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 Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:05 pm
Crystal stared at Leon saying "I can see the darkness surround you! Don't you see Leon! That book changes people! I only touched it once, you've held onto it too long! Hand the book to me and I'll make sure it never hurts anyone again! Please don't do this!"
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:07 pm
Still smiles You did get to ment him..where was he last tell me
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:09 pm
"I don't know where he is. As soon as I saw you he disappeared. Now, please hand over the book so I can get rid of it. Please!" Crystal demanded with hard looking eyes.
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:15 pm
the smiles get smaller but is still there You..want the book..but you cant have it beacuse it time to see if the test works Looks over at a TV
the 6pm news
Welcome to the 6 oclock news im Mike and today..."mike stop talking and his eye got wided then you hear a gun shot it hits mike right in his left eye killing him right there and then.. the shooter walked over to his dead body and started to shoot him more then in the middle of his shooting he starts to have a heart attack and dies right there
leon starts to laugh it works IT WORKS
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:18 pm
Crystal stared with wide eyes. In shock. She couldn't believe it. Staring at Leon she said "I can't belive... that you... HOW COULD YOU USE IT YOU IDIOT!!!!! DON'T YOU KNOW HOW STUPID THAT IS!"
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:20 pm
Leon not listening to her It works now no one can stop me..but you looks over at her
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:24 pm
Crystal glared as she said "don't even think about it. The note book only works on humans. It doesn't work on someone that's a decendent of an angel."
((thought that might work, it is kinda shocking if you think about it dontcha think?))
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:26 pm
(i dont know let me think about that ok smile )
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:29 pm
((okay, it's just a bit of an idea I'm using with a story I'm working on, just slightly different))
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:33 pm
(you writeing a story? caqn i hear it? )
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:37 pm
((well, it's about an Angel Warrior, who wishes to protect humans instead of kill them like the rest of his kind, he finds and meets a human girl that has the power to see what a person is, thats called 'True Sight'. later on, the rest of the Angel Warriors try to get Helio, the good Angel warrior to return, but can't if Nicole, the human is alive. She's the only one that keeps the darkness in Helio in check and when he's angry it comes out... I havne't really gotten it started, I'm still working on it... ))
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:41 pm
well thats kool
i hope it works out unlike all my mine razz
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:44 pm
((it just takes pratice, lots of hard work and creative talent, oh and lots of luck, I had to teach myself how to write stories... first few stories I'll admit were crap))
Crystal glared saying "Leon... You'll only get more corupted if you keep holding onto that book!"
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:22 pm
ok i been thinking and im sorry but the angel thing just dont seem right sorry sad
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:47 pm
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