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 Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:17 am
Ugh...
Well, as I've already said, Id've appreciated it if you would have stayed away from Time/Space jutsu...
A-anyway...
The distance is too large, as you've made note of.
I'd say like 100 yards at genin, at an increase of 50 yards per rank...
And, atop my first note, there any way I could get you to just make this a high speed movement / organic morphing technique, or something along those lines?
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:28 am
I'm unsure. High speed would be impossible for Jack. He's more mental than physical. And I remembered the time, I forgot the space xd Hm...Organic morphin? Perhaps his body becomes ash, which then fades to microscopic levels, and then moves to another location? Then basically pulls himself together?
Would that even work?
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:34 am
*Shrug*
I was just thinking he'd scatter himself into ashes or whatever, then rebuild himself at the allotted location...
I used to use techniques like that all the time.
More commonly, Wind Form and Shadow Form, but that's just me personally.
You've gotta assemble a good amount of restrictions, but it's possible. =/
I could do so, if you'd like.
And, before I utterly forget, you did see the learning restrictions for the classes, right?
> _ >
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:48 am
YEs I did. There will be a total of like 4 ninjutsu every on my character. Most will be Genjutsu.
And Alright. That's what I mean it was doing here. He scatters himself into ash, and reforms elsewhere. I just went in depth as to how it was done. I'll change the distance.
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:50 am
Lanfaer
Character: Jack Harren Snipe
Technique Name: Scattering of the Ash
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Non Element
Description: This jutsu is extremely odd, for when others see it in action they immediately think it is a Genjutsu. By forming two handseals, the Rat and then the Tiger, at the user's discretion their body will scatter into flaming ash that will slowly burn away to nothing. Now, this is why others think it is a Genjutsu and a misdirection jutsu, though the truth is far different. It moves a person from one location to another. The location of arrival must be chosen before the jutsu is activated, and in that location ash will fall in a small cloud, which will then reform into the user. This jutsu cannot be used inside of combat except to escape. The distance of transportation is 150 yards as a genin, and it goes up by 50 yards per rank.
There are more on the way, but this is the first. I'm aware that the distance might be extreme, so I defer to your judgment. I realize dislike how short the distance is, but I can work with it. I'll just make a better version for it later on!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:04 am
Character: Jack Harren Snipe
Technique Name: The Departed's Retribution
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: In order to use this technique, Jack must have already summoned haze clones, as many as he can. However, instead of them being copies of himself the images take on the appearance of shadowy humanoids. Now, then, Jack can use this jutsu. By forming the handsigns Rat-Ox-Horse-Bird the faces and bodies of the Haze Clones are altered. They now appear as the most important people in the targets' lives who had died, whether the most loved or hated, and they speak of how horrible the target is, bringing up forgotten crimes and misdeeds, failed missions and such, in order to assault the psyche of the targets. After the faces have fully formed, the Haze clones vanish, leaving the idea that the shades from the Haze had been the souls and minds of those who were dead.
Length: This particular Gejutsu lasts as long as Jack keeps the Bird handsign up.
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:14 am
[ Scatter Ash ]
Okay.
[ Retribution ]
Not particularly sure how you'd manage to make them speak of things your character probably wouldn't know of, but okay. o_-
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:18 am
well, i thought of that. Its THEIR minds that supply that. Jack wouldn't even here what the things are saying xD Thanks!
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:36 pm
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Kuzuryusen (Nine Headed Dragon Flash)
Rank: A
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Attack learned before the most powerful succession technique. Strikes with the sword nine times on the 9 vital points, head, right leg, left leg, right arm, left arm, between the legs, the chest, right shoulder, and left shoulder, making this move virtually impossible to block.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Kogarashi Tsumuji Arashi
Rank: A
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: First he starts off turning around and doing one hit, then jumps and hits again, then uses the turning momentum to go into a spin and slicing again. Spin goes vertically, not horizontally.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Ryutsuishosen (Dragon Hammer Rising Slash)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Combo of Ryutsuisen and Ryushosen. Perfromed when opponent is coming down from above, Ryutsuisen first, jumping up in the air really high and then strikes down hard from above. Then Ryushosen, Rises up from ground, using all force in an uppercut, hitting vital points; causing double damage.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Ryukansen Arashi (Wind Dragon Rising Slash Storm)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Lunges toward enemy using a very powerful twist of the body doing a sideways slash.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Soryusen (Paired Dragon Flash)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Paired attack with sword and sheath. If sword is blocked, sheath comes in and hits enemy.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Shihara Dori
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Defensive technique in which user grabs enemies sword in their own sheath and counters with their sword.
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Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:25 pm
Aheh...
They pretty much all need a bit more of a description. ^ ^;
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Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:40 pm
Character: Akio Satetsu
Technique Name: Iron Master.
Rank: E-S
Type: Bloodline - Passive
Element: Iron.
Description: Iron Master is, simply put, training Akio has done to better master the base manipulation of his bloodline abilities. Namely, the iron sand itself. With each rank trained, Akio has better control. Thus, he lessens the strain on his body, mind, and chakra. [E would be a minuscule amount, where S would be massive amounts. Each level must be trained before attained.]
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Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:42 pm
Shinsua Aheh...
They pretty much all need a bit more of a description. ^ ^;
Thats about all they do, lol. Ill try.
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Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:52 pm
[ Donut ]
Approved.
[ Qastor ]
S-sorry.
Please, try. ^ ^;;
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 8:57 am
Character: Naruu Satetsu
Technique Name: Sakura Kaika (Blooming Cherry Blossoms)
Rank: B-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Iron
Description: Much like how Deidara detonates his clay creations, Naruu does so in the same way, thus the explosion is complimented by molten iron (~2200+ degrees fahrenheit), which can still be controlled as normal. The explosions mimic Deidara's own C1, C2, C3, and C4, including the objects crafted in order to achieve said ranks of explosions.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:32 am
Sooo...
B = C1
A = C2
S = C3
S+ = C4?
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