Hojo applies their unique gift to extend their arms up to ten yards to their entire body as well. Their body ultimately becomes malleable as if lacking a spine like their invertebrate ancestors and can stretch to twice the user's height or contort to half the user's height. Almost becoming fluid in nature all evasive techniques can be used requiring only half the stamina and chakra required for a duration of [1] post per rank of chakra expended. This technique consumes duration based on the Rank of the evasive technique it's used in conjunction with. (i.e [3] post duration at minimum is required for reducing the cost of a C-ranked evasion and said duration is consumed when doing so.) Unused duration can roll over to a subsequent activation but to be used in conjunction with equivalent evasive techniques the minimum duration rank must be met. If the duration is not 'refreshed' upon reaching it's final post said [1] duration does not roll over. Unfortunately malleability comes at the cost of strength. Physical Bukijutsu and Taijutsu techniques designed to inflict direct harm are treated as one rank lower in strength when used in conjunction with this technique.
I'll Also Add Kumotake's Third Animal Trait, and Some Customs for him I suppose.
Adhesive Pores: Kumotake can now crawl or crabwalk creepily on all fours. When doing so he can climb flat surfaces and cling without the need for the water walking jutsu. Still, this is incredibly slow and inefficient for any purpose other than stealth. It's also incredibly unsettling to watch.
Character:Kumotake Saisho [Kir] Technique: Kikaijutsu: Oru (Destruction Bug Technique: Weave) Rank: A [4000 Insects] Type: Bloodline (Aburame) Element: None Description: The Aburame scatters their insects wide enough to cover a thread in thin but powerful silk if the user so wishes. The insects form a connection with each thread they weave. They then return to the host. When a thread is disrupted or destroyed the Kikaichu that created it will inform its host of the disruption and the location of the disruption. If the host wishes if they are within range of the threads they can perform a single hand sign to cause all the threads to converge on whatever triggered it to attempt to bind it but these threads do not inflict harm like garrote wire or steel thread.
Character:Kumotake Saisho [Kir] Technique: Kikaijutsu: Gekihen (Destruction Bug Technique: Upheaval) Rank: A [3000 Insects] Type: Bloodline (Aburame) Element: None Description: The Aburame scatters their insects across the ground where they lay in wait buried beneath the surface of the earth. The host can then perform a single handsign or inform the Kikaichu to trigger on movement. When signaled the Kikaichu launch the target into the air then form a gaping maw like a bear trap and snap shut on the target in a fierce dispersion devouring whatever amount of chakra they can in that instant before returning to the host. Character:Kumotake Saisho [Kir] Technique: Kikaijutsu: Don'yokuna nami (Destruction Bug Technique: Ravenous Wave) Rank: B [3000 Insects] Type: Bloodline (Aburame) Element: None Description: The Aburame Host Pools their insects beneath them. they then rise up to form a giant wave not unlike the Suiton Justu [Bursting Water Collision Waves] The insects will then crash down on the target or targeted are devouring their chakra in the process before dispersing and returning as a cloud around the host. Character:Kumotake Saisho [Kir] Technique: Kikaijutsu: Tsubasa (Destruction Bug Technique: Wings) Rank: C [1000 Insects] Type: Bloodline (Aburame) Element: None Description: The Kikaichu will take the shape of either a pair of wings or a cloud for the host to ride on or utilize. This confers flight to the user. This technique must be replenished every [5] posts with insects and chakra less the host wishes to fall to their death. This technique weighs heavily on the insects and the concentration needed to instruct them in both senses so other insect techniques cannot be used while flight is active. However, insects do still continue to regenerate. Flight Speed is determined by the hosts speed.
(( I don't know why I deleted the previous post when I could have just edited it. /tired))
NecroPlant
• Ika-Neijiru → [Approved]
• Tamer Trait → [Approved]
• Kikaijutsu: Oru (Destruction Bug Technique: Weave) → [Approved]
• Kikaijutsu: Gekihen (Destruction Bug Technique: Upheaval) → [Approved as per Skype discussion] → Edited: By Necroplant
• Kikaijutsu: Don'yokuna nami (Destruction Bug Technique: Ravenous Wave) → [Approved as per Skype discussion] → Edited: By Necroplant
Character: Nanami Hyuuga Technique Name: Fundo hīrā no dansu [ Dance of the Wrathful Healer ] Rank: X-rank [ B-rank learning ] Type: Offensive Eiseijutsu / Taijutsu Supplementary Element: Maruton Description:With many hours of studying the flow and workings of Eiseijutsu, Nanami has figured out a way in which she can cast Eiseijutsu without handseals; but only if she is currently using an offensive Taijutsu technique. She has found that with the concentration and flow of strength, and sometimes even chakra, in to techniques that she can focus and cast a medical technique while landing the technique. This allows her to weave an Offensive Eiseijutsu in to a Taijutsu technique.
