Character: Kaolin Satetsu Technique Name: Gotta go fast no jutsu (placeholder name) Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Description: Through rigorous speed training while wearing incredibly heavy weights, one gains the ability to reach speeds similar that of the Shunshin technique for one [1] post but at the cost of the body wearing out much faster. When it comes to covering distance with this technique, one can only cover 20m at most.
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Technique Name: Sounds of a Whisker Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: This Genjutsu is triggered by a sound of a little bell worn by the user. This Genjutsu alters reality in all sense's from touch, taste, smell, hearing, sight and mind (memories). When it changes thoughts it pretty much implements random memories that is not of the person affected original memory of certain things. Like a Childhood memory could of gone one way but in this genjutsu the person cast it could totally erase that memory and toss in a whole new memory on a whim.
What it does is it takes a world, (Example: being in a forest) and it could manipulate the persons sight, hearing, touch, taste, smell by changing the scenery around them. to make it feel like as if they moved places in a sense and can fully interact with the place using all senses. In the genjutsu the user has free reign to change the place at a whim and can use the scenery to manipulate certain memories in a persons head while in the genjutsu. causing everything that they knew as true to be changed to false at a given moment.
This Genjutsu has a duration period of 12 posts and can only be either assisted kai out or the user casting it must release it. this Genjutsu really does no harm to a person, physically, emotionally, or spiritually. and it can affect more then one person at a time.
Character: Sonyo Rue Technique Name: Hyouton: Frozen Wasteland Rank: E-S+ ( Must relearn for each rank that is being used. Current rank is replaced by the one used. Ei: You learn the D-rank version, then the B-rank version. The B-rank replaces the D-rank, and you take the D-rank off your list, however you can still use the D-rank version. ) Type: Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyouton ( Ice ) Description:After making a series on hand seals, the user will begin to pull the moisture from the air and freeze it. Said ice will cover everything in a circular range depending on the chakra amount used. This is plates everything in the surrounding area in an inch thick layer of ice. The user cannot break the hand seal in till the ice formation is finished, thus the advance of the ice will halt before it's finished. Range: E- 6 yrds, D- 9 yrds ( About the width of a tennis court ), C- 18 yrds ( the size of a penalty box ), B- 36 yrds ( About 1/3 of a football field ), A- 120 yrds, a football field in length, S- 180 yards ( 1 1/2 football fields ), s+ 240 yards ( two football fields in length )
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Using this jutsu, Sonyo is able to make her ice extra special. Instead of using normal water ice for techniques, sonyo is able to use dry ice instead. A "Dry Ice" chakra pool is made; how much is in it depends on how much chakra is put in to it. If a B-rank worth of chakra is put in, then Sonyo gets a "Dry Ice" chakra pool of [ 40 ]. The same applies for each amount put in.
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2014 10:43 am
Kiko_Alacran
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Technique Name: Sounds of a Whisker Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: This Genjutsu is triggered by a sound of a little bell worn by the user. This Genjutsu alters reality in all sense's from touch, taste, smell, hearing, sight and mind (memories). When it changes thoughts it pretty much implements random memories that is not of the person affected original memory of certain things. Like a Childhood memory could of gone one way but in this genjutsu the person cast it could totally erase that memory and toss in a whole new memory on a whim.
What it does is it takes a world, (Example: being in a forest) and it could manipulate the persons sight, hearing, touch, taste, smell by changing the scenery around them. to make it feel like as if they moved places in a sense and can fully interact with the place using all senses. In the genjutsu the user has free reign to change the place at a whim and can use the scenery to manipulate certain memories in a persons head while in the genjutsu. causing everything that they knew as true to be changed to false at a given moment.
This Genjutsu doesn't have a duration period and can only be either assisted kai out or the user casting it must release it. this Genjutsu really does no harm to a person, and it can affect more then one person at a time.
I will not pass this immediately, instead I want the guild captain to take a look at this one. I do understand that while it does not directly harm the person put under it's affect, it leaves large openings up for other issues. As such I would ask for his weight before we proceed on this issue.
