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 Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:43 am
Character:Kazurai Saito
Technique Name: Sutōmuburēdo Jutsu [Storm Blade technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water/Lightning (Ranton)
Description: The user forms a solid weapon of any size or style (except complicated, IE: Flexible weapons or projectile weapons.) out of a current source of water or from the moisture in the air (Depending rank). Then fuises raiton chakra into the blade alone causing it to spark with electricity. Making the blade far more deadly then a normal steel weapon. The blade acts as an extreme conductor where upon touching any form of metal or water can send the shockwave through it almost instantaniously, badly shocking anything on the other end of the current.}
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Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:52 am
Kazuraii
Character:Kazurai Saito
Technique Name: Sutōmuburēdo Jutsu [Storm Blade technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water/Lightning (Ranton)
Description: The user forms a solid weapon of any size or style (except complicated, IE: Flexible weapons or projectile weapons.) out of a current source of water or from the moisture in the air (Depending rank). Then fuises raiton chakra into the blade alone causing it to spark with electricity. Making the blade far more deadly then a normal steel weapon. The blade acts as an extreme conductor where upon touching any form of metal or water can send the shockwave through it almost instantaniously, badly shocking anything on the other end of the current.}
I would suggest looking at these for inspiration, then see if you still want to use this as a custom Quote: Mizu no Yaiba [ Water Sword ] Rank: E Official Description: Creates a sharp sword made of solid water in the user’s hand. As the user's control improves, he can manipulate the shape and size he/she wants the sword to have, from a tiny dagger to a massive decapitator sword. At the minimum requirements, the sword has minimal offensive power, able to make slight cuts and tears in the flesh of an opponent, and susceptible to high pressure (an opponent breaking the blade with a weapon of his own). This is stronger than the Maruton version. Academy Level: The sword can be up to the size of a wakizashi, and is fragile, breaking under the pressure of weapon strikes against it. Genin Level: The sword can be up to the size of a katana, and is now as strong as a normal, metal blade. Chuunin Level: The sword can be up to the size of a nodachi, and now cuts with the edge of a finely crafted blade. Jounin Level: The sword can be up to the size of a cleaver sword, and is now incredibly durable and lethal. Guild Description: See official description. Nagare Tensou no Jutsu [ Current Transfer Technique ] Rank: D Official Description: The user creates an electrical current in his or her hand; this current can then be transferred onto any weapon he or she happens to be holding at that moment, be it a Kunai, Senbon, Shuriken, or even a sword. The next physical attack he or she performs is charged with this electrical current; if he or she blocks a weapon attack with a weapon, the current transfers over shocking the attacker. If by chance the user is not carrying a weapon, he or she can transfer the current into the opponent's weapon or can directly hit him with this current to shock the target. Guild Description: See official description. Yaiba no Jutsu [ Blade Technique ] Rank: C Official Description: The user charges Raiton Chakra in the palm. The Chakra eventually works up to the fingers, where a blade of electricity is formed between the index and middle finger. The blade is very thin, and depending on the user's Chakra, anywhere from 8 inches to a foot long. It is around 2 to 3 inches wide, and it lacks a hilt. The blade is held between the fingers, and as soon as it is let go, the blade vanishes into thin air. The strength of this blade isn't as strong as a normal blade, as it is nowhere as dense or as heavy, but because the blade is very thin, it is capable of doing major damage if used properly. However, this blade can also hurt the user anywhere except for the fingers where the blade is held. Guild Description: See official description.
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Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 9:28 pm
Yes I do, its actually part of a three jutsu customs that will all work hand in hand. The main reason for this style is to merge the 2 other jutsu together as one making it a more powerful rank. Also the next two jutsu better provide the reasoning behind this particular one itself. Also condensing all the work that has to be done to make a water sword infused with lightning chakra and being able to form other solid weapons aka Spears, Mace, etc. Trust me it will all make a lot more sense soon. Its just my character is still in early development and learning this is kinda the place in the story that helps out.
sorry for the long post just helping better understand why.