Character: Nanami Hyuuga Technique Name: Fundo hīrā no dansu [ Dance of the Wrathful Healer ] Rank: X-rank [ B-rank learning ] Type: Offensive Eiseijutsu / Taijutsu Supplementary Element: Maruton Description:With many hours of studying the flow and workings of Eiseijutsu, Nanami has figured out a way in which she can cast Eiseijutsu without handseals; but only if she is currently using an offensive Taijutsu technique. She has found that with the concentration and flow of strength, and sometimes even chakra, in to techniques that she can focus and cast a medical technique while landing the technique. This allows her to weave an Offensive Eiseijutsu in to a Taijutsu technique.
As per the discussion with Mam in chat earlier, Approved. It is essentially A Korabo effect, but without gaining the extra rank of traditional Korabo training, and paying both costs.
Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2016 5:04 pm
Character: Karleen Robygen Technique Name: Faradē no netto [ Faraday's Net ] Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Description:Gathering raiton in the body, then discharging it, Karleen creates a field of static electricity around her with a diameter of 15 feet. This static electricity crackles in the air around her, somewhat visible. Because this static electricity is a chakra construct, this prohibits any doujutsu from seeing inside the field. This also inhibits any doujutsu currently active inside the field as well, blocking or even irritating said doujutsu. As an added effect, the conductivity of anything inside the field is increased as the added static electricity gives an easier path for any other electricity.
Character: Karleen Robygen Technique Name: Faradē no netto [ Faraday's Net ] Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Description:Gathering raiton in the body, then discharging it, Karleen creates a field of static electricity around her with a diameter of 15 feet. This static electricity crackles in the air around her, somewhat visible. Because this static electricity is a chakra construct, this prohibits any doujutsu from seeing inside the field. This also inhibits any doujutsu currently active inside the field as well, blocking or even irritating said doujutsu. As an added effect, the conductivity of anything inside the field is increased as the added static electricity gives an easier path for any other electricity.
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
I'm not too certain I can see this actually working the way you intended. Filling an area with chakra doesn't quite necessitate the blocking of the Doujutsu that rely on the detection of chakra. Now, if you're going to a massive amount of chakra in an area that more fills the area with white noise, that I can understand, but it would fill the bubble which would make the electricity harmful to all within unless you have specific defenses against it, like wearing rubber!
Now, I'm not opposed to the idea, but I'm simply not understanding the connection is all. If the Sharingan, which can at point track the tiniest of movements from a person's body, would be blinded by the sheer number of them...
ooh! Here's an idea. Write it that the electricity causes a burst of chakra. This would regularly come off as those "physical" electrical charges, like the lightning in the air. It is simply the extremely rapid bursts of chakra that would disorient their eyes. Not only would you get all of what you desire,but you'd also piss off any sensor trying to sense anything within that mess, because it would overwhelm their abilities as well.
If that was your intention, I apologize, but the devil is in the details, as people say. If you have a rebuttal, I would love to hear it!
Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 8:52 pm
Lanfaer
I Tortured Sleep I
Character: Karleen Robygen Technique Name: Faradē no netto [ Faraday's Net ] Rank: B-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Description:Gathering raiton in the body, then discharging it, Karleen creates several rapid bursts of chakra ( five in total ) that regularly come off as physical electricity charges akin to lightning. These bursts disorient and confuse the optical senses and any sensory actions going on; making it difficult for Doujutsu and even Sensors. This jutsu doesn't take advantage of Karleen's black raiton, and is instead normal raiton, to prevent the loss of brightness of the "lightning".
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
I'm not too certain I can see this actually working the way you intended. Filling an area with chakra doesn't quite necessitate the blocking of the Doujutsu that rely on the detection of chakra. Now, if you're going to a massive amount of chakra in an area that more fills the area with white noise, that I can understand, but it would fill the bubble which would make the electricity harmful to all within unless you have specific defenses against it, like wearing rubber!
Now, I'm not opposed to the idea, but I'm simply not understanding the connection is all. If the Sharingan, which can at point track the tiniest of movements from a person's body, would be blinded by the sheer number of them...
ooh! Here's an idea. Write it that the electricity causes a burst of chakra. This would regularly come off as those "physical" electrical charges, like the lightning in the air. It is simply the extremely rapid bursts of chakra that would disorient their eyes. Not only would you get all of what you desire,but you'd also piss off any sensor trying to sense anything within that mess, because it would overwhelm their abilities as well.
