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Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 11:44 am


Blessings Followed by Sin

Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact.


size, damage, number, and maximal distance travel descriptions needed

Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp.

Seing as substitution can only be used 3 times a battle, this one follows a similar restriction. Instea dof three, it will be 5 times, including the different variations of this technqiue. this technqiue must be trained before the others can


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting ones chakra network, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred.


attacking ones chakra network is limited to byakugan, and certain sealing jutsu. that part is denied. Just so you know, an A rank technqiue, including physical buki, will defeat this. Counts as one of DOTP restrictions.


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speak, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing them harm. This technique has a three post cool down.

I guess this can be approved. for a verbal mantra instead of hand seals, it counts as 2 activations in that post, but the flames can, if wish, stick around for an additional post.


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one.


what is the power and blast radius of the explosion? How do you actually fire the arrow of that size?


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken.

what is kaseiken? also i will need a better description of its capabilities. such as how altering the form and usage affects the damage.


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By releasing heavily concentrated chakra, this forms a massive pressure in the surrounding area that significantly decreases the speed and movement ability of all shinobi in a 200 yard radius with lower chakra than the user. If the target focuses closely on themselves, they can see burning crimson chains with spikes that are draping off their body, and are ethereal looking. Lasts 10 posts.

Denied. While i appreciate the creativity, this is effectivly treated as a "gravity manipulation technqiue" and is thus denied. mor ein particular, nothing like this would be approved for 10 posts duration


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 400 feet forward, and 300 feet horizontal in a conical blast.


Reduce the distance by 100 feet in each direction. For the low rank, this requires a 1 post charge up and 1 post cool down.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:27 pm


Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact.

Quote:
I'm probably going to get shitted on for this example, but it's the closest thing I could come up with without pondering on it for a while..
http://24.media.tumblr.com/2bc66d2068315805f0417a993e631a8c/tumblr_mesti1bvG51rmj92ro1_500.gif



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.


Quote:
During the movement of the arm the Katon chakra is gathering and condensing, and at the end of the movement, as if the string that was being pulled back would be released, it would fire.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken.

Quote:

Well, it doesn't really alter the shape. You can either send it through the air via slash at an opponent, or if you can do a vertical slash into the ground, it would now also have debris in the attack.

Kaseiken [ Flame Fist ]
Rank: A
Official Description: Kaiseken, essentially, is an attack that causes an intense explosion by transferring all heat from the user’s hand into the object it makes contact with. From the outside, it looks like the flame enveloping the user’s hand is also enveloping the object in question and it is the force of the punch that causes the explosion. If this were the case, this technique would clearly be much more Taijutsu-oriented than Ninjutsu. But it’s not so simple, really. There are obvious drawbacks to this transfer of Chakra-gone-flame, such as being so close to explosion itself. Although the technique is easily able to destroy massive boulders and cliff sides upon contact, the danger presents itself in the rubble and shock to the arm from such devastation. Because of this, the technique can only be used twice a day for even the most gifted Jounin. If used any more, the bones of the user’s arm will shatter from internal pressures caused by the technique.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By releasing heavily concentrated chakra, burning crimson chains with spikes that have an ethereal appearance 'pierce' the body of those targeted and effectively stops them from moving for three posts. Of course they can use their arms and cast jutsu, but they can not move their abdomen down.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired, and also has a 1 post cool-down.

Yui Ga Dokuson

Thirteenth Gatekeeper


Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 8:20 pm


Blessings Followed by Sin
Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact.

Quote:
your right. i need a written description about the technqiue. speed of travel, maximal distance, explosive power, etc



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned.


Still need a max distance that can be traveled. Make it less then shunshin due to versatility


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred.


sorry for this but i jsut thought of it, this technique counts as 2 activations [ for the two fast attacks]. Additionally, damage is limited to the weapon used.


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.

approved


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.


so long as speed is that of a regular arrow, and follows the limitations {distance, accuracy, etc} of the weapon itself, approved.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken.


Remove the thing about the rainstom. add in that this technique always counts as an offensive activation, even if used "defensively."



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By releasing heavily concentrated chakra, burning crimson chains with spikes that have an ethereal appearance 'pierce' the body of those targeted and effectively stops them from moving for three posts. Of course they can use their arms and cast jutsu, but they can not move their abdomen down.


where is it cast from {mouth, hands}? What is the maximal distance of travel? more detail is needed for this to even be considered


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired, and also has a 1 post cool-down.


sorry about this as well, but for the charge up, it counts as 2 offensive activations in that post, due to the "commitment" needed to the technqiue. additionally, the distance makes up for this draw back if used correctly
PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 8:46 pm


Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and a streak of Katon chakra that resembles 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact. The 'sparks' move at about the same speed as a senbon being launched from a launcher. Can only reach up to about 200 feet before dissipating.

Quote:
I'm having trouble with the power. I want to relate it to explosive tags but not quite sure how many.. >w<



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned. However, because of such versatility, this jutsu only works in the range of a half mile.