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Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 9:51 pm
Kazuraii
Character:Kazurai Saito
Technique Name: Sutōmuburēdo Jutsu [Storm Blade technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water/Lightning (Ranton)
Description: The user forms a solid weapon of any size or style (except complicated, IE: Flexible weapons or projectile weapons.) out of a current source of water or from the moisture in the air (Depending rank). Then fuises raiton chakra into the blade alone causing it to spark with electricity. Making the blade far more deadly then a normal steel weapon. The blade acts as an extreme conductor where upon touching any form of metal or water can send the shockwave through it almost instantaniously, badly shocking anything on the other end of the current.}
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 6:37 pm
Character: Haituro
Technique Name: ushinaware ai no kagami [Mirror of lost love]
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: fire/earth
Description: Haituro will begin to whistle a tune while looking at his target, if the target doesn't cover his ears or find and attack Haituro, they will be ensnared in a jutsu and will notice a giant mirror appear before them. In that mirror they will see the person they care most about. From there the person they see in the mirror will appear behind them and tap them on the shoulder. Once they get tapped on the shoulder they'll realize the person in the mirror is gone. When they turn to see who had tapped them they'll be attacked from behind by the person.While fighting with this person they are doing it in a dream they will be standing in one spot with their eyes wide open. All the damage they receive while fighting this person will feel and seem real to the ninja ensnared but will not actually damage them.
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 7:01 pm
Jonderken
Character: Haituro
Technique Name: Mirror of lost love
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: fire/earth
Description: Haituro will begin to whistle a tune while looking at his target, if the target doesn't cover his ears or listens for 2 whole posts they will be insnared in a jutsu and will notice a giant mirror appear before them and in that mirror they will see the person they care most about. From there the person they see in the mirror will appear behind them and tap them on the shoulder and as they turn to look will begin to attack them with the abilities that the person had although the person who is fighting the doppelganger will recieve no real damage it will feel to them as though they are.
*rubs eyes* the description needs a little work. But just to clerify, the whole two posts thing...does that mean that you whistle for two posts to have it activate?
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:23 pm
Yes, for example i'd be hiding somewhere whisting and they'd have to find me and attack to make me stop before the two post activation.
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:28 pm
Jonderken Yes, for example i'd be hiding somewhere whisting and they'd have to find me and attack to make me stop before the two post activation. Gotcha. Now please edit the description a little to make it more readable, and eliminate things like run on sentences and s**t like that.
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 10:45 pm
Jonderken
Character: Haituro
Technique Name: ushinaware ai no kagami [Mirror of lost love]
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: fire/earth
Description: Haituro will begin to whistle a tune while looking at his target, if the target doesn't cover his ears or find and attack Haituro, they will be ensnared in a jutsu and will notice a giant mirror appear before them. In that mirror they will see the person they care most about. From there the person they see in the mirror will appear behind them and tap them on the shoulder. Once they get tapped on the shoulder they'll realize the person in the mirror is gone. When they turn to see who had tapped them they'll be attacked from behind by the person.While fighting with this person they are doing it in a dream they will be standing in one spot with their eyes wide open. All the damage they receive while fighting this person will feel and seem real to the ninja ensnared but will not actually damage them.
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Posted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:09 am
Character: Ayame Hatake
Technique Name: Pack Mentality
Rank: Variable
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Pack Mentality is a jutsu that Ayame uses to bring someone into her and Daichi's pack. This will give a +2 rank to all collaboration jutsu done with said person; however, each rank must be trained separately and they are only able to perform a maximum collaboration rank that the jutsu is trained. The training is where the bond is formed so Ayame can't use this jutsu on just anyone at a moments notice. The person has to do an A rank of training to get to know Ayame and Daichi. Ayame will also do an A rank of training, but hers will follow the custom model whereas the rest will be following standard training.
Character: Ayame Hatake
Technique Name: Mark of the Alpha/Runt
Rank: A
Type: Fuuin
Description: This mark will either increase or decrease a marked persons jutsu by one rank. It is only able to last 5 posts and is only usable 3 times. If Ayame uses it on herself it costs all 3 uses. The seal is placed by touch.
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Posted: Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:53 pm
Character: Haituro Hari
Sake Kumo no Jutsu [ Drunken Cloud Technique ]
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B — Sight
Element: Maruton
Description: A variation of the Doku Kumo no Jutsu (Poison cloud technique) after forming a single handed hand seal (Maintained the entire time by the user) the target will see a cloud descending from the sky blanketing the battlefield and begins to smell alcohol. Using the single handed seal he'll be for to use his free hand to block and do any other necessary actions as long as he keeps the seal locked in with the sealing hand the genjutsu will stay in effect. Shortly after the cloud envelops them the target will begin to feel a slight buzz progressively getting worse each post. Getting more and more drunk the users motor functions will get worse but their power will increase with each post as though they are actually drunk. After 5 posts the user will begin to suffer nausea and vomiting and loss of coherent speech until eventually after 7 posts blacking out and collapsing.
