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Hmm... I can see that...

Seriously, what would you do on Yavin IV, Cale?

By epilogue, I mean epilogue. As in there will probably be a grand total of about 5 posts to make up the Epilogue.

The battle ends, but the last chapter will continue on with a lot of dialogue in space to make sure you have enough time to tie up any loose ends.

I figure you ahve about 5 days to finish your stories up. But plan on ending them soon please.

Repair ships, bury the dead ...

yeah, starts out, soldiers behind cover at the base in stealth suits, leiutenant giving them last minute-briefing (quiet part). suddenly there's a flare, and they're all ordered up. then they proceed to run up the steep hill in their stealth armor, as machineguns take them down one by one. as it slows suddenly into suspense, the focus character trips and falls on his stomach, then, with the tense strings, his friend next to him gets shot and falls dead at his side.

it picks up, and he gets up, scrambling to his feet, and continues his race, joining the others in the mad dash. others fall beside him, some take out their rifles and start shooting in vain at the bunker as they run.

cut to focus character, running as fast as he can, gun slapping at his hip.

then cut to point of view of the bunker, the soldiers inside call loudly to each other, lining up shots, pointing.

eye view of a gunner, following soldiers and bringing them down to the music. then follow bullet to running soldier, camera stops in profile of soldier getting torn apart by bulletfire.

cut back to focus character. still running, getting closer, scrambling, panting, less around him, and they fall one by one (again to the music).

finally, medium shot of focus running towards the camera, getting rifle in hand, somehow dodging bulletfire, getting close.

cut to side angle view of focus, rapidly raises rifle, cut to muzzle of grenade launcher in rifle as it fires into the slit in the bunker.

cut to long shot of bunker, exploding, smoke coming out.

cut to focus soldier medium shot, lowering weapon, leaning down, close up of face, focusing eyes

cut to slit of bunker, showing dead bodies lumped inside

medium shot of focus soldier, turning around, leaning against the bunker, sliding down, exhausted, looking down the hill

pan view of hill, looking down. dead soldiers lie everywhere, bloody masses, though some scream or moan faintly

close shot of focus soldier, taking off helmet, loses grip and lets it fall

profile of focus, helmet falls next to him

face of focus, turning to look, camera follows gaze, sees dead body hanging out of slit, its skin burnt off

cut to focus soldier, stares, turns away, buries face in hands.


yeah, that's what i see in 'attacking a star destroyer'

Star Destroyers. Fighting them.
eh, not really a good idea.

I'm thinking, so far, most of Chidee's convoys are going to travelling in packs. The regular cargo ships might carry a very small wing of fighters, and they'd be accompanied by a warship or two, crammed with ungodly numbers of fighters.
He's going to have some to and from...well, Telti and Mustafar for sure, probably Nemodia, possibly Coruscant (assuming he bribes the right people; most likely the same people he bribes regularly anyway), at least.

Feel free to raid Drako's convoys and stuff though.
They're around Mandalore and the like I would assume, and I'm sure you can get something goo-oh, wait, Mandalore's a worthless planet, good for nothing but breeding barbarians.
Ah well, I'm sure the scrap from the ships would come in handy.

see ya.