Character: Sonyo Rue Technique Name: Hyouton: Frozen Wasteland Rank: E-S+ ( Must relearn for each rank that is being used. Current rank is replaced by the one used. Ei: You learn the D-rank version, then the B-rank version. The B-rank replaces the D-rank, and you take the D-rank off your list, however you can still use the D-rank version. ) Type: Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyouton ( Ice ) Description:After making a series on hand seals, the user will begin to pull the moisture from the air and freeze it. Said ice will cover everything in a circular range depending on the chakra amount used. This is plates everything in the surrounding area in an inch thick layer of ice. The user cannot break the hand seal in till the ice formation is finished, thus the advance of the ice will halt before it's finished. Range: E- 6 yrds, D- 9 yrds ( About the width of a tennis court ), C- 18 yrds ( the size of a penalty box ), B- 36 yrds ( About 1/3 of a football field ), A- 120 yrds, a football field in length, S- 180 yards ( 1 1/2 football fields ), s+ 240 yards ( two football fields in length )
Your first technique I cannot approve as it stands for largely simple reasons, if you modify it with a few simple passes then I'm sure it can be approved. ☰ Custom Jutsu should only range between E-S ranks for starters, so the S+ Rank on this limit needs to go, for a start. ☰ S-Ranked Jutsu do take up two of your eight custom slots, be sure to keep this in mind as custom slots are very precious resources. This will apply even with your jutsu being a sliding scale jutsu. ☰Following the Above Rule, I would make the technique require the S-Rank learning restriction, but allow you to learn all the lower versions as they are stated for effect. [ This is me, another Customs Mod may dispute this. ] ☰ Important also to note, since this is not the standard Hyouton Ice Creation this ice will be able to be broken by techniques of equivalent rank to the rank of use. Much as the case with the Demonic Ice Mirrors Technique.
I Tortured Sleep I
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Using this jutsu, Sonyo is able to make her ice extra special. Instead of using normal water ice for techniques, sonyo is able to use dry ice instead. A "Dry Ice" chakra pool is made; how much is in it depends on how much chakra is put in to it. If a B-rank worth of chakra is put in, then Sonyo gets a "Dry Ice" chakra pool of [ 40 ]. The same applies for each amount put in.
This one I am also very wary on, but I will tackle it thusly. I will approve this on the following conditions being added to it.
☰Chakra Cap: Dry Ice Chakra is capped at 1/2 your Maximum Chakra Level ☰Frailty: Dry Ice Techniques can be melted by Flames of one rank lower, or broken by equal rank techniques.
or
☰Chakra Cap: Dry Ice Chakra is Capped at Maximum Chakra Level ☰Physical Storage: The Dry Ice Chakra Must have a Physical Storage and the 'fog' radiated by this Dry Ice is in fact a dense cloud of your own chakra, clearly visible as such to sensors. [A form of Dry Ice that is kept around you at all times when this is active] ☰Storage Size: Size of Storage must be proportional to Amount of Chakra in it. No S Rank or more amounts of chakra in a Pebble Size block of ice. ☰Frailty: The Storage of Dry Ice Chakra can be broken by a B rank Jutsu or physical technique. Physical contact does cause minor frostburn to assailant and slightly slows them for 2 posts.
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2014 11:15 am
Wolfe Whitehorn
I have no problems with altering the first jutsu, however the second one, the Dry Ice release, was created by both me and AandOE. In fact he came up with a good deal of the jutsu, actually.
And just as such, he has also coincided the push about limiting the amount of chakra or putting other restrictions on items that hold chakra in the past. He has done it to several others as well as myself, and in here I am holding the status quo. Nothing personal, just doing my job.
It's actually a custom I quite like and would want my Hattori [Hyouton] to learn, even with either set of restrictions.
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2014 11:31 am
Wolfe Whitehorn
I Tortured Sleep I
And just as such, he has also coincided the push about limiting the amount of chakra or putting other restrictions on items that hold chakra in the past. He has done it to several others as well as myself, and in here I am holding the status quo. Nothing personal, just doing my job.
It's actually a custom I quite like and would want my Hattori [Hyouton] to learn, even with either set of restrictions.
The thing is, as it is, it's giving less than half the chakra pool, so you're giving it more.
As a gennin rank, you can only cast up to B-rank chakra.. However my character has a chakra pool of 300+. When I talked this over with hin, it seemed fine.
I know this is nothing personal, however I refuse to budge on the Dry Ice release jutsu in till told otherwise by AandOE. Considering he made literally everything except the main idea behind it.