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Posted: Sat Aug 31, 2013 9:40 pm
Character: Apollo Hyuuga
Technique Name: Wisping Feint of the Wicked
Rank: D
Type: G e n j u t s u
Element: [Null]
Description: A low ranking technique utilizing the affinity of sight and the perception of the opponent. After doing the needed handsigns, this activates and merely requires the opposite to be gazing upon Apollo. Instantly their perception of his body is thrown off and he's put under the guise of doing something completely different than what he's doing, in actuality. This can range from a different set of seals, to a feint with his body, to morphing his image into a entirely different shape. It's variation is up to his imagination, but is selected beforehand; meaning, he cannot change from one variation to another unless the opponent loses sight of him and then see's him once again. This can be continuously active as long as the cost is paid.
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Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 8:35 am
Jonderken Character: Haituro Hari Sake Kumo no Jutsu [ Drunken Cloud Technique ] Type: Genjutsu Rank: B — Sight Element: Maruton Description: A variation of the Doku Kumo no Jutsu (Poison cloud technique) after forming a single handed hand sign (Maintained the entire time by the user) the target will see a cloud descending from the sky blanketing the battlefield and begins to smell alcohol. Shortly after they begin to feel a slight buzz progressively getting worse each post. Getting more and more drunk the users motor functions will get worse but their power will increase with each post as though they are actually drunk. After 5 posts the user will begin to suffer nausea and vomiting and loss of coherent speech until eventually after 7 posts blacking out and collapsing. If the hand seal is not held, or the hands are forced apart, the genjutsu is automatically released/broken. Other then that, its really good Approved Dcme Character: Apollo Hyuuga
Technique Name: Wisping Feint of the Wicked
Rank: D
Type: G e n j u t s u
Element: [Null]
Description: A low ranking technique utilizing the affinity of sight and the perception of the opponent. After doing the needed handsigns, this activates and merely requires the opposite to be gazing upon Apollo. Instantly their perception of his body is thrown off and he's put under the guise of doing something completely different than what he's doing, in actuality. This can range from a different set of seals, to a feint with his body, to morphing his image into a entirely different shape. It's variation is up to his imagination, but is selected beforehand; meaning, he cannot change from one variation to another unless the opponent loses sight of him and then see's him once again. This can be continuously active as long as the cost is paid.
Under REVIEW XAyame_HatakeX
Character: Ayame Hatake
Technique Name: Pack Mentality
Rank: Variable
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Pack Mentality is a jutsu that Ayame uses to bring someone into her and Daichi's pack. This will give a +2 rank to all collaboration jutsu done with said person; however, each rank must be trained separately and they are only able to perform a maximum collaboration rank that the jutsu is trained. The training is where the bond is formed so Ayame can't use this jutsu on just anyone at a moments notice. The person has to do an A rank of training to get to know Ayame and Daichi. Ayame will also do an A rank of training, but hers will follow the custom model whereas the rest will be following standard training.
Character: Ayame Hatake
Technique Name: Mark of the Alpha/Runt
Rank: A
Type: Fuuin
Description: This mark will either increase or decrease a marked persons jutsu by one rank. It is only able to last 5 posts and is only usable 3 times. If Ayame uses it on herself it costs all 3 uses. The seal is placed by touch.
pack mentality: just so I make sure I understand how these things work. For an A rank of training (you following the custom model and they follow regular jutsu) they are allowed into the "pack." Then they must train this technique to prior to the rank of collaboration they are going to train, acting as the maximal rank they can perform until increased? Does this technique work for the whole "pack", or just ayame? mark of alpha/runt: I do believe this shall be approved
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XAyame_HatakeX Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:43 am
pack mentality: just so I make sure I understand how these things work. For an A rank of training (you following the custom model and they follow regular jutsu) they are allowed into the "pack." ( The training and time together is the getting to know process and learning to work together. Ayame and Daichi wouldn't train with them if they didn't want them in the pack. So yes it is the initiation into the "pack") Then they must train this technique to prior to the rank of collaboration they are going to train, acting as the maximal rank they can perform until increased?( Yes because they can't just automatically rank up if they don't know the jutsu) Does this technique work for the whole "pack", or just ayame?( It only works for pack mentality they will still have to train korobo individually together and only up to Ayame's rank since she is the alpha per say)
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