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 Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:16 pm
Rofl... stop stop! *starts blushing* redface
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:17 pm
Cobra, I love you!!!
*rubs hands together*
*evil gleam*
*cracks knuckles*
GRAMMAR FIXING TIME!!!
BWHAHAHAHA!!!
>D
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:18 pm
LadyShirahime93 Call me crazy, but I like RPing as if it was really happening, and not a whole bunch of super powerful people on a drug high. =/
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:19 pm
Cobra_X LadyShirahime93 Call me crazy, but I like RPing as if it was really happening, and not a whole bunch of super powerful people on a drug high. =/ She's saying that it'd be unrealistic for her to dodge such an attack. Simply put, because her RPC is a Genin, and doesn't have any real combat experience. I'd be best if I scrapped that RP sample and made a new one. xD
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:22 pm
LadyShirahime93 White Water Lilly lol, hey Shirahime! smile How are you? Lucky save back there at the volcano eh? A broken femur would've been really bad. You wouldn't be able to travel back to sand. crying I'm perfectly, perfect! Thanks for asking! I got asked if I wanted to graduate high school a year earlier. I'm not sure if I'm happy or not about this yet, though. *glomps* How are you? Indeed it was a lucky save. I actually had no idea how I was going to get out of that. O_O The only thing I could think of, was that out of reaction she took a step back; but Sai probably would have got her anyway. And it's not like I could have said "She jumped out of the way before the kick hit her." simply because that would be Godmoding... and I'm not a fan of that. Call me crazy, but I like RPing as if it was really happening, and not a whole bunch of super powerful people on a drug high. =/ lol drug high, that's a nice way to put it. Anyways congrates on the early graduation thing? (Should you be happy...maybe, you're leaving school earlier. smile ) I agree with you, being able to imagine the scene as it happens makes it more realistic and easy to post some sort of proper response. Good luck with the editing Shira! Oh and Cobra...you're right, I really should stop filling up your ego before you explode mad with power...oh wait, you're already near exploding when it comes to the Nameless Village guild. Btw, I just go my next map assignment from Death. We're planning on expanding the wilderness. Hopefully I can have the draft up within a few days.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:25 pm
Cobra_X LadyShirahime93 Call me crazy, but I like RPing as if it was really happening, and not a whole bunch of super powerful people on a drug high. =/ Like people who are too powerful for their character. For example, if Freya hit Sai and I said she broke a rib, that would be a "super powerful person on a drug high." simply because that would be too powerful for her character; thus equals God moding.. However, Sai breaking the leg of a genin seems perfectly logical, because that's his character, and his character states that he's strong. Get my drift? Also, I need help on this one, in the Drunken boxing thingy: "By drinking great quantities of spirits"I looked that up, but all I could find was stuff referring to "spirit, souls, ghosts" yadda, yadda. I'm sure it refers to alcohol; but it's the type he might being trying to say, that's got me lost. I don't know what he's trying to say, simply because I don't pay attention to alcohol. ^^'
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:26 pm
Yeah, no stroking my ego... it's big enough as it is.
Also, I'm not the one with any power over there. You do at least 10x the work I do.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:28 pm
White Water Lilly LadyShirahime93 White Water Lilly lol, hey Shirahime! smile How are you? Lucky save back there at the volcano eh? A broken femur would've been really bad. You wouldn't be able to travel back to sand. crying I'm perfectly, perfect! Thanks for asking! I got asked if I wanted to graduate high school a year earlier. I'm not sure if I'm happy or not about this yet, though. *glomps* How are you? Indeed it was a lucky save. I actually had no idea how I was going to get out of that. O_O The only thing I could think of, was that out of reaction she took a step back; but Sai probably would have got her anyway. And it's not like I could have said "She jumped out of the way before the kick hit her." simply because that would be Godmoding... and I'm not a fan of that. Call me crazy, but I like RPing as if it was really happening, and not a whole bunch of super powerful people on a drug high. =/ lol drug high, that's a nice way to put it. Anyways congrates on the early graduation thing? (Should you be happy...maybe, you're leaving school earlier. smile ) I agree with you, being able to imagine the scene as it happens makes it more realistic and easy to post some sort of proper response. Good luck with the editing Shira! Thanks! I've already corrected like, six things already. And I haven't even got into the Drunken Boxing moves yet. rofl
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:28 pm
Can't wait to get this second RPC rolling. O<
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:37 pm
Cobra_X Yeah, no stroking my ego... it's big enough as it is.