If that was your intention, I apologize, but the devil is in the details, as people say. If you have a rebuttal, I would love to hear it!
That's exactly what I was going for actually, just in a different way than I imagined. xD
I changed the description and added a rank because I wanted more than just one burst. Lemme know if there's anything else I need to add or change. *nodnod*
Character: Karleen Robygen Technique Name: Faradē no netto [ Faraday's Net ] Rank: B-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Description:Gathering raiton in the body, then discharging it, Karleen creates several rapid bursts of chakra ( five in total ) that regularly come off as physical electricity charges akin to lightning. These bursts disorient and confuse the optical senses and any sensory actions going on; making it difficult for Doujutsu and even Sensors. This jutsu doesn't take advantage of Karleen's black raiton, and is instead normal raiton, to prevent the loss of brightness of the "lightning".
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
I'm not too certain I can see this actually working the way you intended. Filling an area with chakra doesn't quite necessitate the blocking of the Doujutsu that rely on the detection of chakra. Now, if you're going to a massive amount of chakra in an area that more fills the area with white noise, that I can understand, but it would fill the bubble which would make the electricity harmful to all within unless you have specific defenses against it, like wearing rubber!
Now, I'm not opposed to the idea, but I'm simply not understanding the connection is all. If the Sharingan, which can at point track the tiniest of movements from a person's body, would be blinded by the sheer number of them...
ooh! Here's an idea. Write it that the electricity causes a burst of chakra. This would regularly come off as those "physical" electrical charges, like the lightning in the air. It is simply the extremely rapid bursts of chakra that would disorient their eyes. Not only would you get all of what you desire,but you'd also piss off any sensor trying to sense anything within that mess, because it would overwhelm their abilities as well.
If that was your intention, I apologize, but the devil is in the details, as people say. If you have a rebuttal, I would love to hear it!
That's exactly what I was going for actually, just in a different way than I imagined. xD
I changed the description and added a rank because I wanted more than just one burst. Lemme know if there's anything else I need to add or change. *nodnod*
EDIT: Wrote lightning twice. XD
I don't mind it. It's similar in nature to what Weakness techniques of the Sakkakugan do, and I'm good for it. Hm...the only thing is "length". I would say you could create 5 bursts, with each burst lasting 2 posts (of YOUR posts, not counting your original post) before the effect fades. You're technically making flashbangs with jutsu, which is hilariously fun! So the question is, what are your thought on the duration? Overall, they have to see the burst. If you chained it so every second post you used it, you'd basically have it chaining...10 posts? Mind you, it'd still work!
Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 9:20 pm
Lanfaer
I Tortured Sleep I
Lanfaer
I Tortured Sleep I
Character: Karleen Robygen Technique Name: Faradē no netto [ Faraday's Net ] Rank: B-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Description:Gathering raiton in the body, then discharging it, Karleen creates a rapid burst of chakra ( each lasting two posts ) that regularly come off as physical electricity charges akin to lightning. These bursts disorient and confuse the optical senses and any sensory actions going on; making it difficult for Doujutsu and even Sensors. This jutsu doesn't take advantage of Karleen's black raiton, and is instead normal raiton, to prevent the loss of brightness of the "lightning".
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
I'm not too certain I can see this actually working the way you intended. Filling an area with chakra doesn't quite necessitate the blocking of the Doujutsu that rely on the detection of chakra. Now, if you're going to a massive amount of chakra in an area that more fills the area with white noise, that I can understand, but it would fill the bubble which would make the electricity harmful to all within unless you have specific defenses against it, like wearing rubber!
Now, I'm not opposed to the idea, but I'm simply not understanding the connection is all. If the Sharingan, which can at point track the tiniest of movements from a person's body, would be blinded by the sheer number of them...
ooh! Here's an idea. Write it that the electricity causes a burst of chakra. This would regularly come off as those "physical" electrical charges, like the lightning in the air. It is simply the extremely rapid bursts of chakra that would disorient their eyes. Not only would you get all of what you desire,but you'd also piss off any sensor trying to sense anything within that mess, because it would overwhelm their abilities as well.
If that was your intention, I apologize, but the devil is in the details, as people say. If you have a rebuttal, I would love to hear it!