Also, Dry ice sublimes at a very low temperature. It turns to gas upon hitting the air, though at a slow rate. Common sense having it, any fire type jutsu would melt it quicker than normal ice, considering just dropping it in hot water makes dry ice sublime insanely fast.
My question is this: can he continue to put Chakra in it and have the amounts stack? For example, if he put in 40 Chakra and then 20 more Chakra, would there be 20 Chakra or 60 Chakra in the pool?
The problem me and Ergo are having with this is that as it is written it allows you to place large amounts in over time and hold them infinitely so, which is a problem we strive to prevent in this guild. It appears to us as any number of seals that we have seen that just allow people to hold chakra and store it, which all have hard caps on them, by the rules and precedents set in this guild.
The wording of the jutsu is somewhat vague, which may be causing some of the situation we're seeing here. I will quote AandOE so he can come to deliver his peace about it in open forum, as well as speaking with him directly about this with a Vice Captain, Ergo War, in Skype.
Regarding the Sublimation of Dry Ice, yes, it is common sense, but it is an issue of clarity when it comes to the technique. If it is not addressed in clarity and someone else ends up getting the technique or making one just like it, they could simply state, it's not written like that, so it doesn't have to play like that. Another issue we have had in the past.
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2014 11:52 am
I Tortured Sleep I
Okay, if it's done like that, then it's quite alright and should not be a problem.
As to the ice layer one, you don't have to cap that at B. S just takes up two custom slots, S+ can't be done in custom. Having it as an S and learning it as an S then lets you use all the lower ranges of it for the lower chakra costs. Is how I was stating it.
Character: Sonyo Kuno Rue Technique Name: Doraihyoton [ Dry Ice Release ] Rank: B for learning reasons Type: Supplemental Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Element: Hyoton ( Acts like Null ) Description:Using this jutsu, Sonyo is able to make her ice extra special. Instead of using normal water ice for techniques, sonyo is able to use dry ice instead. A "Dry Ice" chakra pool is made; how much is in it depends on how much chakra is put in to it. If a B-rank worth of chakra is put in, then Sonyo gets a "Dry Ice" chakra pool of [ 40 ]. The same applies for each amount put in. However, pools cannot stack and this jutsu can only be used [2] posts after the current pool has run out.
( I see no point of negating the stacking, however, considering you'd be left unable to use any other ninjutsu and any complex taijuts/bukijutsu. It's not granting any magical chakra, it's converting the chakra you have in to a pool only able to be tapped in for dry ice hyouton. 330 - 40 for the pool equals 290 normal chakra and 40 chakra in the dry ice pool. I'm still willing to go with the above option, however. )
I'd rather just change it, it simplifies things and I like simple things. xD
Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 8:25 am
Character: Kira NAra Technique Name: Shadōurufupakku (Shadow Wolf Pack) Rank: Null Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: This jutsu can call forth her Nara bloodline and use the shadows to create wolves of various sizes and builds that are under Kira’s command. Depending on how much chakra she uses, depends on how many wolves she can create in this manner (E-1 D-2 C-3 B-4 A-5 S-6) These wolves can physically harm anyone she deems to be the target, and are as fast as the shadows they are made of, but the more she has, the harder it is to keep control of them, also, they are something of a hive-mind, with Kira being the 'queen’ so to speak. They can’t think for themselves, and only react when given orders from Kira, though they don’t need verbal commands; that being said, the wolves, as a whole, have one activation per post. Depending on how many she made, depends on the amount of physical strength it takes to disperse the wolves (Ex. If Kira made one wolf with an E amount of chakra, it would take an E amount of chakra/stamina to disperse the wolf as if it were a clone.)
Character: Yukki Kiru Tsuchikyo Technique Name: Temporal rejuvenation Rank: A Type: Bloodline/Medical Element: Kuton, Eiseijutsu Description: This jutsu when casted creates a moderately large sphere of Kuton energy. The size of this sphere can hold up to 5 people inside. No tai, buki, ninjutsu, or genjutsu can be used within the sphere to harm anyone on the outside. As well as those used outside the sphere cannot harm the ones inside. Only thing usable inside the jutsu is Eiseijutsu or defencive jutsu. The duration of this jutsu would last for 6 Posts or Until the user releases. The user must maintain a hand sign while inside the sphere to provide Major healing to all parties within. As well as a 20 chakra and stamina per post to all parties except the user. After using this jutsu there is a Five (5) of the users posts cool down before being able to use again.
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