Also, I'm not the one with any power over there. You do at least 10x the work I do. Yeah, well maybe, but you give better advise. I'm just there to make sure the guild's running smoothly. Anyways, waiting for your post at the library. (I should stop using this fourm to discuss about the Nameless village guild. I feel bad I'm using another guild's chatfourm to discuss about another guild)
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:39 pm
LadyShirahime93 However, Sai breaking the leg of a genin seems perfectly logical, because that's his character, and his character states that he's strong. LadyShirahime93 Also, I need help on this one, in the Drunken boxing thingy: "By drinking great quantities of spirits"I looked that up, but all I could find was stuff referring to "spirit, souls, ghosts" yadda, yadda. I'm sure it refers to alcohol; but it's the type he might being trying to say, that's got me lost. I don't know what he's trying to say, simply because I don't pay attention to alcohol. ^^'
...according to the articles below, Sake is NOT a spirit, according to the classical definition. (and since Sake is the main alcoholic beverage around in the Naruto Universe) You should probably just change the word 'Spirits' to 'Alcohol' in all cases.
Beer and wine are limited to a maximum alcohol content of about 15% ABV, as most yeasts cannot reproduce when the concentration of alcohol is above this level; consequently, fermentation ceases at that point.
The term spirit refers to a distilled beverage that contains no added sugar and has at least 20% ABV. Popular spirits include brandy, fruit brandy (aka eau-de-vie / Schnapps), gin, rum, tequila, vodka, and whisky.
Distilled beverages that are bottled with added sugar and added flavorings, such as Grand Marnier, Frangelico, and American schnapps, are liqueurs. In common usage, the distinction between spirits and liqueurs is widely unknown or ignored; consequently all alcoholic beverages other than beer and wine are generally referred to simply as spirits.
Fortified wines are created by adding a distilled beverage (often brandy) to a wine.Sake is also referred to in English as rice wine. However, unlike true wine, in which alcohol is produced by fermenting the sugar naturally present in fruit, sake is made through a brewing process more like that of beer. To make beer or sake, the sugar needed to produce alcohol must first be converted from starch. But the brewing process for sake differs from beer brewing as well, notably in that for beer, the conversion of starch to sugar and sugar to alcohol occurs in two discrete steps, but with sake they occur simultaneously. Additionally, alcohol content also differs between sake, wine, and beer. Wine generally contains 9–16% alcohol and most beer is 3–8%, whereas undiluted sake is 18–20% alcohol, although this is often lowered to around 15% by diluting the sake with water prior to bottling.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:45 pm
*stares at above post*
burning_eyes ...whoa...that's alot of detailed information you got there Cobra.
Good work and you did that all in what? less than 10 minutes.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:48 pm
ღღღღ   ............................... ................................
No offense to Nark if you read this, but you left out words, added a lot of Wasted Words (which means, words that are in a sentence that doesn't need to be there.)
To top that off, you switch a lot of words. Like it's for its; don't for doesn't; and who's for whose. (For example)
You need to pay more attention to Plurals/Possessives. The apostrophe throws a lot of people off, but still, in the end it can be really confusing for people who are reading your writings.
For example: "Then shouldn't it's toy mean the toy belongs to it?" That is the same as saying "Then shouldn't it is toy mean the toy belongs to it?"
Pretty retarded sounding, huh?
Instead it should read: "Then shouldn't its toy mean the toy belongs to it?"
If you get confused, trying reading the sentence with an "is" after the "it" if it sounds stupid, then don't use an apostrophe.
And you need to use more punctuation, and capitalization. And at times, you need to forgo some punctuation. I noticed you use a lot of hyphens. At sometimes, it's good, but at other times, it's not necessary. A hyphen is used to establish a break in the sentence; something completely off topic from the original thought. Like when I wrote "On one hand she was worried about the men (Sai and Akio) from before and the Akatsuki- Kai...was it?- and what they planned on doing to innocent people." The hyphen was used to show a completely different thought (in this case, it was the suggestion of Kai's name) from the original sentence structure.
...........................................................................ஐ✬
Everything falls apart
Even the people that never frown
Eventually break down
(The sacrifice of hiding in a lie)
Everything has to end sometime
We're out of time, to watch it all unwind
The sacrifice is never knowing why
I never walked away
Why I played myself this way
Now I see, you were testing me
And that pushes me away.
ஐ✬
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:48 pm
Hello every body what you guys been up to?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:51 pm
Have to go to bed, it's near 10 PM. ._.;;
Later y'all. Hope you have fun while I sleep, anxious to wake up and read all of this. And well, go emo over my life situation.
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