That's exactly what I was going for actually, just in a different way than I imagined. xD
I changed the description and added a rank because I wanted more than just one burst. Lemme know if there's anything else I need to add or change. *nodnod*
EDIT: Wrote lightning twice. XD
I don't mind it. It's similar in nature to what Weakness techniques of the Sakkakugan do, and I'm good for it. Hm...the only thing is "length". I would say you could create 5 bursts, with each burst lasting 2 posts (of YOUR posts, not counting your original post) before the effect fades. You're technically making flashbangs with jutsu, which is hilariously fun! So the question is, what are your thought on the duration? Overall, they have to see the burst. If you chained it so every second post you used it, you'd basically have it chaining...10 posts? Mind you, it'd still work!
Character: Karleen Robygen Technique Name: Faradē no netto [ Faraday's Net ] Rank: B-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Description:Gathering raiton in the body, then discharging it, Karleen creates a rapid burst of chakra ( each lasting two posts ) that regularly come off as physical electricity charges akin to lightning. These bursts disorient and confuse the optical senses and any sensory actions going on; making it difficult for Doujutsu and even Sensors. This jutsu doesn't take advantage of Karleen's black raiton, and is instead normal raiton, to prevent the loss of brightness of the "lightning".
I'm not too certain I can see this actually working the way you intended. Filling an area with chakra doesn't quite necessitate the blocking of the Doujutsu that rely on the detection of chakra. Now, if you're going to a massive amount of chakra in an area that more fills the area with white noise, that I can understand, but it would fill the bubble which would make the electricity harmful to all within unless you have specific defenses against it, like wearing rubber!
Now, I'm not opposed to the idea, but I'm simply not understanding the connection is all. If the Sharingan, which can at point track the tiniest of movements from a person's body, would be blinded by the sheer number of them...
ooh! Here's an idea. Write it that the electricity causes a burst of chakra. This would regularly come off as those "physical" electrical charges, like the lightning in the air. It is simply the extremely rapid bursts of chakra that would disorient their eyes. Not only would you get all of what you desire,but you'd also piss off any sensor trying to sense anything within that mess, because it would overwhelm their abilities as well.
If that was your intention, I apologize, but the devil is in the details, as people say. If you have a rebuttal, I would love to hear it!
That's exactly what I was going for actually, just in a different way than I imagined. xD
I changed the description and added a rank because I wanted more than just one burst. Lemme know if there's anything else I need to add or change. *nodnod*
EDIT: Wrote lightning twice. XD
I don't mind it. It's similar in nature to what Weakness techniques of the Sakkakugan do, and I'm good for it. Hm...the only thing is "length". I would say you could create 5 bursts, with each burst lasting 2 posts (of YOUR posts, not counting your original post) before the effect fades. You're technically making flashbangs with jutsu, which is hilariously fun! So the question is, what are your thought on the duration? Overall, they have to see the burst. If you chained it so every second post you used it, you'd basically have it chaining...10 posts? Mind you, it'd still work!
Fix'd. o v o
[Accepted]
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:54 pm
Resubmitting these both these two because I never got a reply back for Explosive Sights edits nor an ETA on the Meteor Rain review. Originally posted back in December for reference.
Character: Liori Mundo Technique Name: Bakuhatsu-Tekina Kōkei [Explosive Sight] Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Bakuton Description: A variant on the technique Daisan no Me [The Third Eye]. The user molds their clay into a small eyeball with one of their mending mouths. Closing a single eye they form a connection between their ocular nerve and the lump of clay allowing for sight through the clay while the linked eye remains closed. The eyeball floats around the user if not under direct control, which can be achieved by hand movements, at a maximum of [1] yard. When under the control of the user's hand the eye can reach distances of [15] yards. The eyeball can then be attached to a creation made from C1, giving the user sight and control over the creation. This enables the user to look around area's they wouldn't be able to easily due to size or restriction. Useful for recon and general shenanigans can move anywhere in the thread the user is in, leaving said thread with the creation would require the user to follow it. Explodes with a force of [1/2] an explosive tag but if combined with C1 it increases the blast force by [1] whole explosive tag. After the initial post the eye requires an upkeep of [5] chakra for each additional post, if the technique isn't canceled by post six the upkeep will increase to [10] chakra per additional post.
Character: Liori Mundo Technique Name: Ryūsei Ame [Meteor Rain] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Bakuton and Katon Description: The user accumulates a large lump of clay, filling both their mending mouths to the brim, then begins chewing and infusing it with Bakuton chakra for [2] posts. The user then throws the lump of clay high into the air using all their might, as it reaches its peak the clay lump splits into smaller balls. The small balls of clay begin raining down around the area, Katon chakra engulfing them in fire. The sky will look like a meteor shower for [2] posts, the balls of clay creating explosions of [1/2] tags upon contacting anything. The jutsu can also be dropped from the sky (assuming the user has the means, C2 for example would allow for such a feat), removing the need to leave themselves open while they throw it. This jutsu is usually used as a siege attack, sending a village into panic and leaving it open to attack. What it lacks in power it makes up for in sheer chaos factor. Has a range of one thread.