Quote:
Halved distance of Shunshin



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred. This technique counts as 2 activations since the quantity of the attack.


Quote:
Fixed and alrighty.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.


Quote:
Deal.




Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation.


Quote:
Done and done. Don't even really remember why I put the rainstorm thing in there to begin with to be honest aha. XD



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: After gathering chakra while holding the Tiger seal, the user will release heavily concentrated chakra, creating burning crimson chains with spikes that have an ethereal appearance to 'pierce' the body of those targeted and effectively stops them from moving for three posts. Of course they can use their arms and cast jutsu, but they can not move their abdomen down. The technique can be used at a range of 300 feet.


Quote:
Is that better? owo



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired that counts as the two offensive actions, and also has a 1 post cool-down.


Quote:
That worded correctly? owo

Yui Ga Dokuson

Thirteenth Gatekeeper


Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 8:52 pm


Blessings Followed by Sin
Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and a streak of Katon chakra that resembles 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact. The 'sparks' move at about the same speed as a senbon being launched from a launcher. Can only reach up to about 200 feet before dissipating.

I think their is a B rank wind jutsu that is measured in explosive tags. You may wanna look into that.


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned. However, because of such versatility, this jutsu only works in the range of a half mile.


approved


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred. This technique counts as 2 activations since the quantity of the attack.

approved


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.

approved



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation.


Quote:
Hmm...the technqiue still needs a max distance it can travel. the omni directional ones needs to be much smaller then the other version.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: After gathering chakra while holding the Tiger seal, the user will release heavily concentrated chakra, creating burning crimson chains with spikes that have an ethereal appearance to 'pierce' the body of those targeted and effectively stops them from moving for three posts. Of course they can use their arms and cast jutsu, but they can not move their abdomen down. The technique can be used at a range of 300 feet.


Not exactly, i need to know where the chains COME FROM and how the attatch to the target. also adding how it actually emobilizes the target would indeed help. You would be lucky to get three posts depending how it works. the distance is much to far, maybe 100 feet


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired that counts as the two offensive actions, and also has a 1 post cool-down.


Close enough. Approved
PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:04 pm


Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and a streak of Katon chakra that resembles 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact. The 'sparks' move at about the same speed as a senbon being launched from a launcher. Can only reach up to about 200 feet before dissipating. Explosive damage equal to three explosive tags.


Quote:
Found it, thankies. biggrin



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned. However, because of such versatility, this jutsu only works in the range of a half mile.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred. This technique counts as 2 activations since the quantity of the attack.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. When launched via slash can reach up to 500 feet. When launched from/into ground, only 250 feet, but higher concentration.


Quote:
Fixed?



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: After gathering chakra while holding the Tiger seal, the user will release heavily concentrated chakra, creating burning crimson chains with spikes that have an ethereal appearance to 'pierce' the body of those targeted and effectively stops them from moving for three posts. Of course they can use their arms and cast jutsu, but they can not move their abdomen down. The technique can be used at a range of 300 feet.


Quote:
Canceling it for now. Might rework it to make more sense or just scrap it.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired that counts as the two offensive actions, and also has a 1 post cool-down.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.

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Yo-ko

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:09 pm


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Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and a streak of Katon chakra that resembles 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact. The 'sparks' move at about the same speed as a senbon being launched from a launcher. Can only reach up to about 200 feet before dissipating. Explosive damage equal to three explosive tags.


approved


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned. However, because of such versatility, this jutsu only works in the range of a half mile.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred. This technique counts as 2 activations since the quantity of the attack.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. When launched via slash can reach up to 500 feet. When launched from/into ground, only 250 feet, but higher concentration.


Quote:
No. i think even S ranks are within 35 meters, which means this must be tuned in hard. i would look at shunakan and kiss of slesh and steel as they are similar technqiues



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Chains
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: After gathering chakra while holding the Tiger seal, the user will release heavily concentrated chakra, creating burning crimson chains with spikes that have an ethereal appearance to 'pierce' the body of those targeted and effectively stops them from moving for three posts. Of course they can use their arms and cast jutsu, but they can not move their abdomen down. The technique can be used at a range of 300 feet.


Quote:
Canceling it for now. Might rework it to make more sense or just scrap it.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired that counts as the two offensive actions, and also has a 1 post cool-down.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:15 pm


