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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:53 pm
xxxMokona Looks dead but body is tensing up every few mintues. [[I'd really hate to bother you, but...when you post...you think you could do it like you were writing a story...? kinda like the way everyone else in the guild posts, you're good, but the:
*action* "talking" *action*
way of posting is kinda bugging me a bit, I see it in a bunch of other rp's I'm in and it's starting to frustrate me a little...so sorry
lol at least you use proper grammar and all that xD i know one guy here who doesn't even use "" when speaking xDD
i'm not trying to be a pain or anything, it's just something that's started to bug me recently
it just makes the rp a little more real, i guess]]
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:55 pm
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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:28 pm
[[lol it's alright, it really wasn't bugging me at all before, but all of a sudden it did after seeing a whole rp done in that style xDD]]
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:29 pm
(oh okay I'll do better^^)
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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:55 pm
xxxMokona (oh okay I'll do better^^) [[lol awesome, it's nothing big, but it makes me twitch xD]]
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:20 am
xxxMokona His sink has a pale tent to it and sweat is on his face."Why...Dad why..."Hears to guns shots go off in his head and sceams."AHHHHHHHH!!!" She looks around fraticly, not sure what to do. "I... I-- Someone! Please help!" She cries.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:47 pm
He starts to kick and punch.He looks like a little five year old throwing a fit."NOOOO!AAAHHHHHH!AHHHH!!!"
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:01 pm
Her right eye widens in fear while her left starts to examine everything.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 9:51 pm
Suddenly his body stops and goes limp.His eyes are on but they are blank.He looks like a lifeless doll.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:15 am
"Oh, god..." She whispers, holding her hand to her mouth. She stands up and runs out of the room. "Someone! Please help..."
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:31 pm
Xane eyes go back to having life in them and gets up shaking his head."What...happened...it could it of been..."Gets up."Hello!"
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:18 pm
Izzy spazzed and jumped back. "What the f*ck!?"
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:43 pm
"It must have happened again..."Walks over to her."Are you okay Izzy?"
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:15 pm
"Me what?Its okay I'm fine."
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