Character: Sonyo Rue Technique Name: Exploding Frozen Suns Rank: A-rank Type: Bloodline/ Ninjutsu Element: Hyouton / Fuuton Description:Upon studying the workings of Fubuki's Ice Bombs, Sonyo came upon a different idea. Upon finishing a string of handseals, a hallow ball of ice forms with a shell about two inches thick with a diameter of a foot and a half. Inside this ball is compressed air, enough to bring the shell of ice just before the breaking point. This makes the balls of ice very sensitive, and even the lightest touch causes them to explode in to millions of shards of super sharp Hyouton ice that fly 150 feet in every direction. The lethal range of this bomb is anywhere in till the 50 foot distance, severe injury occurs in till 100 feet away from the initial explosion, and acute injury anywhere from there till the end of the effective range of the explosion. This technique can also be detonated from a max distance of 20 yards from the ball's position with another string of hand seals and an additional cost of [10] chakra.
Lanfaer
XAyame_HatakeX
Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2016 7:08 pm
magcookie
Approved on both. That was my bad let me know if there is anything else you need.
Now, as it is, I can accept this technique. I just wanted to let you know I would improve the explosive range to about the range of a hand grenade, which, btw, is about 100 yards. If you're wanting it closer to that, I'd say keep the lethal range to about 150 ft explosion, with moderate damage to anything further, given you can detonate it at any point by simply making one handsign. You could also make the range as far as you can throw, which can be pretty damned far, if you want. For A-rank, I would say this is a bit underpowered.
If you are wanting to keep to what you have here, that's fine, but I would annotate that while the cost itself is B-rank, it deals A-rank damage. This is just my opinion. If you would just prefer it stay exactly as it is, than it's [Accepted].
magcookie
• Bakuhatsu-Tekina Kōkei [Explosive Sight] ►► Accepted • Ryūsei Ame [Meteor Rain] ►► The only thing I need is the Area of Effect. Just how large an area does it come down? Around how many spheres will explode in one round of posting? I ask, because you could claim 2k bombs are falling, giving 1k explosive tags. Clarification needed.
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2016 8:36 pm
Lanfaer
I Tortured Sleep I
Your's is easier, so I'll start with you!
Now, as it is, I can accept this technique. I just wanted to let you know I would improve the explosive range to about the range of a hand grenade, which, btw, is about 100 yards. If you're wanting it closer to that, I'd say keep the lethal range to about 150 ft explosion, with moderate damage to anything further, given you can detonate it at any point by simply making one handsign. You could also make the range as far as you can throw, which can be pretty damned far, if you want. For A-rank, I would say this is a bit underpowered.
If you are wanting to keep to what you have here, that's fine, but I would annotate that while the cost itself is B-rank, it deals A-rank damage. This is just my opinion. If you would just prefer it stay exactly as it is, than it's [Accepted].
magcookie
• Bakuhatsu-Tekina Kōkei [Explosive Sight] ►► Accepted • Ryūsei Ame [Meteor Rain] ►► The only thing I need is the Area of Effect. Just how large an area does it come down? Around how many spheres will explode in one round of posting? I ask, because you could claim 2k bombs are falling, giving 1k explosive tags. Clarification needed.
[/spoiker]
Fix'd. o v o Lemme know if you have any more issues.
Now, as it is, I can accept this technique. I just wanted to let you know I would improve the explosive range to about the range of a hand grenade, which, btw, is about 100 yards. If you're wanting it closer to that, I'd say keep the lethal range to about 150 ft explosion, with moderate damage to anything further, given you can detonate it at any point by simply making one handsign. You could also make the range as far as you can throw, which can be pretty damned far, if you want. For A-rank, I would say this is a bit underpowered.
If you are wanting to keep to what you have here, that's fine, but I would annotate that while the cost itself is B-rank, it deals A-rank damage. This is just my opinion. If you would just prefer it stay exactly as it is, than it's [Accepted].
magcookie
• Bakuhatsu-Tekina Kōkei [Explosive Sight] ►► Accepted • Ryūsei Ame [Meteor Rain] ►► The only thing I need is the Area of Effect. Just how large an area does it come down? Around how many spheres will explode in one round of posting? I ask, because you could claim 2k bombs are falling, giving 1k explosive tags. Clarification needed.
[/spoiker]
Fix'd. o v o Lemme know if you have any more issues.