Yo-ko


Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Flames
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Masaru will hold out his hand, or slash it through the air in any sharp motion and a streak of Katon chakra that resembles 'sparks' will streak forward towards the target before an explosion is made from contact. The 'sparks' move at about the same speed as a senbon being launched from a launcher. Can only reach up to about 200 feet before dissipating. Explosive damage equal to three explosive tags.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Dance of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: It allows for a movement at great speed, leaving an afterimage behind. The Uchiha's own little spin on a substitution mixed with his great speed. DOTP is just like Shunshin but is enhanced, thus leaving an afterimage because of the speed it renders. And since it was so fast, lets say for an example if you were in a bear hug and used it, the person holding you would still see you for a few moments and feel you in his grasp. This technique and it's variants can only be used a total of five times in battle. This technique must also be trained before it's variants can be learned. However, because of such versatility, this jutsu only works in the range of a half mile.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Strike of the Phantom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A special DOTP technique where one moves to their opponent's back, directly attacking and cutting one's throat, and the spinal cord in half in two rapid strikes. This attack is one of the male's favorite to use. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what movements just occurred. This technique counts as 2 activations since the quantity of the attack.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Shield of the Phantom
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Masaru will raise his hand and stretch it out in front of himself before beginning his mantra. As he speaks, the words will appear around him, burning a dark crimson red, floating in mid air as they spin around him slowly in layers, creating a barrier that will stop any incoming jutsu from causing him harm, and can last for an additional post if desired. This technique has a three post cool down. Upon activation, it counts as two activations out of the restricted three.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: The Piercing Power from a Burning Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique is derived from the move Dance of the Flames. This is a stronger, faster, and more advanced form of the jutsu. The 'sparks' now take the form of a much larger than usual arrow [ about 6 feet in length, 6 inches width of the shaft, foot width at base of head ]. The technique now doesn't explode on contact; but explodes once it has embedded itself into a target or is passing through one with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. Reference Kaiseiken again.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. The technique starts out with a range of 5 meters, but increases by another 3 meters for every rank of speed added to it. This means that a Genin using this technique would only have a range of 5 meters, but that a Kage would be able to hit something 18 meters away.


Quote:
Found it. Nao?



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Hell's Eruption
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, purple chakra at a target with high damage and wide area that spreads 300 feet forward, and 200 feet horizontal in a conical blast. The technique requires one post of gathering and condensing the technique before it can be fired that counts as the two offensive actions, and also has a 1 post cool-down.


Quote:
You said approved, just keeping it here for order sake.

Yui Ga Dokuson

Thirteenth Gatekeeper


Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:17 pm



Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. The technique starts out with a range of 5 meters, but increases by another 3 meters for every rank of speed added to it. This means that a Genin using this technique would only have a range of 5 meters, but that a Kage would be able to hit something 18 meters away.


that can be for the omni directional one, then double it for the directional one (like sacrificing strength for distance, etc)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:31 pm


Yo-ko

Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. The technique starts out with a range of 10 meters, but increases by another 6 meters for every rank of speed added to it. This means that a Genin using this technique would only have a range of 10 meters, but that a Kage would be able to hit something 36 meters away. Halve for Omni-directional variant.


biggrin ?

Yui Ga Dokuson

Thirteenth Gatekeeper


Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:38 pm


Blessings Followed by Sin
Yo-ko

Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. The technique starts out with a range of 10 meters, but increases by another 6 meters for every rank of speed added to it. This means that a Genin using this technique would only have a range of 10 meters, but that a Kage would be able to hit something 36 meters away. Halve for Omni-directional variant.


biggrin ?
bump bump bump bump bumpbump BUUUUUUUUMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

approved, so long a syou know you will need a weapon to perform this XD
PostPosted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 9:42 pm


Yo-ko
Blessings Followed by Sin
Yo-ko

Character: Masaru Uchiha
Technique Name: Wrath of Hatred
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: --
Description: This technique releases the highly condensed chakra at the tip of the Uchiha's katana, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The WoH is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The technique could be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. When contact is made, it can cause an explosion equivalent to that of the Kaseiken. Even if used 'defensively', it will still be counted as an offensive activation. The technique starts out with a range of 10 meters, but increases by another 6 meters for every rank of speed added to it. This means that a Genin using this technique would only have a range of 10 meters, but that a Kage would be able to hit something 36 meters away. Halve for Omni-directional variant.


biggrin ?
bump bump bump bump bumpbump BUUUUUUUUMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

approved, so long a syou know you will need a weapon to perform this XD


Aha, of course. xD Thankies.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:36 pm



Character: Ahira Enso Boido

Technique Name: Moon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kuton
Description: Creates a somewhat medium sized pocket of pure nothingness, much like the star technique. The pocket will pull weapons an opponent is using towards it. Projectiles are pulled quickly, while a weapon such as a katana would be pulled towards it slowly from far away or quickly from close up. As opposed to the weaker Star, this can move a thrown object off it's trajectory easily, while simply giving the user of a larger weapon a hard time at handling their weapon properly.

Technique Name: Sun
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kuton
Description: Creates a large pocket of pure nothingness, much like the star technique. The pocket will pull any other shinobi towards it, as well as any weapons or projectiles thrown. The pulling potential isn't significant enough to cause any extreme trouble with moving away from it, but it does make it slightly harder.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 5:14 pm



Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi
Technique Name: Fur Flame
Rank: A
Type: Nin/Taijutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique can only be used after performing the Man Beast Clone jutsu, Once the technique is activated the user is covered from head to toe in flames, which closely resembles fur on animals such as cats. Bringing out the inner feline within the user. This transparent cloak increases the users defense, speed and destructive force(strength) and senses moderately while it is active. Upon contact, the flames will cause burns on whomever is hit dealing more damage than she normally would. 7 post limit

 

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 5:39 pm


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