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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:51 pm
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Could... You look at my Jutsu for me? I've been waiting for a while..
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:40 pm
Kirito - SAO
Jutsu Name: Shunpo Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time. Shunpo is a Space/Time Ninjutsu of sorts where when the user leaps, they will jump into a different dimension, and when the feet touch the ground, they return back into the current world. Requirements: None. Range: N/a
Jutsu Name: Rikujōkōrō Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams. Requirements: None. Range: Target
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi Rank: S Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Envelops the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. It has the power to distort both space and time. Requirements: None Range: Around target.
Jutsu Name: Sōkatsui Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, blue chakra at a target with high damage and wide area. Requirements: None Range: 100Feet for a normal clan member, but for the clan Head, who has mastered all, this technique could range to a mile.
As you are aware, those techniques are denied due to being bleach. sorry This one however, if you would still like it, needs some clarification.
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Character: Kirito Uchiha Technique Name: Fuuton: Kaze Senbon [Wind Release: Wind Needle] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Description: After performing certain handseals the user will accumulate chakra into their mouth. With enough chakra control the user can spit out several senbon-shaped wind projectiles (30-50). The power behind these senbon are greater than that of normal. They can pierce through the trunks of trees rather easily, so just imagine what they do to a body. Not only that, they travel at greater velocity as well.
We will add a few things you need to add: -due to the speed and power of the jutsu, the needles will be visible due to the disruption in the air channel and vectors it creates. -requires a good deal of hand seals to perform, meaning this jutsu is not instantaneously cast.
and here is some clerification we need: -what "firing modes" does the jutsu use? Is it a rapid fire like a machine gun, scatter shot like a shotgun, or are both mods usible and choosable by the user? -also, we will need a distance that the jutsu no longer becomes effective. Please take into consideration the firing modes you would choose.
Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:42 pm
wolfbain001
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Could... You look at my Jutsu for me? I've been waiting for a while..
please repost them. it makes approval easier
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:47 pm
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Character: Kira Katonami Technique Name: Kageton: Shadoo yugami Rank: D Type: CLAN - Nara Element: Kageton (Shadow release) Description: The members of the nara clan can manipulate their shadows along the ground at will. They cannot lift their shadows off the ground with this technique alone, though, she can connect with other shadows. When connected to another person's shadow, they can telepathically share information, whether the other person is of the clan or not. Restrictions:Can only go as far as the Nara's shadow can reach. This includes merging with other shadows along their path to increase their distance.
Character: Kira Katonami Technique Name: Kageton: Naitobijon Rank: Passive Type: CLAN - Nara Element: Kageton (Shadow release) Description: This passive ability allows the Nara clan user to see just as well when in a dark place as during the day. Restrictions: They can see ONLY as good as during the day. Ergo, should their eyesight be poor, or should the Nara be blind or have a vision impairment, that is how good they will see at night.
Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 3:03 pm
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Character: Kira Katonami Technique Name: Kageton: Shadoo yugami Rank: D Type: CLAN - Nara Element: Kageton (Shadow release) Description: The members of the nara clan can manipulate their shadows along the ground at will. They cannot lift their shadows off the ground with this technique alone, though, she can connect with other shadows. When connected to another person's shadow, they can telepathically share information, whether the other person is of the clan or not. Restrictions:Can only go as far as the Nara's shadow can reach. This includes merging with other shadows along their path to increase their distance.
Character: Kira Katonami Technique Name: Kageton: Naitobijon Rank: Passive Type: CLAN - Nara Element: Kageton (Shadow release) Description: This passive ability allows the Nara clan user to see just as well when in a dark place as during the day. Restrictions: They can see ONLY as good as during the day. Ergo, should their eyesight be poor, or should the Nara be blind or have a vision impairment, that is how good they will see at night.
oh those are still in review. we shall get to you shortly ^^
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:11 pm
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Kirito - SAO
Jutsu Name: Shunpo Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time. Shunpo is a Space/Time Ninjutsu of sorts where when the user leaps, they will jump into a different dimension, and when the feet touch the ground, they return back into the current world. Requirements: None. Range: N/a
Jutsu Name: Rikujōkōrō Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams. Requirements: None. Range: Target
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi Rank: S Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Envelops the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. It has the power to distort both space and time. Requirements: None Range: Around target.
Jutsu Name: Sōkatsui Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, blue chakra at a target with high damage and wide area. Requirements: None Range: 100Feet for a normal clan member, but for the clan Head, who has mastered all, this technique could range to a mile.
As you are aware, those techniques are denied due to being bleach. sorry This one however, if you would still like it, needs some clarification.
Quote:
Character: Kirito Uchiha Technique Name: Fuuton: Kaze Senbon [Wind Release: Wind Needle] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Description: After performing certain handseals the user will accumulate chakra into their mouth. With enough chakra control the user can spit out several senbon-shaped wind projectiles (30-50). The power behind these senbon are greater than that of normal. They can pierce through the trunks of trees rather easily, so just imagine what they do to a body. Not only that, they travel at greater velocity as well.
We will add a few things you need to add: -due to the speed and power of the jutsu, the needles will be visible due to the disruption in the air channel and vectors it creates. -requires a good deal of hand seals to perform, meaning this jutsu is not instantaneously cast.
and here is some clerification we need: -what "firing modes" does the jutsu use? Is it a rapid fire like a machine gun, scatter shot like a shotgun, or are both mods usible and choosable by the user? -also, we will need a distance that the jutsu no longer becomes effective. Please take into consideration the firing modes you would choose.
Scratching them all.
Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:21 pm
Kirito - SAO
Yo-ko
Kirito - SAO
Jutsu Name: Shunpo Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time. Shunpo is a Space/Time Ninjutsu of sorts where when the user leaps, they will jump into a different dimension, and when the feet touch the ground, they return back into the current world. Requirements: None. Range: N/a
Jutsu Name: Rikujōkōrō Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams. Requirements: None. Range: Target
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi Rank: S Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Envelops the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. It has the power to distort both space and time. Requirements: None Range: Around target.
Jutsu Name: Sōkatsui Rank: A Element: Maruton Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Fires a burst of super condensed, blue chakra at a target with high damage and wide area. Requirements: None Range: 100Feet for a normal clan member, but for the clan Head, who has mastered all, this technique could range to a mile.
As you are aware, those techniques are denied due to being bleach. sorry This one however, if you would still like it, needs some clarification.
Quote:
Character: Kirito Uchiha Technique Name: Fuuton: Kaze Senbon [Wind Release: Wind Needle] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Description: After performing certain handseals the user will accumulate chakra into their mouth. With enough chakra control the user can spit out several senbon-shaped wind projectiles (30-50). The power behind these senbon are greater than that of normal. They can pierce through the trunks of trees rather easily, so just imagine what they do to a body. Not only that, they travel at greater velocity as well.
We will add a few things you need to add: -due to the speed and power of the jutsu, the needles will be visible due to the disruption in the air channel and vectors it creates. -requires a good deal of hand seals to perform, meaning this jutsu is not instantaneously cast.
and here is some clerification we need: -what "firing modes" does the jutsu use? Is it a rapid fire like a machine gun, scatter shot like a shotgun, or are both mods usible and choosable by the user? -also, we will need a distance that the jutsu no longer becomes effective. Please take into consideration the firing modes you would choose.
Scratching them all.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:43 pm
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Character: Kira Katonami Technique Name: Kageton: Shadoo yugami Rank: D Type: CLAN - Nara Element: Kageton (Shadow release) Description: The members of the nara clan can manipulate their shadows along the ground at will. They cannot lift their shadows off the ground with this technique alone, though, she can connect with other shadows. When connected to another person's shadow, they can telepathically share information, whether the other person is of the clan or not. Restrictions:Can only go as far as the Nara's shadow can reach. This includes merging with other shadows along their path to increase their distance.
Character: Kira Katonami Technique Name: Kageton: Naitobijon Rank: Passive Type: CLAN - Nara Element: Kageton (Shadow release) Description: This passive ability allows the Nara clan user to see just as well when in a dark place as during the day. Restrictions: They can see ONLY as good as during the day. Ergo, should their eyesight be poor, or should the Nara be blind or have a vision impairment, that is how good they will see at night.
Kageton: Shadoo yugami: This technqiue is Denied on grounds that it is overpowered, and too similar (and resembles) the Yamanaka and their telepathic abilities.
Kageton: Naitobijon: This technique is approved
Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 9:30 pm
Character: Bellatrix Spectre Technique Name: Song of Storms Rank: B Type: Origami || Ninjutsu Element: Fuuton || Bloodline Description:By activating this technique while Paper Shuriken is active. An origami clansmen with the wind affinity can wrap the present shuriken in a case of wind. Extending their blades reach to a foot radius, as well as drastically increasing their capacity for cutting.
Character: Bellatrix Spectre Technique Name: Song of Derivation Rank: C Type: Origami Element: Bloodline Description:An expansion on the ability to create paper. By being near wood, an Origami clansmen can transform the wood into paper. Allowing them to use it for their own means.
Character: Bellatrix Spectre Technique Name: Song of Dysentery Rank: C Type: Origami Element: Bloodline Description:Rather than forming into butterflies, the Origami Clansmen will make small locusts with razor sharp teeth. Sending them out in swarms to attempt and devour an opponent. These locusts are incredibly lethal as well as agile, being able to dart around like little bullets. When a locust reaches the target it will instantly begin boring into the flesh.
Character: Bellatrix Spectre Technique Name: Song of Devastation Rank: C Type: Origami Element: Bloodline Description:The ability of the origami clansmen to cause paper creations of theirs already active to explode into spike bombs. Bursting in an instant and impaling whatever is near with foot long spikes. The spikes themselves are four sided, rather than rounded, each edge being made razor sharp for maximum efficiency. The spikes are six inches long.
Technique Name: Harmony of Lost Soulds Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu || Genjutsu Element: Maruton Description:Bellatrix being both a Genjutsu user as well as a musician has learned to adapt chakra to her voice to use nin/genjutsu. It is so prone to the point that she can feel invading waves of chakra that would mesh with her voice. ((Like other genjutsu being used)). The feel causes her voice to vibrate in a unique way, allowing her to release chakra as powerful as the hidden source of chakra and shatter it completely without having to worry about its existence. This applies mostly to genjutsu but can be used to block out other genjutsu-like effects.
Character: Tekkou Terrozaki Technique Name: Passionate Rain Rank: B Training Type: Bukijutsu Element: None Description: After learning how to extend themselves into the atmosphere in a sense (Insight Rain), they further advance this by focusing on a single target. Once that happens he is able to drown out his surroundings completely but at the same time he is able to fully focus on his target. This allows him more awareness when interacting with his target.
Insight Rain
Rank: B : : Training Description: The user will practice extending themselves into the atmosphere, in a sense. After much dedication, the user develops the ability to sense hostile intent in the immediate area. As to where, however, they cannot be sure.
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